TanaNari
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Thanks. I actually put Sveta and Akaihana in there as *filler* to make sure this was my 400th. There was meant to be another "news chapter" like 399 was, focusing on Taylor and the political/military status of Avalon... but Akaihanna ran long, so I dropped it.Okay, first. This was an awesome chapter and definitely worth the lead up to being the 400th chapter.
It was a full tux.
It's a wedding. She's part of the entourage. She's not in a dress. Tux or GTFO.
Could be both.That would be known in the business as an "implication". Or a tease. Could be either, really.
... I had not anticipated this response. Awesome.If TanaNari won't give us a vow's scene.... Well, I'm just going to have to take matters into my own hands, right?
"I Do"
^ Tis rough, but it was either rough or 'wait another two weeks'.
Is lovely. I actually think the blur and distortion of being rough adds to the effect. Surreal dreamy imagery is fun like that. I'm adding this to the front page alongside the darkest fixfic tag.
But you forgot to edit this version of the story when you edited the one on SV.
"Path to Using My Power Better Than Crow Does."She considers Contessa a friend? She's been getting her claws into them all, hasn't she
And there's mom's influence!
And thanks, I've been trying to show how the timeskip has influenced the personalities of the characters.
Next chapter will at least show what it was.Did anyone catch the joke that Lisa was talking about, or is it going to be for the next chapter?
Actually, there was always a 0% chance of me doing that. Such a cheap, overdone cliché. I wanted to slap Wildbow with an angry trout when he pulled that shit in Worm.Funny, especially since you're putting so much efforts into an event that has something, like, 90% chance of being interrupted by Scion losing his shit and starting Gold Morning right in the middle of it.
Because that's definitely something you'd do. Fucking Hope Spot.
I mean, it's fine- awesome, even- when it is something that's part of the plot and makes sense. I could have had Insane!Grue and Butcher!Taylor interrupt the ceremony, and that would have made sense. Except the part where I decided to drop them as plot devices. But not Scion.
There's a reason most of my WildEndbringerAttacks! moments happened when people were just casually enjoying themselves. Or sleeping.
Grrrrrrrrr. Stupid probable-nascent-Entity, not letting me properly enjoy the fluff...
Darkest Fixfic, Futhermuckers!
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