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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Negotiations (part 5) New
3rd August 2013
10:12 GMT +3


I feel Jade shift slightly in my arms, and then stop. In our current positions she can't quite tell how awake I am, but she knows that if I'm at all awake then I'll see her desire to become active and let go of her. It's-. It was almost routine, before the Anti-Life, and… Feeling her do that, I almost move my arms immediately.

But the thing is… While her sense of professional discipline normally overpowers her lassitude… Right now? She wants to be where she is.

I hadn't fully realised… I mean, I knew that she missed me, but I hadn't quite… Appreciated how much missing me was affecting her behaviour.

Huh.

"I felt your heart rate change."

"Mm."

"I know you're awake."

"Mn."

"Noo, more awake than that."

I pull her slightly closer and breathe in through her hair.

"If you miss smelling me that much I can just leave you my perfume."

"It's not the same."

"Hm. I assume you're holding on because I want to stay right here."

"Yep."

"Uuh. Okay. But in a few minutes I'm going to need to get up."

"They'll be enough hot water. We're basically on the equator."

"No, I mean I'll need to use the bathroom."

Or I could-.

She tenses as she realises that I just thought 'construct catheter' as a serious possibility, and now she actually wants to get up. Silently cursing my own imagination, I roll back slightly and move my left arm. She shuffles away a bit to start with and then pushes herself up into a sitting position, looking down at me.

"You had to ruin it."

I open my eyes, tilt my head back and sigh. "Yeah. Sorry."

She looks around, then realises that I put her clothes on a hanger last night. "Does this place have somewhere to work out?"

"Ah, yes. Bottom level. Just ignore the clones in the tanks."

That earns me a narrow-eyed glance as she puts her bra on. "I thought you moved those."

"No, I upgraded the security and added a self-destruct. I still need them somewhere secure, and I don't have anywhere better. Don't worry; they're in the corner and you won't notice them unless you look for them."

"Oh, I think I will." She considers her Darkstar field uniform. "Did you bring any of my clothes over?"

"No? Do you want me to?"

I don't mention the fact that I can fabricate molecule-perfect replicas. She knows that. If she wanted that, she'd ask for me to do that.

She walks over to the main window to look out across the verdant landscape. "If I'm moving in here, it's probably best."

"You don't have to. I mean, there's nothing wrong with your place in Gotham. Other than the location."

"And the-." She glances back at me. "Did you do anything to it?"

"It looks exactly the same as when you left."

She gives me a flat look. "And it could take a direct hit from a nuclear missile."

"Only if it was very low yield. Ah, if you're worried about clothes, maybe… Kara has something in your size?"

"Kara."

"Yes."

She makes a motion-. I realise that bra is designed for practicality, but it's actually very fetching-.

"Paul?"

"Hm, yes?"

"They wouldn't fit."

"Okay, B-.""Taranna?"

"I'll make do." She puts on the blouse. "Did you tell Mom I'm back on Earth yet?"

"No. I thought I'd leave deciding how to do that to you."

"I suppose I could just join in with her morning jog."

I nod. "It's what I'd do. Oh-. Um."

"Problem?"

"Alan has told me that he's not completely adverse to dating, but that I'm forbidden from-" She's nodding. "-helping or making suggestions."

"Are you saying I should?"

"Um. No."

She looks at me. I avert my eyes.

"Paul, Alan's ninety."

"He hasn't been on a date for longer than I've been alive. He hasn't been on a date for longer than Paula's been alive."

"That-." She blinks. "No."

"No what?"

Her eyes narrow. "No 'don't even think about it' no."

"Um. Okay?"

"I'm going to go-" I transition out of bed and put my most normal clothes on. "-and do my morning set. Keep not thinking about it."

"I'll try?"

She walks towards the door, pausing briefly to kiss me as she passes.

Okay. Not sure what it is that I'm not supposed to think about, but if it matters to her..?

Ah… Breakfast.
 
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I wonder if Jade got a commendation for her work in retrieving the ship Knockout was on.

She hasn't done anything worthy of an award ceremony yet, but there's plenty of time for that. I think getting recognition that even Lanterns appreciate, without Paul's thumb on the scale, could help her longterm development. It could restore some ambition.
 
3rd August 2013
10:12 GMT +3


I feel Jade shift slightly in my arms, and then stop. In our current positions she can't quite tell how awake I am, but she knows that if I'm at all awake then I'll see her desire to become active and let go of her. It's-. It was almost routine, before the Anti-Life, and… Feeling her do that, I almost move my arms immediately.
The drawback of empathic abilities and a partner who's a trained assassin with a strong sense of kinaesthetics. Neither of you can just lay back and enjoy still moments because you know they want to do something...

But the thing is… While her sense of professional discipline normally overpowers her lassitude… Right now? She wants to be where she is.

I hadn't fully realised… I mean, I knew that she missed me, but I hadn't quite… Appreciated how much missing me was affecting her behaviour.
To be fair, how often do you two get to just sleep in like this? Usually one or the other of you has stuff to do....

Huh.

"I felt your heart rate change."
See? Expert in kinaesthetic analysis. She can probably tell when you're lying or joking just by watching facial twitches.

"Mm."

"I know you're awake."
This is starting to get like trying to get a little kid up... 🥰

"Mn."

"Noo, more awake than that."
I mean, unless you're looking for some 'morning glory', what's the point in getting up?

I pull her slightly closer and breathe in through her hair.

"If you miss smelling me that much I can just leave you my perfume."
No, no, it's not that. It's the intimacy of smelling someone's hair and working out what's their shampoo and what's their actual scent.

"It's not the same."

"Hm. I assume you're holding on because I want to stay right here."
Dang, his genius plan ruined!

"Yep."

"Uuh. Okay. But in a few minutes I'm going to need to get up."
What's the rush, you're technically on holiday leave. I'm sure your team will understand the urge for some human mating practices.

"They'll be enough hot water. We're basically on the equator."

"No, I mean I'll need to use the bathroom."

Or I could-.
OL, don't you even dare think what you're about to...

She tenses as she realises that I just thought 'construct catheter' as a serious possibility, and now she actually wants to get up. Silently cursing my own imagination, I roll back slightly and move my left arm. She shuffles away a bit to start with and then pushes herself up into a sitting position, looking down at me.
It's your own damn fault, you incessant fiddler. 😤

"You had to ruin it."

I open my eyes, tilt my head back and sigh. "Yeah. Sorry."
On the upside, they are so in tune that she can tell what he's thinking and let him know he should feel bad for it.

She looks around, then realises that I put her clothes on a hanger last night. "Does this place have somewhere to work out?"

"Ah, yes. Bottom level. Just ignore the clones in the tanks."
...OL, you didn't really...

That earns me a narrow-eyes glance as she puts her bra on. "I thought you moved those."

"No, I upgraded the security and added a self-destruct. I still need them somewhere secure, and I don't have anywhere better. Don't worry; they're in the corner and you won't notice them unless you look for them."
Are the tanks at least opaque, or able to be covered up? I don't think she wants to do her workout with a half-dozen yous just floating there...

"Oh, I think I will." She considers her Darkstar field uniform. "Did you bring any of my clothes over?"

"No? Do you want me to?"
Ah, good, something he didn't plan in advance.

I don't mention the fact that I can fabricate molecule-perfect replicas. She knows that. If she wanted that, she'd ask for me to do that.

She walks over to the main window to look out across the verdant landscape. "If I'm moving in here, it's probably best."
At least it's a great view. And the scenery is nice. Such lovely hills and valleys...

"You don't have to. I mean, there's nothing wrong with your place in Gotham. Other than the location."

"And the-." She glances back at me. "Did you do anything to it?"
Ah, she knows him so well...

"It looks exactly the same as when you left."

She gives me a flat look. "And it could take a direct hit from a nuclear missile."
...Well enough to know that when he resorts to exact words like that, he got carried away.

"Only if it was very low yield. Ah, if you're worried about clothes, maybe… Kara has something in your size?"

"Kara."

"Yes."
The gene-tailored super-teen who casually looks like a runway model without trying?

She makes a motion-. I realise that bra is designed for practicality, but it's actually very fetching-.

"Paul?"
And remember, Kara Zor-Els usually grow up into Power Girls. Kryptonian DNA is an absolute wonder.

"Hm, yes?"

"They wouldn't fit."
Jade being a mere mortal and most definitely embodying the athletic Asiatic female form...

"Okay, B-.""Taranna?"

"I'll make do." She puts on the blouse. "Did you tell Mom I'm back on Earth yet?"
I expect most of Taranna's stuff is either traditional clothing or Earth clothes she's taken a shine to. Not necessarily comfortable things, though?

"No. I thought I'd leave deciding how to do that to you."

"I suppose I could just join in with her morning jog."
And you know she'd just roll with it like it was nothing out of the ordinary.

I nod. "It's what I'd do. Oh-. Um."

"Problem?"
Oh, boy. What's OL getting up to this time?

"Alan has told me that he's not completely adverse to dating, but that I'm forbidden from-" She's nodding. "-helping or making suggestions."

"Are you saying I should?"
OL, if Alan has said he's not interested in dating anyone right now, accept that. And quietly hope Diana gets fed up and snags him.

"Um. No."

She looks at me. I avert my eyes.
Like a little kid caught with his hand in the cookie jar.

"Paul, Alan's ninety."

"He hasn't been on a date for longer than I've been alive. He hasn't been on a date for longer than Paula's been alive."
😨 ...Wait, are you suggesting...

"That-." She blinks. "No."

"No what?"
Yeah, that's my reaction too.

Her eyes narrow. "No 'don't even think about it' no."

"Um. Okay?"
Don't act confused, OL, you do realise you basically suggested setting her mom up with your mentor who's literally twice her age.

"I'm going to go-" I transition out of bed and put my most normal clothes on. "-and do my morning set. Keep not thinking about it."

"I'll try?"
And maybe he'll realise what he's not meant to be thinking about...

She walks towards the door, pausing briefly to kiss me as she passes.

Okay. Not sure what it is that I'm not supposed to think about, but if it matters to her..?

Ah… Breakfast.
How can one man be so dense and so canny simultaneously?

Honestly, these two are a great couple, as long as jade can restrain her urge to kill him sometimes. Especially when he gets into that state of 'fix/do/get a thing before you even say anything out loud about it.' I get the feeling if they lived together like this all the time, he'd wake up in a clone after pushing her just a little too far... 😄
 
Or I could-.

She tenses as she realises that I just thought 'construct catheter' as a serious possibility, and now she actually wants to get up. Silently cursing my own imagination, I roll back slightly and move my left arm. She shuffles away a bit to start with and then pushes herself up into a sitting position, looking down at me.
I… suppose the ring could deaden nerves to make it unnoticeable? Or is having a catheter put in much less uncomfortable for women than men?
"Ah, yes. Bottom level. Just ignore the clones in the tanks."

That earns me a narrow-eyes glance as she puts her bra on. "I thought you moved those."
'narrow-eyed'
She walks over to the main window the look out across the verdant landscape. "If I'm moving in here, it's probably best."
'to'
 
I… suppose the ring could deaden nerves to make it unnoticeable? Or is having a catheter put in much less uncomfortable for women than men?
Even the SI has enough social awareness to realise that the solution to 'my girlfriend doesn't want a cathater put it so that we can snuggle longer' is not 'put it in really sneakily'.
Thank you, corrected.
 
Genuine question, Paul is still at the outpost in the desert, yeah? The one that got raided by the Justifiers?

In the past we've seen repeated demonstrations of Paul's fixation on security. Each time the mountain got raided, he made significant upgrades and turned the facility into a fortress, more or less. The Bir Tawil facility is out in open desert (I think?) and thus exposed on all sides. So how come Paul hasn't just said to hell with that place and ring-constructed a citadel someplace of his own, out of the way? It seems a little odd to me that he's just more or less fixed the door and upgraded the security on the clones and shrugged about the rest when for him, it would be simplicity itself to just build a properly secure facility somewhere. Anywhere. Even offplanet. Paul is literally capable of just giving Earth a new moon in the form of an asteroid in a stable orbit and living on it. There's so many options, why stick to this one little place he just happens to have?
 
Genuine question, Paul is still at the outpost in the desert, yeah? The one that got raided by the Justifiers?

In the past we've seen repeated demonstrations of Paul's fixation on security. Each time the mountain got raided, he made significant upgrades and turned the facility into a fortress, more or less. The Bir Tawil facility is out in open desert (I think?) and thus exposed on all sides. So how come Paul hasn't just said to hell with that place and ring-constructed a citadel someplace of his own, out of the way? It seems a little odd to me that he's just more or less fixed the door and upgraded the security on the clones and shrugged about the rest when for him, it would be simplicity itself to just build a properly secure facility somewhere. Anywhere. Even offplanet. Paul is literally capable of just giving Earth a new moon in the form of an asteroid in a stable orbit and living on it. There's so many options, why stick to this one little place he just happens to have?
It isn't a desert any longer. By now, Adrianna's work in regreening North Africa has turned the area green. It also has quite a lot of defences in the way of sensor networks, force fields, armour and automated drone weapons. They're just tucked out of the way because it's primarily a residence and not a battle fortress.
 
I… suppose the ring could deaden nerves to make it unnoticeable? Or is having a catheter put in much less uncomfortable for women than men?
The problem is that it's invasive, not because it's uncomfortable.

His best option would have been to float her to the bathroom. And bring her back when done.
 
It isn't a desert any longer. By now, Adrianna's work in regreening North Africa has turned the area green. It also has quite a lot of defences in the way of sensor networks, force fields, armour and automated drone weapons. They're just tucked out of the way because it's primarily a residence and not a battle fortress.

I just wondered, mainly cuz he seemed really concerned about keeping the mountain locked down tight. If it was me in his position I'd have done what the League did and built my own station someplace that isn't near Earth, but in the Sol system. Or just built myself a spaceship and live in it. It's a lot harder to ambush someone in their bed when their bed is in a space station orbiting Jupiter or something.

I had this vague idea of wondering where the line of 'Pauls house' and "LEGION operational facility" is, which led me to wondering whether he's got to billet any LEGION staff in Sol with him, which led me to wondering about that.
 

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