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SB has a larger audience in general, though my impression is that SV's Quest section is more active.
I'm sick and tired of these quests getting reset, In Media Res all the way. New potential players can just make do with a link back to this thread (since it's in the SWF section it should be fine) and maybe a quick summary at the start.
"garbed"You could barely make out the figure of darkly grabbed ninja throwing a dagger into the shadow of grey jester, who you were pretty sure had blitzed you and slammed the blade of their damn scythe into your skull just after you had to told your champions the plan.
This is why I shouldn't write things while still technically at work. Work makes my inner writer want to curl up and cry."garbed"
Remove "to"
I don't see the point of playing coy with all the characters' names like this. It doesn't make this any more accessible or less confusing for new readers, while previous players already know who they all are so it doesn't matter.
I think just having an upfront summary of the Quest so far before starting with the opening of the battle works best. Plus it doesn't have Do-Gi just standing there and letting the enemy charge in and insta-kill him without even bothering to transform into his combat form.
"think"Hmmm, you should consider recruiting some male Champions as well, at this rate people might get the wrong idea and thing being a Champion is an exclusively female thing.
Well, I could also just put it into a Data/Lore Book thing under an Informational Thread-mark, which SV has."think"
Yeah, this looks much better as a recap/introduction. Doesn't quite explain everything, like the faction/realm that Do-Gi actually came from, or that he's basically a Mascot, or what the Accursed actually are. But we shouldn't expect everything to be covered by a summary that's supposed to be short, and anyone who really wants to understand it should just follow the link/directions back to this thread to catch up on all the explanations and events.
Of course I will, it would be kind of a dick move to not do that.