A man finds himself inexplicably transported to Essos, armed with powers he cannot comprehend...
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Illusiveone | 21 |
I just realized i could have just used the old thread.
I just realized i could have just used the old thread.
Well....now that i have started this one might was well keep using this.
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Thank you for your supportLooking forward to the growth and development of the story, along with our mc and his co companion. Along with figuring out what his new powers are and what they can do exactly. No matter how many isekai stories I have come across and read, I always feel that there should be a bit of wonder when being able to do magic. Especially for someone who has never done anything magical(outside of fictional writing or science or very rare occassions mystical/faith means) a day in their lives.
But to be able to do magic? The dream of millions of people?There is a childlike giddiness that should follow in the wake of awakening or being gifted such a treasure. A chance to be greater today than you were before. Its a detail that sadly far to many authors overlook or deem not important enough. But I am glad that you did not do so.
I am rather curious as to Jason intends to do in this world, as he can approach alot of medieval problems in many ways. But it all falls back to what his powers are and what he can. From the looks of it, he can absorb the skills and experience of the dead?(Might not have to be dead as a requirement, we will need to see more testing from him.), Levitating people and rocks with no issue and using said memories and skills to his advantage.
I'm glad you didn't do the whole "He killed someone for the first time and threw up in disgust." In a medieval fantasy, its necessary for him to grow and adapt to the world that he lives in. Especially when the laws of this new world does not follow the laws of his old world, and death can come very swiftly. Whether it be the weather(hot or cold), a noble who hired an assassin to kill you because of some insult or whatever, not believing or following a particular faith, etc.
Anyway best of luck to your story and be encouraged. Your hardwork has not gone unnoticed!
Garth will be first and last person to know Jason's originsOne of my personal problems in stories like this is revealing something like coming from another world without gauging the situation properly or without properly knowing the person you are telling it to.
And here we go"I'll bring them back," Jason promised, more to himself than to the villagers watching him prepare to leave.
Indeed.All he need now is to persuade locals to fight,and he could made his own kingdom.
He will take it easy at first, but slowly realize the gravity of the position he is in and what his actions have set in motion.I do wonder what this newfound position of leadership will help Jason grow and develop, with his newfound responsibility. Always good to see character growth! Keep up the good work and thank you again for your work!