Fulcon
Working on a new project.
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I'll point out that all writing is the prototype of later less bad writing. It's an Elder Scrolls skill system thing, and most of us start in the low 20s if we're lucky.
Which means that, no matter what, I'm going to eventually hate what I write.
...I'm scared, plumber. Hold me.
I figure one way to achieve an success is to convince Hisako with his low charisma so she'd convince the other. Leverage her superior charisma by deligation.
That is actually what I went for in the previous draft, helped along by factors outside of Daisuke or even Hisako's control. I think it's a good idea, still, even if my execution was lacking.
Funnily enough, I have an image of him setting up overly complex dominos that would puzzle anyone who isn't a genius. It's not his characterization so far... but that 10 intelligence and luck just... makes me think...
And now I've got another idea I want to use for a future story. Because it could work really well.
Thank you, have a cookie.
That shit is how you assume newbies get murdered on their first mission outside the village, and you're having NONE OF IT!
I mean, you're not wrong. Have another cookie.