Slayer Anderson
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Dawn Summers and Richard Castle?
Hmm...
Hmm...
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I actually preferred the original. Though if you want something a little tighter:
I actually preferred the original. Though if you want something a little tighter:
A cheery 'Found it!' from below told everyone she wasn't hurt, though.
... oh dear.
Not having watched any of this, I have no idea how much of this you're pulling out of your ass, and how much is canon.
But seeing it through the viewpoint of my favourite fictional mystery writer, I'm enjoying the heck out of it.
Okay.I have stuck a bit closer to canon so far than usual for me, but this should be original. Unless I misremember the series.
Okay.
I will clarify my above comment. I am up to date on Castle, and I like the show (and Nathan Fillion) quite a lot. He was awesome in Firefly, he was awesome (as a bad good guy) in Doctor Horrible, and he's awesome in Castle.
I know of Buffy, but I'm not really versed in it.
Yup yup. Wanted to make clear in case anyone else mistook me for a Castle n00b. "Well, see, he's a mystery writer who gets called in when a copycat murders someone using a method from one of his books ..." Yeah, nope. I got that.I got that. I was just saying that the possession and attack should be original.
He'd have been dead within minutes. And not even in the 'what a way to go!' way (i.e. overexertion & dehydration) - getting beaten to a pulp because his partners have superstrength and no self-control would not be fun.Awww...no orgy?
Damn, and here I was hoping for a shift to the NSFW side of the forum. Oh well.
Awww...no orgy?
Damn, and here I was hoping for a shift to the NSFW side of the forum. Oh well.
He'd have been dead within minutes. And not even in the 'what a way to go!' way (i.e. overexertion & dehydration) - getting beaten to a pulp because his partners have superstrength and no self-control would not be fun.
I am more of a "tease and tell, don't show" writer anyway.
Correct. In addition to that, if they had done it that way, the consequences would have turned the story from "action and comedy with some drama" to "dark, angsty drama" rather quickly as Giles, Castle and the potentials have to deal with rape, unless the whole thing would have been played for laughs - and that would have been a tad too dark humor for the story.
An easy check for me is to switch the genders around, then ask myself if I still would want to write the scene into the story.
Point.He'd have been dead within minutes. And not even in the 'what a way to go!' way (i.e. overexertion & dehydration) - getting beaten to a pulp because his partners have superstrength and no self-control would not be fun.
go off (pretty sure that they'd make some sort of rude joke if this line was used)
second question mark should be a full stop."Rocket launchers are 'low-key'?" Rick asked, raising his eyebrows?
Typos:
go off (pretty sure that they'd make some sort of rude joke if this line was used)
second question mark should be a full stop.
he needs the vest with "WRITER" on the back, so people understand his mindset
Heh. Yes.He might use "WATCHER" this time - an inside joke the cops won't get.
So, we've got a season or two of Angel to go, but the most important question of all must now be asked.
Are the Buffy Comics canon for your fic?
...Please say no...
Angel takes a little while to hit its stride, but once it does it's quite goodNo. I hate the comics. Angel won't play much of a role either, if any at all. Never watched the show, and I don't like the main character much. If the finale of Angel happens, then Wolfram & Hart would probably get swarmed by an army of Slayers, problem solved.
Oh thank god. I'm of a similar opinion regarding both Angel the show and Angel the main character. He was...irritating enough when he was in BTVS, but when he got his own show? Urgh...the saving grace was the supporting cast, which let me ignore Angel enough to watch it...usually.No. I hate the comics. Angel won't play much of a role either, if any at all. Never watched the show, and I don't like the main character much. If the finale of Angel happens, then Wolfram & Hart would probably get swarmed by an army of Slayers, problem solved.
Holy shit. Did Castle just burn Wood alive with a fucking flamethrower? And then totally shrug it off? I mean yeah, concussion, but I think it would still fuck you up a bit, what with the screaming and the writhing in agony.
Oh thank god. I'm of a similar opinion regarding both Angel the show and Angel the main character. He was...irritating enough when he was in BTVS, but when he got his own show? Urgh...the saving grace was the supporting cast, which let me ignore Angel enough to watch it...usually.
The comics, though? Fuck the comics. The 'Seed of Wonder,' still makes me froth at the mouth a little. The only thing I enjoyed about the comics was the reveal of the supernatural, though I really didn't like how Buffy and the others, who had prevented major apocalypses, were branded as a terrorist organization.
Anyway, glad to see I can keep unreservedly liking this fic. Yay.