Starfox5
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Yes. Corrected.
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Add a comma and 'or' after 'parts'.They usually eat the body, cut off parts sacrifice their victims in rituals.
Trailing comma.
Comma should be a semi-colon.
Comma should be a semi-colon.The whole barricade was shaking now, the door had been broken down.
'she'd known'she knew someone at work had been talking to a tabloid after that article on page six.
'who' should be 'which'.Not even when she had to rearrange her robe, who had slipped a little.
Add a comma and 'or' after 'parts'.
Trailing comma.
Comma should be a semi-colon.
Comma should be a semi-colon.
'she'd known'
'who' should be 'which'.
Capitalization error.
Pronoun overloading.
Thanks, corrected.
"I didn't mean it that way!" Why was everyone thinking the worst of him today? "For the record: I didn't say that I shared those sexist and archaic views. But, seeing as your father is not as young as I am, he might have a different opinion on this subject." What father wouldn't? Rick thought.
"I don't know how I can help you with that, honey," Rick said. "I heard the schools in New York frown on press-ganging students." Though he was certain that a few principals had thought about it when competing for the best sports talents.
Thanks, corrected.
In some ways, she was in more danger before they met, because she didn't know that the monsters were out there, and didn't have a Slayer hanging around as back-up.
'Provisionally'.
I think she did. She's a Slayer."Well, the loremaster certainly isn't modelled after you, but the private detective… there's a certain resemblance." She grinned.
"What? He doesn't look like me at all. And he's younger than her!"
"But how he acts in the bed scene..." Her grin fit the dress now. All too well.
As Kate finished her glass and then went over to pose with Vi, Castle really hoped that his Slayer hadn't heard that remark.
I probably spelled it wrong, but you had Richard give the Willow-expy (in 'Facing the Old One,' I think) a strange name that started with 'W,' and I think had 'lyn' in it.
I probably spelled it wrong, but you had Richard give the Willow-expy (in 'Facing the Old One,' I think) a strange name that started with 'W,' and I think had 'lyn' in it.
'undue'
Thanks, corrected.