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lancelot PilarWAK90 lancelot wrote on PilarWAK90's profile.
Pilar think you could respond to a few questions, maybe explain where your going with this. I like that your doing a Ranma story, and it's well written. BUT as it is now the MC is a smug snarky know it all in the background that no one listens to despite years of accurate warnings. As it is now the story makes little sense.