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Yang AlterThat Hunter alt Yang and Branwen Yang look amazing.
Someone accidentally tugs off her ahoge and unleashes Yang Alter, an aggressive sukeban bandit-princess type that gives zero shits.
Weiss: "XIAO-LONG! What are you wearing?!"
Yang, her blouse fully unbuttoned and wearing only sarashi wraps: "Yanno, I heard a chihuahua barking. I fucking hate chihuahuas; they're the most insecure type of mutt."
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Ruby working
Yang Burnout
Blake Only Fans
Weiss: "D-doctor?"
Ruby: "Fuh...fuh...family farm?"
Yang: "Family house? Vineyard?"
Blake: "Stability?"
All four: *panting*
Jaune: *puffs on his bubble pipe, looks up from his copy of War and Peace, and feels a shudder pass through him*
Who exactly is this? Did he somehow remove himself for existence trying to undo what had happened?And in the second between seconds a figure watched. Now sporting a pair of silver eyes that perfectly matched her own.
Tai doesn't know, since Raven was never supposed to be a maiden, maybe Raven nudged Qrow to be able to save Yang and Ruby when Yang went looking for Raven, and maybe she would have saved them if Qrow hadn't been able to? Her "you get one" thing was to justify her going in and saving Yang without breaking cover. I'm not sure that this is my favorite way of explaining Raven, but it works and could be done pretty well.-Another possible twist with Raven? She is deep undercover so she would get recruited by Salem and be Ozpin's agent right in Salem's court.
I must admit, I wanted her to take a bite of the flowers."Here," Cardin grunted again, "I got these stupid flowers and chocolates from... From my sister, and I don't know what to do with them. So... Here. You have them. They're your favorites... Right?"
R.I.P. Cardin Wincester, age 18Now she understood what was going on, and her other rabbit instincts came forward.
Ah, but was it? Seriously though, I kinda want to see something where Cardin was trying to bully Jaune out of Beacon because he thought Jaune was just going to die in the field, and the reason he immediately backed down after Forever Fall is because he realized he was wrong, and that Jaune was capable of being a proper hunter."Wait, so when you were bullying Jaune-?"
"That was different!" Cardin growled, his face an even brighter red, "He's a weakling loser who needed to know his place! You I uh... Um..."
Ooh! I really like this idea, and how everyone he loves has a presence there, even if in subtle ways.Jaune Arc has always felt out of step with the world.
It's something he's tried to ignore, even get therapy for but nothing seems to work, despite all the progress Goodwitch says he's making.
She's lying to us.
He still sometimes sees the shadows flicker with hints of white and baleful red on his lowest days, and sometimes at his most peaceful he'll see a weak glow of white or gold without a clear source.
Trust your instincts. You know the truth.
But regardless of his issues he's on his way to college. Beacon academy the best college in Vale.
There's still people to save.
He's got his stuff together, got his Nikos sneakers and his Valkyrie headphones packed up and ready to go.
Your friends need you.
He's on his way to living the dream (a bathroom without seven sisters!)...so why does it feel so wrong?
You need to break free Jaune.
Isn't this why you have the NSFW thread? Will there be anything from this series posted there ever, or will it stay SFW?Yeah they totally have sex. A LOT of it. But I can't say that on Spacebattles, just heavily imply it.
I think one of the things they should have focused on is that all of RWBY are prodigies, and aren't used to taking orders, and they're used to being the best around, which makes their teamwork suffer. JNPR, on the other hand, is the exact opposite. Pyrrha is absolutely a prodigy, but she's not used to leading, and in fact actively wants to avoid the spotlight, so she's not a challenge to Jaune's leader. Ren and Nora… it doesn't matter if they're prodigies or just have way more real-world experience than the others, because they haven't been compared to others like RWBY+P have been, and so don't have the same arrogance. And finally, Jaune is absolutely a prodigy, but he's years behind the others, which means he's not on the same level as any of the others yet. All of this combines to make JNPR weaker than RWBY in individual performance, but much more effective at working together.Good writers would have leaned into this: Into the strengths and weaknesses of the two teams and how Ruby and Jaune were learning and growing. Just accept that we have two protagonists in Ruby and Jaune and focus on that dynamic. Ruby is the eager young prodigy with great skill but who lacks real world experience, Jaune is the goof who just unlocked his Aura but has enormous potential, learns fast and has practical real world experience. These contrasts are fantastic for dramatic purposes and great character work. We needed Ruby to have some failures, just as Jaune did. We needed her to be overconfident. We needed her to be cocky and way too eager more. We needed her and Jaune talking more about their issues. Ruby's friction and frustration with her team should have been an ongoing issue, not something thrown in at Volume 9. Because that's organic drama and that makes things interesting!
I'd say that Menagerie would have the highest rate of semblance discovery and development on average, most notably in semblance evolutions, with Mistral tending to have, again, wild variance, with Atlas delving the least into them. Maybe the Schnee family semblance reflects those Atlesian ideals, and Atlas has other, less famous, hereditary semblances?So another idea I'd like for RWBY.
I'd like it if every academy treated aura different. Not just different techniques but entire different mindsets based off of the people and their cultures.
Like Atlas, the cold and scientific kingdom seeing aura as just another resource that's part of you, like muscles or brains. And having techniques that are cookie cutter. Simple, efficient, easy to learn, boring and rigid.
Mistral I guess would have the closest view to canon. The light of your soul and your inner strength made manifest. (I'm going with that since Pyrrha is Mistral and that's similar to the explanation she gave Jaune). Highly specialized and individualistic great diversity of techniques. Actual effectiveness varies HIGHLY. Many jealously guard techniques so they end up lost usually.
I could see vale ending up as sorta a middle ground of all of the ideals there could be, melting pot so everything ends up mixing and refining. It leads to better huntsmen but overall they have less of their own cultural identity or signature aura techniques.
I see menagerie ending up the most spiritual kingdom. Less analytical that Atlas on it's views of aura, more philosophy based. You have a shadow based semblance? What does that say about you as a person? They have the most introspective huntsmen making them the most stable (on average) but they also have the lowest amount since they don't have a official academy and they haven't been out to ground as long as the other kingdoms so their culture is still relatively fresh and new.
Thoughts?
I'd make it less individually potent, but wider range, so he can affect many targets at once across a greater distance, but can't just refill his own aura (or the rate at which it fills is reduced by each active buff.)CRWBY said that Jaune's Semblance essentially made him key to victory. With him, RWBY could defeat Salem... So they just had him NOT USE IT.
It's not like it would have made him the primary protagonist. Just one of many, like how it seemed to be at the start-An ensemble show. He's the WHITE MAGE, and he facilitates everyone else being able to beat the Big Bad. He's a bit like Zelda, or Aerith, or Yuna-The point is, he's a key part of the party but he's NOT the most important one. He's key, but not a Gary Stu.
There are multiple ways to make this Semblance work without breaking the universe. It takes time to master it, there are side effects to your Semblance and/or Aura being boosted that have to be trained and overcome, Jaune is casting from HP and it takes a toll on him: But simply not using it is emblematic of the laziness and ridiculousness of RWBY's writing in the later Volumes.
So, let's think of ways to use it properly to rewrite Volumes 7-9 to make sense. Like we aren't hacks.
Definitely, but there's another thing I find interesting: Salem rather ironically means "peace", and Salem's ultimate goal is death, which is something I doubt RT planned, but is neat.
Huh. I thought there was a desert theming, with Velvet being red velvet and Coco being chocolate. I do not remember at all who their teammates are.Velvet: Velveteen Bunny
Coco: Coco Chanel, wasn't a fashion name during 1930-40's Germany.
To put how inaccurate this is, I'm pretty sure Mulan fails the test. Once she goes into the army, I do not recall a single significant female character (because women aren't allowed in the army) and her conversations with her family are largely to set up the conflict between the traditional housewife life they think she should have and her own dreams. Or her father's injury and the war.Take two female characters in that medium- they must have names and significant role in the story- and see if they have a conversation about any topic on screen and see if there exists a single cinversation where they don't discuss anything about a male character then they pass the test.
Her reaction to Jaune's "short, sweet, and the ladies love it" is to bury her head in her hands and groan, because it reminds her that Jaune can be incredibly smooth, but only when he's not actually trying to be. She will also recognize his terrible attempts at wooing her for what they are, and likely set him straight.-Jaune runs into a disguises Weiss before the start of Beacon in Vale, and makes a much better first impression on her.
I love this idea! Does Ozma know? I imagine that Salem might watch over him, and maybe each time he reincarnates she offers him the choice to stop fighting, but he refuses to let go until she can come with, or maybe she could move on, but refuses until Ozma is free, since she blames herself for his state. Maybe she watches over his shoulder when she can, and maybe the reason the Silver Eyes are so important is because they can strike through Salem's immortal body to the Grimm inside. There is so much you can do with this idea, and it expands the whole Salem/Ozma conflict in interesting ways. Ozma began fighting Salem when the Grimm finally couldn't keep up the facade anymore. Maybe the Grimm were so interested in their daughters because they had aspects of Grimm to them, and they wanted to use that, which inadvertently revealed the truth to Ozma.After she fell on the Grimm pool, Salem's spirit left her mortal body.
Instead her mortal body became a host of many horrible types of Grimm but due to the curse of God Of Darkness, her body never erodes, maintaining full bodily functions but now a myriad of Ancient and potent Grimm piloting her body while her Soul wanders the EverAfter/Underworld, as she never really got closure.
She comes across a wounded warrior with fragile soul and a broken blade.
Perhaps this time, she can do something right.
After all, what is a Knight without a Maiden to give his oaths of chivalry to.
Who exactly is this? Did he somehow remove himself for existence trying to undo what had happened?
So, the Schnee family semblance is weird. Semblances are supposed to be a unique representation of the user's soul, so a hereditary semblance is kinda odd. My favorite explanation is that it has a tie to the concept of "legacy," and that's how the semblance gets "passed down". However, that got me thinking: Winter and Weiss grew up in stories of their grandfather, but what if Whitley didn't? Then the only Schnees he sees would be his mother, a woman who drinks her awareness away, his father, who is a manipulator that explicitly cares about his wife and children only as a means to more power, and his sisters, who as far as he's concerned want nothing to do with him. So, if Whitley has no legacy he wants to carry when he awakens his aura, what semblance does he get? You could do a crossover/expy, something entirely new, or you could make something based on the old hereditary semblance. Maybe instead of creating glyphs that produce any effect imaginable, he imbues materials with unique properties. This could make an interesting comparison with Ruby as well, where she uses engineering to make mundane materials do exceptional things, while he makes mundane materials have exceptional properties. You could make this reflect a desire to create something, to make the things around him into something more, or you could make it reflect a belief that the only things he can rely on are the things he makes himself. Alternatively, you could mirror the summoning aspect, and let him channel the skills, power, and maybe even the semblances of those who meet certain conditions. Maybe they have to be loyal to him, maybe they have to live him in some way, maybe their needs to be a strong bond of trust, or whatever else you want. This sets up parallels with Jaune, where Jaune empowers his team while Whitley is made more by them. This could reflect a perceived duty to represent those loyal to him, a belief that a leader should be capable in all ways, or a desire to be like the people he admires. On the darker side, it could reflect a fear that he needs to be the best, a lack of faith in himself, believing that someone else would do better in his place, or a fear that he will be left all alone, depending on how you do the details. In terms of strength, I think his semblance should be a step down from the traditional Schnee family semblance, as it doesn't have the same "weight" of legacy or the generations of people exploring every last aspect of it. What other directions could you take this, how might you use this to drive character development and the greater plot, and more specifically, how does this affect Whitley and his relationships with his family?
I really like this, and maybe you could make your own spin on the family semblance by making everyone have their own version. Weiss gets fast, aggressive attacks with self-enhancement and "champion" type summons, Winter gets area denial and armies of less individually potent summons.I wanna give him something that both reflects his heritage and shows how toxic things in his life are.
So. He has no control over his life, he can't keep his family together, and for a bit his sisters saw him as a manipulator.
So let's give him a manipulation semblance. Glyphs placed down by touch that can manipulate things. Like reshaping the floor or making a shield float around him.
But their true messed up potential is when they're applied to people.
Blake is in a horrible bind when she comes to Beacon, thanks to her team. Not only is she a hidden faunus, but her team leader reveals red-black wolf ears under her hood and the Schnee has the long flowing tail of an arctic fox. Making matters worse, their sister team's star member is a red fox faunus with both the ears and the tail of a vixen!
Surely she can bear it. Just a little.
That is, until she accidently blurts out that Ruby's not so bad for a Fido in earshot of both her team and JNPR...
Blake: "I'm not racist! I don't care that Weiss and Pyrrha are Reynards or that Ruby's a Fido!"
Nora: *is actually stunned speechless*
Cardin: "Holy shit."
Yang would swing first for Ruby
Yang is also a faunus, and she has a dragon's firebreath.Blake is in a horrible bind when she comes to Beacon, thanks to her team. Not only is she a hidden faunus, but her team leader reveals red-black wolf ears under her hood and the Schnee has the long flowing tail of an arctic fox. Making matters worse, their sister team's star member is a red fox faunus with both the ears and the tail of a vixen!
Surely she can bear it. Just a little.
That is, until she accidently blurts out that Ruby's not so bad for a Fido in earshot of both her team and JNPR...
Interesting. Especially sinceThink of it as a automated timeline correction system. Anyone who messes with time travel it erases their memories, corrects the timeline and pulls out the bit of them that led to them discovering a path to time travel.
But it can't just throw away those pieces so it integrates them into itself. Which has given it a identity of sorts but it's not actually a person.
That's also the reason Ruby got so many chances. The echoes all hoping that this time it works. But eventually it had to do its job.
I agree with Yang being explosive and then I think she'd turn into a bit of a sad drunk. I also think that ruby would be kinda unaffected by booze
Blake gets super apologetic when drunk and Weiss gets cuddly.
Ruby seems unaffected but in actuality the booze removes her filter.
Yang is a sad, but relatively functional drunk, Blake shows a shocking amount of self-loathing, Weiss is cuddly but also her own fear of being abandoned again come out (don't tell me this girl wouldn't have abandonment issues, even if not as bad as Yang), and Ruby acts similarly to normal,but without any filter, and has a shocking degree of nihilism to her (we're all going to die in the end, and probably not of old age, so let's have fun while it lasts type of attitude). Jaune begins to see how messed up all of them are, and is extremely concerned. Jaune himself can handle his alcohol with the best, and only gets slightly melancholic (post-fall) or nostalgic (Beacon).Everyone's drunk self would be fun to see.
Head canon - Jaune has SEVEN sisters. He knows how to handle drunk women.
Yang sobbing in Jaune's shirt "Don't abandon me" continues to sob hysterically.
Jaune - "I left for two minutes to use the bathroom"
They didn't even really give a good reason for Jaune to not heal her. If she'd been torn in half or something, Penny could have told him that it would take to long, if he could do it at all, and that by the time he'd have even been able to stabilize her, Cinder would probably have beaten and killed Weiss at that point.(WHY JAUNE KILLING PENNY?! WHY IS TRAUMA THE ONLY THING YOU CAN DO TO HIM?! JESUS!)