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[RWBY] RWBY Shorts

Salem has depression.

Salem has a body that can't be altered.

Salem can eat all the junk food she wants to drown her woes.

Salem realizes this.

Salem becomes a massive foodie. She's not really interested in killing all the chefs and farmers that make the good food but she's still a threat to humanity.

Mostly because of how huge a resource drain she is (and because she still just let's the Grimm fuck around.)
 
The Arc Clan: The Belladonnas: Aunt Yoruichi 2
- - -



Jaune sighed as he got off the Bullhead onto the Beacon airship dock. It was already raining buckets. He knew the weather was going to turn ugly, but he just had to get the latest issue of Kamen Vale! He was supporting independent creators!



He opened up Crocea Mors and held it over his head. He walked out into the rain, the plinking of the raindrops against his shield already very annoying. He could make out some other students running for cover, or walking slowly with umbrellas.



Why didn't I think of that? Jaune sighed. His nana had hundreds of umbrellas, why hadn't he taken one of hers when he left Radian?



He made it into the Elphaba Gardens, a series of ruins and flowerbeds just outside Beacon proper, and took some refuge under a few pillars. He sighed and pulled out his Scroll: He was going to let his friends know he had made it but it might be a bit because of the rain...



"Meow..."



He paused and looked around. He spotted a black cat a few feet away, sitting on some marble bricks. It was soaked and looked deeply unhappy, as it too sought shelter from the downpour.



Jaune's heart melted.



"Aw..." He knelt down and smiled, holding his fingers out. "Here kitty kitty. Here."



The cat stared at him with bright yellow eyes. Jaune kept smiling.



"It's no fun being cold and wet in the rain, huh?" He asked in a low, even tone. "Come with me and I'll get you dry, warmed up, and fed. How's that?"



The cat considered things for a moment, as though staying out in the rain might be preferable. It then hopped off its bricks, and slowly approached with its tail and head held high. It paused to sniff Jaune's fingers curiously. Jaune kept smiling.



"That's it... You know I mean you no harm," he murmured softly.



The cat again turned up its nose... Before it dashed up to him and leaped into his arms. He cradled the cat against his hoodie, and it nestled into the warm fabric. Jaune chuckled.



"Told ya. Come on, let's get inside."



He held the shield up and ran. The cat curled up against his arm, but still dug its claws into his skin. Geez, even with Aura it smarted!



"You're pretty strong," Jaune said with a smile, "You have to be, to be here."



The cat purred.



- - -



Jaune got to JNPR's common room. He set the cat down, pulled some towels from a closet, and dried it off. It yowled a bit, but soon was purring happily as he gently warmed it up. He then headed to the kitchenette, rummaged through the cabinets, and pulled out some tuna cans. He smiled and opened them, dumping the contents onto a plate he set down on the floor.



"Blake really likes these, so I'm sure you will too," Jaune said, "You're both cats of discerning tastes."



The cat meowed in a way that almost sounded like laughter. Jaune blinked, then shrugged. It was pretty cute, after all.



He poured the cat some cream in a saucer as well, which it lapped up eagerly.



"You must have been starving," Jaune chuckled, "Poor thing."



He sighed as he looked over his clothes. Despite his best efforts, he was soaked.



"I'll be right back," he told the cat. He headed into the dormroom proper. He knocked first, just to ensure no more embarrassing moments.



(Why Pyrrha had THAT sexy a nightie, he had no idea. Nor why she didn't seem all that upset he'd seen her in it.)



He opened the door and looked around. Nobody was in. He frowned, then spotted a note on the desk. He walked over and read it.



Dear Jaune. Nora ran off to the zoo again so Ren and I are going to save her. We'll be back soon. Sorry. Lo-Sincerely Pyrrha.



Jaune smiled and sighed.



"Well, at least I don't have to talk to the cops this time," he sighed. He pulled off his armor and hoodie, then his undershirt. He looked over at the open door: The cat was staring at him. Jaune chuckled as he kept stripping.



"I guess nudity is fine with you-You've only got that fur coat on," he joked. The cat meowed. Jaune shrugged, then went into the shower. He turned it to scorching, and cleaned up. He exited about ten minutes later, feeling refreshed. The cat was still there, watching him. He dressed in a shirt and jeans, and picked the cat and some textbooks up. He walked out into the common room, intent on doing some studying and maybe figuring out what to do with the cat later. It claimed his lap, and he dutifully scratched behind its ears and stroked its back until it was purring happily.



He had just sat down at a desk and broken out his books and Scrolls... When the dormroom door burst open. Blake stood there, sniffing the air.



"Oh, hey Blake," Jaune said with a smile, "I thought it was game night?"



"It is," Blake confirmed, "But I smelled something..." She trailed off as she caught sight of the cat. The cat glanced at Blake with a smug look. Jaune looked down at the cat and then back up at Blake.



"Oh! I found this little guy outside, soaked to the bone," Jaune explained, "So I brought him inside to warm up and have some food. I fed him some tuna you like-Hope you don't mind?"



Blake's jaw dropped. She gaped in disbelief at the cat. Jaune blinked.



"Um... Blake? You okay?"



"I... Well..." Blake tried. "Um..."



The cat... Poofed into a cloud of smoke. In an instant, there was something else in Jaune's lap. A very female, very naked something else."



Jaune stared into yellow eyes. Yellow eyes in a heart-shaped face. A beautiful face attached to a very curvy, athletic and dark-skinned woman with cat ears, purple hair and a very smug expression.



Jaune felt like his entire body broke out in a blush, and he willed his eyes to stay on the cat woman's. She grinned.



"Well! He's certainly an improvement over your last boyfriend, Blake dear," Yoruichi chuckled, "He knows how to handle a pussy very well!"



"AUNT YORUICHI!" Blake screeched.



Jaune's eyes rolled back into his head as he fainted.



- - -



Let's be cool, mods. It's just how Yoruichi rolls. She is a massive troll and tease and she can't help appearing naked when she transforms.



Jaune awoke to Blake violently shaking his shoulder. He blinked and looked around: He was lying on a couch. Yoruichi was nowhere to be seen.



"Wha-Who-What-?"



"She's getting dressed in the dormroom," Blake hissed quietly.



"Wait, that was real?!" Jaune gasped in disbelief. Blake nodded with a sigh.



"Yes. Her Semblance lets her transform into a cat, apparently."



Jaune blinked several times, before his face turned bright red again.



"O-Oh... Um... Listen, I had no idea-"



"I know," Blake muttered. She sighed and rubbed her face. "Look: It's really complicated but I need you to... To play along, okay?"



"Play along with what?" Jaune asked, getting back to his feet. Blake opened her mouth to speak, but the door opened. Yoruichi entered, now dressed in black pants, sleek boots, an orange Mistral-style tunic over a black shirt , and her hair tied up in a ponytail.



None of this diminished her attractiveness in the slightest. Jaune's blush was a testament to that.



"Well, now that I'm decent," Yoruichi smirked, winking at the bright red Jaune, "Let's get the important stuff out of the way."



Blake opened her mouth.



"Auntie, I-!"



Yoruichi was in front of Blake in an instant, hugging her tightly. She beamed and nuzzled into the top of Blake's head.



"I'm so glad you're safe. You have any idea how worried we've all been about you?! Your mother is still crying herself to sleep every night! But thank God you're safe and away from those monsters."



Blake stammered.



"A-Auntie, I didn't-I mean-They weren't monsters! At-At the start," Blake allowed.



Yoruichi gave Blake a grave expression. She lifted her Scroll and activated the holographic projector. A beautiful tiger Faunus woman in a tanktop and robes was sitting on a throne and smiling. Next to her stood a tall young man with horns and spiky hair, wearing black robes and a mask over his eyes. Blake's eyes widened in horror as the recording began.



"Your daughter is doing well, Ghira and Kali," the woman spoke, a slight smirk on her face, "She serves our mission very well. She is in excellent health. She will continue to do so as long as you abide by our agreement." The tiger Faunus' smirk grew just a bit.



"Have no fear. When you are ready to step down, Blake will be more than ready to assume your leadership role... With myself as advisor, and Adam her worthy consort and protector." Sienna gestured to the man. Her smile became outright venomous as Adam nodded.



"We will purge the weakness from Menagerie, and humanity will be where they should be: Under our feet. I look forward to the day I can call you Father and Mother."



Blake's jaw dropped. Tears formed at the corners of her eyes. Jaune, unable to think of anything better, put an arm around her shoulders to support her as her knees wobbled.



Yoruichi shut off the Scroll, her face grim.



"They... All... All this time...?" Blake whispered, shaking.



Jaune guided her down to the couch as she trembled. Yoruichi knelt down to look Blake in the eyes and took her hands between hers.



"I've been trying to get in and rescue you for years, Blake," Yoruichi said softly, "But Sienna was trained in my arts too. And with the threat to your life? All I could do was keep an eye on you. If I could have gotten you out, I would have... I am so sorry, Blake."



Blake cried. She cried ugly, and loudly. Jaune, again bereft of ideas, pulled her into a hug. She sobbed into his chest, her shoulders shaking. He awkwardly patted her on the back, trying to sooth her.



"It's okay... It's okay," Jaune whispered.



It took her some time to pull herself together, but Blake managed it. Her eyes were red, and she was still sniffling, but she managed to face Yoruichi.



"No... I-I'm sorry," she whispered, "I-I was so stupid...!"



Yoruichi smiled and squeezed Blake's hand.



"We all are when we're young," Yoruichi said back, "But wisdom is acknowledging it, and striving to do better."



Blake nodded slowly. She sucked in a few calming breaths. She looked up at Jaune and flushed, before glancing away.



"Th-Thank you," she mumbled. Jaune smiled and shrugged awkwardly.



"I uh... It's okay," he said, "It's what you needed."



Yoruichi smiled.



"So... I take it Ozpin let you in?"



Blake nodded.



"He-He said he would offer me sanctuary... A chance to start over. He... Has he told my parents?"



"Yes," Yoruichi said, "But they wanted me to make sure you were all right. And that you were happy. Are you happy, Blake?"



Blake was silent, considering. She took another deep breath.



"I am," she said, "Happier than I was. Adam though-"



"We'll deal with him," Yoruichi said firmly, squeezing Blake's hands between hers. "He's dangerous, yes, but we will stand up to him."



Blake slowly nodded. Yoruichi smiled.



"So... Would you like to talk to your parents now?"



Blake's ears flattened against her skull. She slowly shook her head.



"I... I can't. Not right now," she said quietly.



"They will forgive you," Yoruichi encouraged, "They love you."



"That's what I'm afraid of," Blake muttered. Yoruichi sighed then shrugged.



"Well, it is up to you. I will just tell them you're all right," she said. She then smirked devilishly. "And that you have a handsome human boyfriend."



Jaune's eyes widened.



"Wait what?!" Jaune yelped. Yoruichi glared, a knife suddenly appearing in her hand. A knife she now had pointed at Jaune's throat.



"She is the princess of Menagerie, after all. No man should be so familiar with her unless he's seeking marriage."



Jaune gaped.



"N-No, I mean, we're friends-sort of-I'm just-!"



Blake took his hand and nodded frantically.



"Y-Yes! He's my boyfriend!" She babbled.



Jaune's eyes widened.



"Wha-?!"



"In fact, we're engaged!" Blake cried again.



"Blake, wha-!"



"I'M PREGNANT WITH HIS CHILD!" Blake blurted out.



Yoruichi pulled her knife away, all smiles.



"Well well! Good for you two! I'll report that to your parents! They'll be thrilled! I'll check up on you from time to time to see how the baby is coming along~! Bye~!"



With that, Yoruichi threw down a smoke bomb. When the fumes cleared, she was long gone. Jaune opened his mouth, closed it, and then opened it again as he turned to stare at the mortified Blake.



"Blake what in the fu-?!"



"I PANICKED!"
 
"I'M PREGNANT WITH HIS CHILD!" Blake blurted out.

Yoruichi pulled her knife away, all smiles.

"Well well! Good for you two! I'll report that to your parents! They'll be thrilled! I'll check up on you from time to time to see how the baby is coming along~! Bye~!"

With that, Yoruichi threw down a smoke bomb. When the fumes cleared, she was long gone. Jaune opened his mouth, closed it, and then opened it again as he turned to stare at the mortified Blake.

"Blake what in the fu-?!"

"I PANICKED!"

Come on, Blake, don't stop! It's not a lie if you make it true!
 
Probably. But she will likely start giving Blake baby clothes and other stuff as gifts just to mess with her.

I certainly hope that Yoruichi's just fucking with Blake.

I don't even really like Jaune, but he doesn't deserve any of the garbage to come if Blake's aunt actually took her at her word.
 
So, I could use ideas for how to continue the Sister Arc part of The Arc Clan. How does Aqua drive everyone crazy while being pregnant? And how do she and Kazuma reconcile?
Aqua is smart enough to know she can't have alcohol while pregnant. But that doesn't stop her from whining about it and getting bitchy.

Kazuma mitigates this and makes things slightly easier for everyone by learning how to make virgin cocktails. She still wants alcohol but now at least she can pretend and is a little less grumpy.
 
Inspired by another redhead with some confidence issues... What if Pyrrha had a sister? What if Pyrrha herself... Wasn't Pyrrha? Let's call her Megara instead.

(Named for the sister of Pyrrha the Theban Princess, who was the wife of Herakles/Hercules and whom Herakles killed when Hera drove him into a mad rage).

This Pyrrha was much as we know her: An incredible fighter with great talent and a kind heart. She was very confident and self assured in contrast to Megara's shyness. But something happened, an accident or an attack where she gave her life for Megara. End result? She died.

However, the twins were linked via their Aura, their Semblances, and their very souls. So when Pyrrha died... Her soul moved to Megara's body, alongside Pyrrha's own soul. Under these conditions, perhaps encouraged by her family, Megara took on the identity of Pyrrha since she now had her sister's memories. Or something shadier went down and she was pushed into pretending. Maybe psychosis took its toll and she forgot all about Megara due to the trauma of Pyrrha dying for her.

This partially explains her incredible power. She's powered by two Souls. She is two people in one body.

But something happens: A reminder of what killed the original Pyrrha, an Aura surge, memories of Megara awaken thanks to her seeing some old family photos... Whatever the reason? Pyrrha/Megara isn't sure who or what she is anymore. And she's desperate to find out who and what she is.

Based on Sumire/Kasumi from Persona 5.
 
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But something happens: A reminder of what killed the original Pyrrha, an Aura surge, memories of Megara awaken thanks to her seeing some old family photos... Whatever the reason? Pyrrha/Megara isn't sure who or what she is anymore. And she's desperate to find out who and what she is.

Based on Sumire/Kasumi from Persona 5.

So maybe lets say Jaune unlocking his semblance early due to Pyrrha/Megara getting injuried? and if we go Sumire/Kasumi why not go full persona like Pyrrha become not just a mask but since it's her soul moving in to her sis body a persona/stand [same thing] ?

If you thought fanon Pyrrha had it bad Pyrrha and Megara falling for Jaune? they only reason they aren't pregnant is they argue who's going first!
 
Gentlemen! My nature as a weeb has led me to a glorious crossover idea. A way to combine RWBY with RWBY chibi and make some level of sense. And all it takes is one romcom anime.

I am of course talking about

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So as a explanation. The basis of the anime is there's a school where based on how good your grades are is how good a class you get into. And based on how good your class is is how good equipment and stuff you get.

Like F class has old falling apart splinter filled desk and A class has everyone have a massage chair for their desk.

You can summon little chibi avatars with power levels dependent on your grades, they can't do any damage outside of special cases.

Classrooms can basically challenge each other to strategic battles where the losers gives up their classes shit to the winner (assuming they want it).


Also if you're a big enough dumbass they give you a special chibi summon that can actually interact with things physically. Since you're so hopeless they can at least get free labor out of you. (It's also the only chibi that shares damage with its summoner)


This seems like a pretty good fit for RWBY to be honest. Helps train combat and strategic thinking without sacrificing the fact that this is a school.
 
"Blake what in the fu-?!"



"I PANICKED!"

"My parents raised me to be a gentleman! I could never impregnate a woman whose erogenous zones I haven't mapped out yet!"
"I'm sorr - wait, what?"
"It's like that old saying in Radian; a ring on the finger for the rest of forever, but a bride with a kitty collar means babies next summer!"
"What?!"
"I haven't even asked you what kind of gemstone you want studded in your choker!"
*Blake.exe has shut down*
 
Original Character Do Steal: Warden Schnee New
Name: Warden Schnee
Allusion: Yukon Cornelius, Rudolph the Red-Nosed Reindeer
Naming Process: Warden means "to watch" or "to guard". It comes from the Old French word wardein, which means "guardian".
Age: 30s-40s
Background: The Schnees were once a family of modest means, until Nicholas Schnee discovered a new process of mining Dust that made him rich overnight. His two children, Warden and Willow, took different paths as their father founded the Schnee Dust Company: Warden went to trade and engineering school and became the top man for mining in the company, while Willow went to university and received training to become an upper class lady. The siblings, however, were inseparable and loved one another very much. With Willow handling the social arena and Warden the no-nonsense chief of operations, the SDC grew into one of the biggest companies in Atlas. However, all was not well. Nicholas died, and Willow's husband, Jacques Schnee, took over as CEO. He and Warden butted heads on almost everything. While Jacques had the backing of the board of directors and Willow (in most things), Warden had the backing of the workers and laborers. Things remained tense between Jacques and Warden: Even more so when Winter, Weiss and Whitley were born. Warden was very protective of his nieces and nephew, and acted as more of a father figure to them than Jacques ever did. At some point during a security breach, Warden was killed by White Fang terrorists. Jacques subsequently took direct control over the mining operations and while his efforts made the SDC into one of the richest companies on Remnant, it also ruined its reputation. Willow always suspected Jacques had something to do with Warden's death, but could never prove it.
Race: Human
Emblem: The Schnee Family Emblem
Weapon: "Lucky Strike" - A Dust Enhanced Pickaxe
Semblance: Schnee Family Semblance "Glyphs"
Allowed Warden to summon Glyphs he could combine with Dust to produce a wide variety of effects for combat, though he mainly used it mining.
Appearance: Tall, broad man with a bushy white beard, white hair, blue eyes. Slim jaw he hid with his beard. Heavily muscled. Scars on his hands and face from a Dust explosion years back.
Outfit: Dark blue coveralls, heavy boots, heavy leather gloves, hardhat. Simple trousers, button up shirt, tie and jacket when casual.
Personality: Stoic and professional, most of the time, but could be very hot blooded and courageous. When angry, was terrifying to behold. Deeply loved his family. Was not particularly concerned with wealth or appearances but did dress properly for public events. Valued his employees very dearly, even got heavily scarred saving several from a Dust explosion in a mine. Hated Jacques and never trusted him. Was said to be able to smell and taste Dust when it was near, and was an exceptional Dust miner and prospector.
 
You know, we need a reality where Warden survived but had to go into hiding and later revealed himself in a grand fashion to protect his family and kick Jacques' ass!!!

It'd make more sense that he's definitely dead, otherwise it'd ruin Weiss' V1 monologue to her Team about why she distrusts Faunus generally and hates the White Fang specifically even harder than canon did by not exploring it.
 
"I've been trying to get in and rescue you for years, Blake," Yoruichi said softly, "But Sienna was trained in my arts too. And with the threat to your life? All I could do was keep an eye on you. If I could have gotten you out, I would have... I am so sorry, Blake."

Jaune: "You mean the White Fang robbed us out of an erotic catgirl ninja in a tight black swimsuit and gave us a grumpy kitty?"
Blake: "Eh?"
Jaune: "WE COULD HAVE HAD 'FUN TEASE BLAKE' AND NOT 'CULTIST BLAKE'?!"
Blake: "EH?"
Jaune: "ADAM TAURUS, HOW DARE YOU ROB US OF BLAKE IN SKINTIGHT PAINTED-ON BODYSUITS!"

Inspired by another redhead with some confidence issues... What if Pyrrha had a sister? What if Pyrrha herself... Wasn't Pyrrha? Let's call her Megara instead.

(Named for the sister of Pyrrha the Theban Princess, who was the wife of Herakles/Hercules and whom Herakles killed when Hera drove him into a mad rage).

This Pyrrha was much as we know her: An incredible fighter with great talent and a kind heart. She was very confident and self assured in contrast to Megara's shyness. But something happened, an accident or an attack where she gave her life for Megara. End result? She died.

However, the twins were linked via their Aura, their Semblances, and their very souls. So when Pyrrha died... Her soul moved to Megara's body, alongside Pyrrha's own soul. Under these conditions, perhaps encouraged by her family, Megara took on the identity of Pyrrha since she now had her sister's memories. Or something shadier went down and she was pushed into pretending. Maybe psychosis took its toll and she forgot all about Megara due to the trauma of Pyrrha dying for her.

This partially explains her incredible power. She's powered by two Souls. She is two people in one body.

But something happens: A reminder of what killed the original Pyrrha, an Aura surge, memories of Megara awaken thanks to her seeing some old family photos... Whatever the reason? Pyrrha/Megara isn't sure who or what she is anymore. And she's desperate to find out who and what she is.

Based on Sumire/Kasumi from Persona 5.

When all is said and done and the sisters reconcile, Meg and Pyrrha are pretty easy to tell apart - Meg's ponytail is a lot more stylized and she's a lot snarkier and sassier. She's basically a redhead version of her Disney counterpart.

And when she gets a chance to separate...

Meg: "Hey Jaune, look! TWINS!"
*pulls down hers and Pyrrha's tops*
 
maybe they put Meg into something similar to penny.
or clone her a new body?
or insert magical BS reason
What about when they try to pull that half a maiden power out of amber instead meg shoots into amber, absorbs the weaker soul, and what's left of the maiden magic reshaped the body to more match the soul inside it?
 
What about when they try to pull that half a maiden power out of amber instead meg shoots into amber, absorbs the weaker soul, and what's left of the maiden magic reshaped the body to more match the soul inside it?
that could work....
alternatively could have her body snatch cinder on accident during the process and let poor amber live.
would be suitably ironic if nothing else
 
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that could work....
alternatively could have her body snatch cinder on accident during the process and let poor amber live.
would be suitably ironic if nothing else
Side note that after hearing you might not be able to get out of your head.

But am I the only one who looks at Amber and sees the control freak bitch from total drama Island
 
Let's say I were to ever do a RWBY fanfic with a new character in Beacon The first I will absolutely change is have them be Ruby's partner instead of Weiss and have Weiss herself partner up with Pyrrha Nikos, if only to force myself to be more creative with the plot.
You know I'm going to put my money where my mouth is; I want to see if I can actually do it (which is most likely not because of my laziness). while also making it a gamer fic, a genre of fanfics that I actively dislike.

Now you people might be wondering why I would make a fic of a genre that I dislike. Well, I don't really hate the idea of the genre, just the execution of it, which is why I am going to be using one of my old RWBY OCs from when I was still in high school.

Say hello to Nicholas Farran, the Vacuo-born ranger. (Honestly, his having a similar color scheme to the Marigold family is a coincidence considering I made this guy back around volume 5 but I might do something with that.).

Now to give you guys a basic plot on how Nicky here got the gamer powers, just know it was by complete chance he wasn't chosen to save the world or to become a god emperor ruling over Remenent with an iron fist by forces beyond his understanding. No, oh no, nothing like that.

When he was a kid, he stumbled on a dead body from the actual would-be gamer of the world in the desert (Man spawned in the middle of a desert; talk about bad luck) while he was scavenging for some stuff to sell with his older brother. After losing a game of rock, paper, scissors to his older brother, he was basically forced to search the body for valuables but touching the body transferred the gamer powers to him.

Honestly, considering Nicholas is from a frontier town, he doesn't have much in education so he can't really read at first but he does know numbers after selling stuff so when he told Victor (the older brother.) his newfound "semblance," he only had one thing to say.

"Your semblance just makes you see numbers around people?"

"Yeah, pretty much."

"Wow, that sounds pretty lame."

Honestly, what do you guys think I'm in the workshop phase right now. Anything you guys suggest I change?
 
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