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Another idea I had was a twist on Jaune becoming a superhero, based on Marvel. Because there's one Marvel hero Jaune really should be.
After he gets bit and gets his powers, Jaune goes into Vale with his sister Orchid and dad Nick. He shows off on a TV show to get money that he plans to use to get into Beacon, while his dad is on an errand and Orchid is buying a video game. The producer shorts him because his powers aren't really THAT impressive, so Jaune, in a moment of spite, lets a thief run out with the money from the show.
... Who then kills Orchid, by accident, while trying to steal the Arc family truck.
Jaune goes after the guy. He gets to him before Nick does.
Sees his face... Staggers back. It's the thief he let go. It's all Jaune's fault.
The murderer falls out a window and dies, right in front of Nick who had been about to storm the building.
Nick: snarl "I've been denied everything... Even my revenge..."
Nick goes into the building and finds Jaune. He assumes the guy took Jaune hostage, but Jaune says he tracked him down. So Nick agrees that Jaune should train to be a Huntsman, after some therapy.
Isabel isn't happy. And Jaune... Is even less happy. He's got his dream and it got his little sister killed. It's all his fault.
But he resolves to do his best to make sure he NEVER makes a mistake like that again, and to use his power responsibly to save others.
As the Amazing Spider-Man.
After he gets bit and gets his powers, Jaune goes into Vale with his sister Orchid and dad Nick. He shows off on a TV show to get money that he plans to use to get into Beacon, while his dad is on an errand and Orchid is buying a video game. The producer shorts him because his powers aren't really THAT impressive, so Jaune, in a moment of spite, lets a thief run out with the money from the show.
... Who then kills Orchid, by accident, while trying to steal the Arc family truck.
Jaune goes after the guy. He gets to him before Nick does.
Sees his face... Staggers back. It's the thief he let go. It's all Jaune's fault.
The murderer falls out a window and dies, right in front of Nick who had been about to storm the building.
Nick: snarl "I've been denied everything... Even my revenge..."
Nick goes into the building and finds Jaune. He assumes the guy took Jaune hostage, but Jaune says he tracked him down. So Nick agrees that Jaune should train to be a Huntsman, after some therapy.
Isabel isn't happy. And Jaune... Is even less happy. He's got his dream and it got his little sister killed. It's all his fault.
But he resolves to do his best to make sure he NEVER makes a mistake like that again, and to use his power responsibly to save others.
As the Amazing Spider-Man.