Shattered Bastions

[Luke Dragneel]

Seems like only Malik since that was how he was thinking of his class/magic

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Which means he's closer to Quill's style of magic than Vey's, at least from what I can tell.

 

[Hell_Yeah]

The woman frowned at the heavy guy's terms, but she understood. "There... is a limit. Mine is Silver. Hark's is likely Gold, if he is fortunate. At your limit, you have a singular [Job], and your lesser ones are consumed to fuel its ascent."

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Is your limit set by some hidden potential stat you're born with, or is it determined by the number of jobs you were able to get early on in order to "fuel the ascent" of the main job? Its sounding like either Outlanders naturally have Diamond (or higher) limits, or the experience buff they seem to get means they can grab a bunch of jobs in record time to start out, which gives them fuel to burn as they advance, depending on how the system works.

I'm seeing why Diamonds are either completely unstoppable or completely harmless. I was assuming Quill was talking about personalities, where 5/6 Diamonds aren't likely to attack you unless you did something to them, and the remainder are murderhobos par excellence, but he was referring to their hyper specialization. Either they are the rock to your scissors or rock (since they're a better rock) and you're screwed, or you're paper or a hammer or pretty much anything else, and can beat them on an axis on which they can no longer compete.

As you go up, do your individual jobs get more specialized, or is it just that you lose your secondary ones and your capacity outside of them as is discussed here? Is Dylan able to pick up a non-axe melee weapon as a [Bloodshot Raider] currently, but will eventually be limited to his two specific weapons and be a nightmare with them, while being useless without them in particular? I'm trying to imagine how over specialized you'd have to be that you have a 5/6 chance of being useless when pretty much anything can be turned into a weapon.

 

[Leecifer]

As you go up, do your individual jobs get more specialized, or is it just that you lose your secondary ones and your capacity outside of them as is discussed here? Is Dylan able to pick up a non-axe melee weapon as a [Bloodshot Raider] currently, but will eventually be limited to his two specific weapons and be a nightmare with them, while being useless without them in particular? I'm trying to imagine how over specialized you'd have to be that you have a 5/6 chance of being useless when pretty much anything can be turned into a weapon.

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So, as to the capability question, remember that a lot, if not most, [Job]s are non-combat oriented.

Vey's [Hearthflame Priestess] is obviously combat capable, even if taken to Diamond, and [Arbalestier] is even more so, but a Diamond Rank [Polyglot] would be defenseless, and [Laundress] would likely get weird about it, able to strip her attackers naked (while cleaning and repairing their clothes and armor in the process, perhaps even improving them), but could not disarm her attackers.

 

[Hell_Yeah]

Fair enough. Based on [Calculant], I sort of assumed something like [Polyglot] WOULD have combat applications, maybe by using runic languages or a spoken equivalent we haven't seen yet. I guess we have a pretty biased sample so far, since the main cast all got their first jobs by fighting monsters, and a lot of the people they'd run into in a caravan would have some means of self defense.
Actually, if most people live in Bastions or are at least primarily non-combatants (which hasn't been stated yet, but that's generally both how this kind of setting usually goes and is more logistically feasible to have a functional society as we understand it), and you're always training your Job when using it, unless there's some correlation between taking combat Jobs and having higher level caps, you would have a heavy skew towards non-combat Diamonds, since they'd be a larger part of the population and presumably have a lower chance of getting eaten by something.

Vey's [Hearthflame Priestess] is obviously combat capable, even if taken to Diamond

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The "even if taken to Diamond" is interesting. DO Jobs start specializing within their own roles as you rank up, so you both lose alternative Jobs and lose breadth WITHIN your main Job?

 

[Leecifer]

Actually, if most people live in Bastions or are at least primarily non-combatants (which hasn't been stated yet, but that's generally both how this kind of setting usually goes and is more logistically feasible to have a functional society as we understand it), and you're always training your Job when using it, unless there's some correlation between taking combat Jobs and having higher level caps, you would have a heavy skew towards non-combat Diamonds, since they'd be a larger part of the population and presumably have a lower chance of getting eaten by something.

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Yes, except, remember, the harder you push yourself, the faster it develops, which is why they all got their first [Job] in ten minutes of furiously fighting for their lives, while the magic one from focused fucking about took hours (which is, itself, stupidly fast, and will slow way the fuck down when they give up their gear). And, the nature of power being what it is, anyone with the potential to be Diamond is likely to pick up a combat job, if only to defend themselves. That said, yes, the skew is towards non-combat-specified job, but a Diamond rank [Chef] will Butcher you in seconds, though, bright side, you will be delicious. [Hearthflame Priestess] and [Calculant] are both non-combat specific jobs, so would retain a degree of lethality, but *how* the lethality is applied would be Fae-levels of specific.

The "even if taken to Diamond" is interesting. DO Jobs start specializing within their own roles as you rank up, so you both lose alternative Jobs and lose breadth WITHIN your main Job?

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If you train one aspect more than others, your Rank Up will reflect that by narrowing, if you train in aspects related but technically outside, your Rank Up might broaden the [Job] you get. It's really up in the air, but it will be fair to an alien, eldritch degree, even if you'd rather it wasn't.

 

[TheManWithoutAPlan]

"Outlanders."

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Ah, so they are freaks in how well developed their mana is in addition to being freaks of growth.

If you train one aspect more than others, your Rank Up will reflect that by narrowing, if you train in aspects related but technically outside, your Rank Up might broaden the [Job] you get. It's really up in the air, but it will be fair to an alien, eldritch degree, even if you'd rather it wasn't.

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Ah, meta-gaming here is not the question of the most optimal choice, but rather what you personally are okay with losing in return for the power you seek.

 

[w.cheff]

So now I'm wondering if the divine magic group felt the Mana drain worse because of how they approach their Magic jobs and the arcane group still felt uncomfortable but not as bad because of their approach to their Magic jobs.

 

[vladspellbinder]

So, started my re-read on the nineteenth like I said I would but underestimated just how draining reading for literary analysis instead of pleasure would be for me. I knew going in that it'd not be easy but I didn't expect how hard it would be for me in particular. Then Life Happened (tm) and I never got back to it until now. I had been hoping to do it before a new chapter dropped but, well, Life (tm).

New notes, after taking a more critical eye to things.

First, I'm wondering just what Miskatonic High is and why it's pretending to be Earth. I'm not sure if it's actually a Bastion that for whatever reason doesn't teach people how the world works or if it's some sort of in-between thing. Very celarly based on but not our Earth and may not be the new world the graduates have found themselves on. I don't expect we'll ever get a straight answer on that because it doesn't actually matter to the story.

Second, I keep seeing the phase in your works and I've been meaning to ask; where does "Slow is Smooth and Smooth is Fast" come from?

Third, Sam got to have a moment with the light but as it was in the middle of a fight it didn't get time to shine, pun totally intended.

Fourth, even keeping in mind he's a high school graduate, making him seventeen or eighteen instead of in his twenties, I still don't like Kyle. He's got "small-medium fish that wants to be a large fish" energy and I just don't care for that sort of character. Guy just can not read the room and keep his mouth shut. (Chapter three.)

Fifth, the fourth point again. Fuck Kyle with a rusty spike. (Chapter four.)

Sixth, so it's still called Doctor Who then? Why does The Starving Trials get a new name but not Doctor Who?

Seventh, the first instance of "This is still our old world." with Dylan just waking up. It's dark because it's dark, forget timezones and all that other shit boyo, you're on a whole other world with new rules. But Dylan isn't the right character to get their head around that sort of thing so it's only a minor annoyance.

Eighth, so, is it still Bleach that Getsuga Tensho comes from? Chlorine maybe? How far does the "off brand name" stuff go? You really should have just stuck with calling it The Hunger Games to avoid this issue. A casual mention of things isn't in any danger for copyright and what not.
I'm going to stop calling out such things now but the more it happens the worse it gets and it can all be avoided by just not doing the joke in the first place.

Ninth, Kristen's a bitch. She's not as bad as Kyle but damn girl shut the fuck up already.

Tenth, wondering what the last name "Ganaka" implies that they'd not be able to work just anywhere.

Eleventh, seriously, fuck Kyle. Quill shouldn't have nulled the damage from that fire. Kyle needs to catch another broken neck and not get healed from it.

Twelfth, ok, so, got through the first five chapters with no "Dylan being super awesome" moment so I have no idea where that bias of mine came from. I guess maybe because I don't relate to him as a main character I'm giving him no benefit-of-the-doubt so when he gets a typical Main Character Moment (tm) it just doesn't land right for me. Brains be weird like that.

Thirteenth,

above metal flower

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"above the metal". First editing thing I've noticed.

Fourteenth,

"This isn't America," Dylan realized.

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No fucking duh. This is one of the problems I'm having with Dylan, he's just not getting it, at least not to the extent I want him to.

Fifteenth, yeah, Kristen's a bitch. That's two characters I don't like at all. But Kristen isn't at a level of "die in a fire" like Kyle is.

Sixteenth, again, fuck Kyle. Every fucking time he opens his fucking mouth. No I don't know why he pisses me off as much as he does but boy does he piss me off.

Seventeenth,

No, likely tomorrow you shall learn something far more important. Magic.

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So, this happens the same day as when she says this. I get that characters can be wrong but as second in command she really should know the plan. Maybe change the wording slightly? Instead of "learn" say "be taught". Because they're learning about it that same day and getting a magic related [Job] but are not really being taught anything beyond the most basic of basics.

On the newest chapter.

First, thanks for the chapter. Second, Malik just using his System interface to recharge the 'mana batteries' without any discomfort and having discrete units to it all was funny and got a smile out of me.

One correction:

while Bartholomew was floating

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"Bartholomew's"

a Diamond rank [Chef] will Butcher you in seconds, though, bright side, you will be delicious.

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I'd think [Chef] and [Butcher] would be too different [Job]s though I guess enough people assume a chef knows how to butcher that a [Chef] would be able to butcher things because of that. Also, it'd take some high level System shenanigans to make make me delicious but I guess there's got to be at least one Race out there that would find my trash tier ingredients delectable.

 

[Leecifer]

Second, I keep seeing the phase in your works and I've been meaning to ask; where does "Slow is Smooth and Smooth is Fast" come from?

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From the US Military, specifically the Navy SEALS. My dad, who was Air Force, says it a lot.

Sixth, so it's still called Doctor Who then? Why does The Starving Trials get a new name but not Doctor Who?

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Because I was wavering on the 'do I keep the names the same' thing, and, in publication, it might be something else like 'Professor Who' to keep the joke.

Tenth, wondering what the last name "Ganaka" implies that they'd not be able to work just anywhere.

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It's an Indian name that translates roughly to 'Accountant', and is equivalent to an Englishman with the last name of Clark.

"above the metal". First editing thing I've noticed.

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Fixed.

Also, yes, Kyle's a dick. He's also *not unrealistic.*

 

[vladspellbinder]

From the US Military, specifically the Navy SEALS. My dad, who was Air Force, says it a lot.

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Ah, makes sense.

Because I was wavering on the 'do I keep the names the same' thing, and, in publication, it might be something else like 'Professor Who' to keep the joke.

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I looked into it again before my previous post and having a character talk about another franchise in your own original work is totally fine by all metrics. Don't even need Fair-Use because that sort of thing is so minor it's not even at Fair-Use laws. The problems start to arise when you start doing too much quoting of the other work in question but a name drop is nothing.
The main problem I have with doing the "Bland Name Franchise" joke is that if you do it once it really calls to attention every time you don't do it. Where do you stop? How many do you change? Do you change all of them? And at what point do people stop getting references because everything is under an original name? It just seems like a very deep rabbit hole that I don't think is worth the joke but you do you.

It's an Indian name that translates roughly to 'Accountant', and is equivalent to an Englishman with the last name of Clark.

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I was expecting it to be something along those lines. Thanks for the information.

Also, yes, Kyle's a dick. He's also *not unrealistic.*

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I've never said he was unrealistic. I've meet quite a few people like him in real life. Some of them I even wanted to see die because they were just that bad.
Until Kyle undergoes some character development and becomes less of an idiotic asshole I'm going to continue to want to see him die because it's simpler than having to suffer though his character development while he's still an idiotic asshole.

 

[Dragonhulk]

Also, yes, Kyle's a dick. He's also *not unrealistic.*

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Huh, that is probably why everyone can hate him so well. We know people like that, we have had to keep our fists out of their faces so we don't get fired or expelled. As long as there is some sweet, sweet, karma coming his way for a payoff it will be worth it though.

 

[Leecifer]

Chapter Eight: New Agartha

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The next few days, or cycles, passed by in a bit of a blur, as they were sent off to their rooms, with meals, and told to be ready to train the next day. Turns out, while [Job]s gave you skills, and abilities, they had to have something to work with, and while some of the group were in shape, like him, Kyle, and Val, others, like Bart, Kristen, Sam, and Malik, needed a lot of work.

So, when the Caravan slowed, they ran.

A lot.

To the point that they all picked up variations on the 'runner' [Job], Dylan getting [Courier], because, according to their instructors, what they were doing was so far outside their combat [Job]s that they registered as something separate, though, if they combined their fighting with running, there was a chance it would then be consumed when they hit Iron with their fighting style, allowing it to rank up faster.

Which, given what waited for all of them at the end of their journeys was… kind of exactly the opposite of what they wanted.

Also, until they found at least two other jobs, not [Job]s, but things they could help with to the point they got put on the official charts, they needed to contribute five times the Mana as anyone else.

Which… wasn't fun.

To Dylan, he could feel the drain, a sensation almost like he was bleeding out, losing something he'd never get back, though, checking with the Caravanners, he would, it just wouldn't help with any of his [Job]s. It was also paired with a feeling that was like pain, but wasn't, the difference something he could tell because, well, he'd been hurt before, and badly, at that. Not just the werewolves, Shadow Pack, whatever, but, well, you didn't play football without getting hurt, and he could tell the difference instantly, and move past it.

The others... were having trouble.

They all felt it, that not-pain, but, talking to them, they all felt different things. While Dylan felt the drain, Logan felt like he himself was moving out of his body, going with the Mana, losing track of himself more and more, until, after it was over, he blinked, and was in himself again, a feeling 'Like a really bad trip, dude'.

Sam? She felt like she was 'on stage, but in the worst way', seen by… something, something that was everywhere, and something that really really didn't like her. And Annabeth, who didn't want to talk about it, eventually described it as being on top of a pyramid of people that got shakier and shakier, knowing, more and more, that at any moment you were going to fall, you were going to get hurt, and it just got worse and worse and worse.

He tried to talk to the others about it, but, well, they didn't want to share, except for Kyle, whose statement of it 'not being that bad' was something that Dylan didn't really believe.

And there was Malik, who, according to him, got a prompt, said yes, and spent the 'Mana Points' on it, and… that was it.

Which… didn't earn him a lot of good will from the others.

Though, if there was a silver lining to this, Dylan noticed that, after they'd spent the time charging up two dozen of those little batteries worth of crystals, or their equivalent, each, everyone else in the Caravan was noticeably nicer to them.

In some ways, it reminded him of practice, because everyone hated cardio, but even if you didn't like the other guy, you couldn't help but feel for him seeing him going through what you had too.

And so, every day, they were run ragged, drained of stamina and Mana, not having enough energy to do much more than stumble into bed at the end of the day for the first week, and the week after, while they had some free time… they didn't have much to do in it. He'd worked with his magic [Job], which was sight-based, and while he didn't have spells, arrays, chants, or so on, his own rush of understanding showed him how to shift the flow of Mana, and work with it, so had made invisible mana 'lenses', kind of like energy goggles, and, putting them 'on', he'd been able to better see the energy around him.

And there was a lot of it around them.

In the Caravan, and in the people, but, a little bit, in the trees, in the grass, and the one time he'd looked upwards, whatever the 'suns' were, they were so full of Mana that they'd left whatever the magical version of sunspots were in his eyes.

Regardless, it was giving him insight into how the world worked, or, as the [Job] wanted him to say, it gave him Insight. He wasn't really sure why, and no one could explain either, just telling him that 'That's how [Job]s are.'

Then, suddenly, no work, because, tomorrow, they were going to reach the next Bastion.

Instead, they had to turn over all of their gear, and were both told that they had to leave their phones locked up with Quill, but also, at the same time, they were to, under no circumstances, take them out in the Bastion. When Bartholomew had pointed out that, if they were leaving them behind, how could they take them out, Thrain, who had kind of become their contact, just nodded, and went, 'Exactly, Laddie!' which hadn't explained anything.

They'd all been issued non-uniform clothing, which all seemed a little worn, instead of the new outfits they'd had before, which Kyle had started to complain about, until Ivy pointed out that they were supposed to have been wearing this kind of thing the entire time so of course it'd seem 'used'. They'd also all been given weapons, and armor, which had surprised them, and was something that one of Quill's people, the man who'd managed the drop-off, read a message off a notebook in response to their reaction.

"'Only the truly rich and the truly poor go unarmed, either through soft power or through a complete lack of any power at all. We are Caravanners, and, even in friendly Bastions, no Guard is omnipresent, so one should be armed and armored whenever possible,'" he read off. "'If you draw steel first, we'll kill you ourselves, and if you draw steel second, do not tarry, do not try and explain yourself, run for the Caravan, like the Hounds of Tindalos are after you, because we can negotiate, and you cannot.'"

And with that, the assistant put the notebook away, and went back to handing out their new gear, collecting their original loadout.

"Don't you mean hounds of hell?" Sam questioned, looking over her new lightning wand.

"Nah, lassie, Tindys' are far worse in cities!" Thrain corrected.

At her confused look, Malik explained, "They teleport from corner to corner. Or, like, slip into extra-dimensional space where the only exits are corners. The books weren't really clear. They're only supposed to go after time-travelers, though."

The dwarf, who'd seemed surprised at the dark-skinned boy's comment, snorted, "If only. Only way you'll make it back is if the Guard let ya. Outer Ring, worst you're gonna deal with is Iron, but a Bronze might be slummin' it, then you're right screwed. So be on your best behavior, and if things go bad, ya best hoof it."

"Ugh," Bartholomew groaned. "Haven't we done enough running? We've been going back and forth like our lives depended on it!" He paused. "Oh."

The [Trackrunner] leaned forward and mock-whispered conspiratorially, "If things go bad, it just might."

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It was late afternoon in the next cycle that 'New Agartha' started to be seen in the distance, and it… wasn't what Dylan had expected.

He wasn't sure what he'd expected, to be honest.

But he hadn't expected it to be black.

Which… sounded racist, in his own head, but it was literally black, a hemisphere of complete and utter darkness, to the point that he couldn't see a curve, as it instead looked like someone had just pasted a two-dimensional cut out in the world, the top reaching towards the clouds above, but not quite touching it, probably, but any light from the not-suns that passed by it didn't shine on the shape, because it was just…

Black.

Also, the lack of any features, as he saw it rising up above the trees, meant that he thought they were close when they really weren't, as the cut-out got bigger, and bigger, and bigger, which meant the clouds were higher than he'd assumed they were, not that he could look at them for longer than a few seconds at a time before his stomach started to twist into knots.

Even worse, or maybe better, when they'd been heading towards it for several hours, night fell, which itself was not a gradual process like it'd been the last time, three cycles of day, and two cycles of night ago, not the faint darkening over hours, but darkness crashed down, darkening in minutes, likely less than five, which caused some tension amongst the other Caravanners.

It was a sign that a long day was coming, according to some, but Thrain reassured them that, no, it wasn't, that was just a folk-belief, and they would be Gating to the Gondolin Bastion anyways, so it was, as the short man said, 'no skin off our heels'.

Heading back to their rooms, they watched from the side, which was… tenser than he thought it'd be, unable to see the Bastion directly, warned that the edge would come through the walls, and that was fine, but they were to stay there in case anyone had the kind of reaction that even new hires should not have.

And they were right to, because it was… disconcerting.

Both he and Malik were sitting on Malik's bed, as it was the one near the 'back', and, through the slit, the black wall took up more and more space in the window, until there was a quick scream, suddenly cut off, from the rooms in front of theirs, then the front wall of their room seemed to dissolve into utter blackness which swept towards them.

And Dylan felt a primal animal terror clutching at him, to run, to escape, to not touch that infinite darkness, as it advanced, some part of him certain to touch it was to utterly be unmade, as his muscles locked up and-

And then, for a moment, he FELL, into the endless void, where nothing existed, forever, and ever, in infinite amounts, yet, at the same time, there was something else in here, something old, something tired, and something which was no longer Human-

Then he was back on Malik's bed, heart hammering, as he shot to his feet, and stumbled, needing to run, needing to fight, his pistol, which he'd turned over, now in his hand, ready to fire, and loaded.

It was that last thought which made him stop, because he knew what it took to fire it, and, hesitantly, opening the cylinder, six rounds of complete darkness were loaded into it. Moving to unload them, the rounds fell into his palm, and he hissed in pain, dropping them, the ammo so cold he thought he'd given himself frostbite, but his hand was fine.

The rounds, meanwhile, hit the floor, and, hissing like sizzling bacon, evaporated.

He looked at the space they'd been in. Malik looked at the space they'd been in. They looked at each other.

Dylan, slowly, opened a drawer in his desk, put the magic gun into it, and closed it, Malik nodding.

Then, and only then, did they look back out the window and almost completely forget what just happened, because New Agartha?

It was a cave.

An Enormous cave, buildings built into the walls, along with what looked like mining, and, as the carriage turned, the area they were in was full of warehouses and the like. Looking further, they saw the center of the Bastion, which was an enormous crystal pillar that stretched up from the floor to the ceiling, the bottom obscured but the top built out into a giant golden palace, and, in the pillar itself sat… a sun.

An actual one, if, comparatively, tiny, but it was definitely a star, with light that, while bright, didn't make Dylan feel like vomiting. Even better, through the crystal it was housed in, and through their window, it felt naturally warming, the shadows it cast in their room normal shadows, not the sharp-edged divisions of the Farweald's 'suns'.

The carts meanwhile, kept going, and going, and going, before they passed through some kind of gate, the Caravan forming up, as it did whenever it stopped, in a fenced off clearing, where they waited. The buildings in the Bastions were… oddly colorful, not really forming any kind of pattern, looking kind of… squat, with no room between them on the streets, the occasional tower rising up, here and there, bringing to mind, for some reason, flowers, or maybe just very flamboyant cacti.

Left to wait, Dylan checked with the others who were… dealing, and, asking around, they all saw the Void, all felt the Falling, but while Logan admitted to feeling something else in there, 'like a shark made out of old people', and Ivy, stiffly, described it as 'feeling like my grandmother was in the next room', everyone else in both rooms looked at them strangely, not having felt anything else like that at all.

He didn't mention his revolver, nor what it had been loaded with.

It was another three hours, Malik's magic job having, among other things, a clock, that Thrain tromped up the stairs, followed by two women, one in a green cloak, looking like she could be in college, with dark green hair, and an elderly woman who either had feathers in her hair or growing through her hair, and the fact that her nails seemed to be talons suggesting it was the second.

"Alrightie, lads and lassies," their unofficial contact with the Caravan grinned. "Seein' as you all are still new to other Bastions, havin' only been in a few before, of course ya be wantin' to explore a little."

"Not really," Sam stated, accidentally cutting off the dwarf as he'd only been pausing for effect. "What? What if they think we're Outlanders or something?"

Kristen frowned, "We are Outlanders."

"Exactly!" the theater girl agreed, worried.

"No, you all ain't, at least not 'till we're well back inta the Farweald," the [Trackrunner] corrected. "But bein' new hires, as this place ain't like your home Bastion, which is…"

He trailed off, waiting, and, looking around, Dylan offered, "Boston?" which caused the old woman to harrumph.

"What's wrong with Boston?" Ivy demanded.

"The fact that it's an Outlander answer, dearie," the feather-haired local rebuked. "Same as New York, Los Angelos, and Washington Bee Sea."

"Washington D.C.," Kristen corrected automatically.

"What an Outlander thing to say," the elderly Caravanner noted, causing the nerdy girl to wince.

"How about Istanbul?" Bartholomew suggested.

"Not Constantinople?" Dylan quipped, getting a surprised laugh from several of the others.

"Not anymore," the nerdy boy agreed.

Thrain looked to the older woman, who nodded. "There's a few of those, it could work, but you don't sound like it."

"Vienna?" Sam suggested. "It's got the rivers and stuff."

"That's Venice," Kristen disagreed. "And… we are merchants now. Would Venice work?"

"It would," the old woman agreed, saying no more.

"Then we're merchants from Venice," Kyle declared.

Sam held up a hand, "Um, guys, that doesn't mean what you think it means."

Taking a second to glance at Kristen, Bartholomew disagreed, "No. It works."

"Well," Thrain stated, "You all are from the Venice Bastion, used to waterways, so all of this stone in New Agartha's gonna be different then what yer' used to. You all got yer paychecks, so yer gonna want to get some food, some souvenirs, but we'll be with ya, and stick close to me, Eledah," he told them, jerking a thumb to the green-haired girl, who, as she waved to them, Dylan realized the tips of her ears were pointed, "and Mrs. Freya." The old woman nodded her head. "They're Irons."

"Wait," Malik questioned the elderly lady, "how can you only be an Iron?"

"Because I'm Wrought, young man," she stated. "But as a [Guide], these old bones of mine are still quite useful, and I can still do quite a bit. However, that's a very rude question."

"Oh! Sorry!" the dark-skinned boy quickly apologized. "I didn't know!"

Thrain cut in, "Which is why you all gaping be fine, but keep yer questions to a minimum, and about whatever it is ye be lookin' to buy. Also, never take the first offer. NAgs like ta barter, and, whatever yer offered by the locals, counter at half that, and don't go more than three quarters the price. Nuthin' here is that important for ya, least on yer budgets, and overpayin', especially takin' the first offer is…"

"Outlander behavior," they all chorused, having got the message.

"Exactly!" the dwarf grinned. "Now, who wants to stretch yer legs where the monsters be wearin' clothing?"

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For all their warnings, once they actually got out, a couple men at the gate in chainmail watching them, each with a symbol of a starburst in a ring, connected to each other with a vertical line, the entire thing… felt a bit like a school field trip, actually.

Eledah was very much a chaperone, watching them from the back to make sure they stayed together, but Mrs. Freya was actually really knowledgeable, always couching her explanations of New Agartha in how it was different than Venice, a Bastion known for its fishing and aquatic farming. This one was, obviously, was involved with mining, the locals not quite as short as Thrain, but they definitely seemed to be more like him than the rest of them, which apparently was a good thing given their main industries were the gathering, processing, and working of metals, creating what they needed, but that also left them a surplus of goods to trade with Caravans, like theirs, when they rolled through, which they did, on average, once every couple weeks.

Stopping for dinner, Thrain warned them that the little red skull meant it was spicy, a lichen they farmed actively toxic for anyone not at least at Lead, which, of course, meant that all the guys had to try it, along with Val and Ivy, and… well… he wasn't lying.

Malik tapped out immediately, the milkshakes, which had an odd buttery aftertaste coming from a local kind of short shaggy cow, helping him a great deal, Logan following after, while Bartholomew tried his best, but tapped out too. He was pretty sure that Kyle was trying not to cry, and while it was a bit much, looking at the locals, some of whom were trying not to laugh, Dylan watched as they sipped the milkshakes, just a little, as they ate similar dishes, so he did too.

Kyle loudly announced that he 'won', only for Ivy to clear her throat, both her and Val still just having the 'Dustcutter' stew without issue, which caused the big guy to declare they 'didn't count'. Looking over to them himself, Ivy rolled her eyes and told Dylan, "Mother made worse." Val adding, "Could be a bit hotter," causing Thrain to choke on his ale a little, Mrs. Freya promising to help the tomboy to find some of the spice to buy to take with her.

Afterwards, with a bit of time to shop, Anna found a thin golden necklace, inset with a green stone, she really liked in a window, but the price was more than both of them had, combined. Dylan offered to add his funds to hers, but he wasn't sure if they could haggle the seller down enough, his girlfriend hesitating, before taking his offered coinpurse, and, to both his and the shopkeep's surprise, arguing the man down so far that, by the time they were done, she still had half their funds left over. She thanked Dylan, gave him a quick kiss… and then moved to another stall to get a matching bracelet.

Soon enough, though, they were all herded back to the Caravan, where they were told they'd be staying until it was time to move on, as 'there was work to do, and other people need their leave too!'

Which, honestly, Dylan was fine with, especially, afterwards, Logan admitting that, while they were out, he'd accidentally pulled his phone out of his pocket, to check the time.

Despite it being in a locked box.

A mile away.

Which led them all to discover that they could summon theirs too, not by trying to call it to their hands, but, Amy actually making the breakthrough, by assuming you already had it, so… you did.

And while Logan was pretty sure no one had seen him, and none of the three Caravanners had said anything… that seemed like the kind of thing they shouldn't take any more risks on.

So, they went to bed, the 'Star' going dark at the end of the cycle, the star dimming and shifting from yellow to a pale white, almost like a moon, as it reached the bottom of the pillar, and started to rise again.

Either way, after a couple more cycles, where they continued doing work and charging Mana Batteries, and the Caravan did some trading, making deliveries and accepting them, everyone got back in the carts, and it was time to go. Not out, though, no, they were driven much deeper into the city, through large gates, and into a much nicer part of town. That wasn't to say the previous part was bad, but it had been a bit dusty, a bit dirty, but Dylan thought that just added to the charm, though his upper back hurt a little bit the day after their outing, which was weird, until Ivy explained that it'd been walking on cobblestones that'd done it, instead of the relatively flat trails they'd been on before.

Through the gate, though, the cobblestones and rough-hewn roads were gone, replaced by wide stone blocks the carriages clicked across, the clothing nicer, the people a bit taller, the guards with gold chains worked into their chainmail, and everything was just… nicer.

Then, another gate, and the roads weren't blocks, but, somehow, one continuous piece of stone, seemingly shaped instead of laid, a pattern cut into the 'road' which gave the wheels traction, as they moved silently, and the guard's armor was more gold than steel. More than that, though, the guards, when they moved, were… wrong. They moved too smoothly, while also seeming to jerk at the same time, almost like they were lagging, or… maybe Dylan's sight was, though, when he tried to look at the Mana, he found his sight was blocked by the window.

Which, if the block went both ways… was probably a good thing.

And the Caravan rolled on, until they almost reached the center of the Bastion, turning, Dylan crossing over to Ivy's room to look out, not that she or Val minded, to see the enormous golden palace that was built into the bottom of the sun-column. Though, leaning down to stare up at the secondary palace at the top of the pillar, there was a deep sense of dread, along with the feeling that, were he to continue staring, something might notice.

Dylan thanked the girls and retreated back to his and Malik's room, with a feeling of just how small he was in comparison that he couldn't put into words, but, now more than ever, he realized just how important it was that they keep their heads down, and avoid the notice of whatever that was until they were ready.

If they ever were.



AN: As always, the next four chapters can be found on Patreon and Subscribestar. Once again, I look forward to your feedback as I write this, with the caveat that, when this is published, Book 1 will be stubbed (everything past chapter 3 removed) to comply with publishing requirements.

 

[Rotceh]

Good work I love this fic

 

[sperance]

If they ever were.

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Well, Dylan, I imagine that depends on how attached to your human thought patterns you are.

 

[TheManWithoutAPlan]

Second, I keep seeing the phase in your works and I've been meaning to ask; where does "Slow is Smooth and Smooth is Fast" come from?

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IT is a very populart saying in a lot of martial arts training to try and get students to do things correctly rather than as swiftly as possible.

And the Caravan rolled on, until they almost reached the center of the Bastion, turning, Dylan crossing over to Ivy's room to look out, not that she or Val minded, to see the enormous golden palace that was built into the bottom of the sun-column. Though, leaning down to stare up at the secondary palace at the top of the pillar, there was a deep sense of dread, along with the feeling that, were he to continue staring, something might notice.

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So bastions really do get crazy. I wonder how much a diamond rank builder can, how much this is an example of that, and how much it is example of a Diamond rank mage- or if there really is any different between those two in the status right now.

 

[vladspellbinder]

I best those bullets are going to come back later and be really important in some manner.

Kristen really needs to get with the program. "Forget I said anything" should be followed with "You said something?" and so on.

Been a long time gone, Constantinople.

"Then we're merchants from Venice," Kyle declared.

Sam held up a hand, "Um, guys, that doesn't mean what you think it means."

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Then what does it actually mean? I kinda dislike when people say this and don't immediately follow up with an explanation on what something actually means.

So I just recently learned about the phrase "Hobbyless behavior" and I now wonder how it stacks up to "Outlander behavior". I guess the former is an insult while the latter is more of a warning.

Kyle continues to be worse than a douche bag, because a douche bag has an actual use.

Yeah, saw the phone thing coming. Typical bound item stuff.

Onto the next one. And we'll see how long they can actually stay under the radar.

Thanks for the chapter.

 

[Rotceh]

I just finished reading this in an afternoon and so far it's very interesting, I can't wait to see how it goes