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Sure. I'll probably make a thread after the next chapter, since that'd make the story around 20,000 words in total.Angush I would love to see more of that but I don't check this thread very often. Could you add a link on your profile page next time you update it? That would be awesome. ^.^
There's not much to say, there's a few technical issues, but nothing major.
I am wondering why Taylor is being so trusting though.
From the looks of it, that might be explained in a section prior to the posted excerpt.Best go into that then, even just a one line blurb. Otherwise it will strike people as odd.
From the looks of it, that might be explained in a section prior to the posted excerpt.
I ask this question a lot. To date, I've never been given any answer, let alone a good one.
I ask this question a lot. To date, I've never been given any answer, let alone a good one.
Not every writer is equally skilled in every facet of writing: worldbuilding, plotting, characters, execution, technicals, etc. CINOs are a useful crutch for people who are shit at designing their own characters, just as stations of canon are a crutch for people who are shit at plotting and fanfiction itself is a crutch for people who are shit at worldbuilding.It's even stranger when the person acknowledges that it is one, so it would be easier to just create a new character than having to justify everything.
...Not that the term CINO really means anything in the context of AUs and divergences - by far the most common types of Worm fic. A character who experiences a wholly different series of events than their story's canon will naturally develop in a different direction than they did in canon. This is just common sense. The scenario to watch out for is when a character at the start of an alleged single-divergence, or (yes) anywhere in a canon-compliant, fic is radically OOC. Otherwise, who cares.
One possible reason is because a lot of readers react better to a CiNO than they do an OC. Mary Sue witchhunts have lead to a tendency for fanfic-reading audiences to tear apart OCs with the slightest provocation, while an OoC canon character is given a lot more slack, even if they've been changed up to the point that they're almost unrecognizable.
One possible reason is because a lot of readers react better to a CiNO than they do an OC. Mary Sue witchhunts have lead to a tendency for fanfic-reading audiences to tear apart OCs with the slightest provocation, while an OoC canon character is given a lot more slack, even if they've been changed up to the point that they're almost unrecognizable.
WoG? In as much as that's possible?Fanfic-of-a-fanfic idea: How would Zach (from Amelia) have responded to a power that was derived from Lung, the way his Amelia-canon power seems to have been derived from Oni Lee? What sort of tactics would he use with it?
Huh. Kind of like Shield from Sidekick Girl (link goes to the first page, for those who haven't read it yet), just with a speed boost instead of an intelligence boost? Interesting.WoG? In as much as that's possible?
Amelia!Zach triggered under a combination of long term stress, failure to protect those he loved, and immediate violence. He also has a certain level of self disgust that he hides behind humor. His power facilitated that self destructive nature.
Given the nature of Lung's shard to ramp up the power... chances are, instead of it being violence that spawns the power increase, it'd be damage. The more hits he takes, the stronger and tougher he'll become. That first fight he had with Hookwolf would have leveled the warehouse... and killed Hookwolf plus anyone else standing too close. The pyrokinetics likely would have been switched out for something like a speed boost, letting him get to melee range fast enough to stop his friends from being targets.
Challenge: Figure out the crossover power. I'll give you another hint: the SI works at a hot dog stand in his free time.
Discuss! An SI with Sans' displayed powers vs the Wormverse! What are his ratings?
Displayed powers? The ability to kick the fourth wall in the nuts. At least a Thinker 3... mainly for being able to predict people based upon their tropes. Mover... I'd say 4... he unleashes some impressive barrage attacks.Discuss! An SI with Sans' displayed powers vs the Wormverse! What are his ratings?
Likely not... but that's just a matter of skill and will... the physical form is still baseline human child. You put Bruce Lee's mind in the body of a seven year old and he's not going to be much of a threat to anyone except the schoolyard bullies.Though I'm still not too sure that a centuries old spirit of murder is the best outlier.
Likely not... but that's just a matter of skill and will... the physical form is still baseline human child. You put Bruce Lee's mind in the body of a seven year old and he's not going to be much of a threat to anyone except the schoolyard bullies.
True. Irrelevant, as aside "reload with memories", that grants no powers at all.Ehhh... do remember that Chara was empowering Frisk for that time.