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A New Tournament (Harry Potter & SG:SG1)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by killgore444, Dec 11, 2020.

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  1. Xx_BoneIdle_xX

    Xx_BoneIdle_xX Versed in the lewd.

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    It seems like the author agrees with you (since he trashed the place quite good imo)! ;)
     
  2. Aleh

    Aleh Destroyer of Faith in Humanity

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    "might as well have done"
    Fawkes.
    Lucius.

    And the above is a very tiny sample of what stood out to me when I read this chapter (on mobile, or I'd have kept a running tally).
     
  3. killgore444

    killgore444 Not too sore, are you?

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    Thanks.

    Were was this one in the story?
    I've reread it so many times this last week, my eyes are just skimming over the words at this point.

    Thankfully, all I've got left is a POV from Rita Skitter and some notes before posting on FFN.
     
  4. Aleh

    Aleh Destroyer of Faith in Humanity

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    Here:
    I do hope there's a proofreading step in there somewhere.
     
  5. killgore444

    killgore444 Not too sore, are you?

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    Thanks.

    There is, me rereading it a dozen times and hoping that I see the mistakes before my eyes start to glaze. I've sadly had a lot of trouble with the proofreaders I've had in the past. Honestly, it's one of the reasons I started to post here before I update on FFN.
     
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