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The Skittering Chaos (Worm/Hazbin Hotel)

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Thread Necromancer said:
I focus on the bug, and push my energy into it, willing myself to take control over it, to control it like I used to control my insects back when I was alive.

The beaklike head of the insect dives for my hand, and it stops. I can see, in it's beady little eyes, a small mote of light, as if deep in it's eyes, was a small candle light. By my will it moves it's head back, and it faces towards me.

I grin.
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Well, there goes the neighbourhood... :D
 
Erwidze said:
Actually now that I reread the section about the bug control, it isn't diminished like I thought (I skimmed a little too fast and got the wrong impression), it just changed a bit, cause now she can't sense and control them the instant she sees them, so she has to master each bug herself but now she controls them permanently? I think that is the case, she probably doesn't have a range as they have a part of her magic inside them. Probably can't use

Kinda feels like what second trigger would look like if Skitter was a single trigger cape.
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Pretty much what I'm going with in this case. Though there may be a bit more to it than that but you are correct in that she will have to master each bug individually now.
 
stads said:
good to see the bug powers coming back in action
will be fun to see the angels faces during cleaning and meeting the swarm :D
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Oh I can't wait. Only other Worm/Hazbin Hotel fic I saw stopped right after she'd fucked up a bunch of angels in the purge and meeting Alastor, which makes sense since that's as far as the pilot got.

People thought she ha umbrakinesis for a bit when they watched black tendrils grab angels and slam them around, only to zoom in and notice it was bugs, loooots of bugs.

Especially loved the fanart

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All I have to say is as follows.

"BEEEEES!"

Edit: I am suddenly reminded of a qoute.

"... Does Hell have beds? You'd think they'd have beds of spikes. Or spiders. Or spiky spiders. Spikers."

Not going to lie, I really want to see Taylor get her hands/brain/magic on some spikers.
 
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Emperor Lee said:
Oh I can't wait. Only other Worm/Hazbin Hotel fic I saw stopped right after she'd fucked up a bunch of angels in the purge and meeting Alastor, which makes sense since that's as far as the pilot got.

People thought she ha umbrakinesis for a bit when they watched black tendrils grab angels and slam them around, only to zoom in and notice it was bugs, loooots of bugs.

Especially loved the fanart

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I quite enjoyed that fic and the fan art to but I found that Taylor was much to OOC in that considering she was making the same mistake that people always made wither her with Alistor. Honestly she needed a major ass kicking in that to get her back on track.

24caratcoal said:
All I have to say is as follows.

"BEEEEES!"
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Bees! Where!? All I see are wasps!
 
24caratcoal said:
So long as Skitter sees her first, there is no issue with this.
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Now that I think about it it might be interesting if people came up with various demonic bug ideas. Hell is basically a Death world/Daemon world that only really manages to have civilization around because you just can't kill a Demon. Hell the denser alleys mazes of Pentagram City are filled with Biters, basically Tyrannid Hormagants without the scythe blades and are immune to fire.
 
Taylor once more has bugs, and all is right in the underworld. Looking forward to what comes next!

I'm actually kind of surprised that Mimi isn't Burnscar, I thought that was the twist that was happening there. I guess it's my fault for assuming there's only one Mimi in the entirety of Hell.
 
ElegiacCrown said:
Taylor once more has bugs, and all is right in the underworld. Looking forward to what comes next!

I'm actually kind of surprised that Mimi isn't Burnscar, I thought that was the twist that was happening there. I guess it's my fault for assuming there's only one Mimi in the entirety of Hell.
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I won't disabuse you of the notion that my initial planning might have changed at some point because my ideas are rather fluid and easily changeable unless I have a scene in my mind that absolutely has to happen, and even then, how it happens can change.
 
Thread Necromancer said:
I won't disabuse you of the notion that my initial planning might have changed at some point because my ideas are rather fluid and easily changeable unless I have a scene in my mind that absolutely has to happen, and even then, how it happens can change.
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Hello? Excuse me, this may be out to the blue, but I think we might be related :V
 
Thread Necromancer said:
In regards to Mimi, I didn't realise that Burnscar's name was Mimi when I introduced her.
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She's the one asking questions about the Nine, too.
"Damn. I don't think I coulda eveah waited that long to use mah powers."
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missing, of course, that costume creation WAS using her powers…
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deafen
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'Silence' would be more usual as regards firearms. "Neutralizes sound" is direction-agnoistic unlike deafen(in) or silence(out).
once and a while
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once in a while
box a bullets
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box o' bullets
accelerats
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accelerates
Long had by fear of insects
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my fear
it's long beak-like nose
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its
it's beady little eyes, a small mote of light, as if deep in it's eyes, was a small candle light. By my will it moves it's head back,
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its [×3]
 
Catter said:
I mean I'm not coming up with it, but I feel like the cy-bugs from Wreck-It Ralph would fit right in.
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Would be an interesting thing that the demons might have to deal with, perhaps some kind of mechanical menace that demons have to deal with every once and a while. Or I could make them biological and just have it that they are effectively a major nuisance and Satan every once and a while fires off a lazer or something whenever a hive gets either too big or too close to his favorite spots in Hell. Heck it could be some product of another mad scientists like Sir Pentious that went too far. Hell, it'd be interesting to have the Eagleton Robot Army fighting an eternal war with the Cy-bugs. Taylor would just have to introduce the Cy-bugs into Earth Bet by accident and then boom, eternal robot wars maybe.

Kitty S. Lillian said:
She's the one asking questions about the Nine, too.
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That is true, but then the Nine were a big thing in North America, and Mimi is from North America.

Kitty S. Lillian said:
missing, of course, that costume creation WAS using her powers…
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True but Skidmark's power is more easily applied to combat scenarios without much thought were as Taylor's requires some thought other than "Swarm them with the big bad bugs" and Skidmark's initial thoughts are of direct combat since that's what he mostly used his for, other than area denial or imprisoning people for gladiator fights.
 
Thread Necromancer said:
I quite enjoyed that fic and the fan art to but I found that Taylor was much to OOC in that considering she was making the same mistake that people always made wither her with Alistor. Honestly she needed a major ass kicking in that to get her back on track.
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Heheh, did you read the omakes? More specifically, the beelzebub omakes?
 
Emperor Lee said:
Heheh, did you read the omakes? More specifically, the beelzebub omakes?
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I read some of them, they were quite amusing. Heck, could have that half to a third of the insectile horrors here are because of ol' Beelzebub fucking around with buggies.

Edit: It might be amusing to have ol' Lucy call up Beelzebub

"Good morning Beelzebub, I've just heard the most intriguing rumor!"
"And what would that be?"
"Why that you are being sweet on a girl, and giving her some of your power! Congratulations are in order I would think!"
"What?"
"Is that not what is going on? Oh I see! Another child then! Well either way, congratulations! Now I have some important buissness to do, but stop by my place at some point and we can pop some champagne together! Hahaha. Tata~!"
"... What!?"
 
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Thread Necromancer said:
I read some of them, they were quite amusing. Heck, could have that half to a third of the insectile horrors here are because of ol' Beelzebub fucking around with buggies.

Edit: It might be amusing to have ol' Lucy call up Beelzebub

"Good morning Beelzebub, I've just heard the most intriguing rumor!"
"And what would that be?"
"Why that you are being sweet on a girl, and giving her some of your power! Congratulations are in order I would think!"
"What?"
"Is that not what is going on? Oh I see! Another child then! Well either way, congratulations! Now I have some important buissness to do, but stop by my place at some point and we can pop some champagne together! Hahaha. Tata~!"
"... What!?"
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Beezlebub: "Hey weren't you one of those cultist girls, who managed to summon me in the 90's?"
Taylor: "Um no? I was born in the 90's."
B: "Are you sure? The name is on my tongue ... Annabell, no! Anne Rose right?"
T: "What?"
B: "Ah, those were the days" *wistful mile*
T: "WHAT!"

I'm fairly certain someone made a similar joke on that story thread as well.
 
wasntme said:
Beezlebub: "Hey weren't you one of those cultist girls, who managed to summon me in the 90's?"
Taylor: "Um no? I was born in the 90's."
B: "Are you sure? The name is on my tongue ... Annabell, no! Anne Rose right?"
T: "What?"
B: "Ah, those were the days" *wistful mile*
T: "WHAT!"

I'm fairly certain someone made a similar joke on that story thread as well.
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They did indeed. It would be interesting to have it be like that. Could also have it be Danny who was into the demon shit, or his ancestors had a curse of the 3rd child of Hebert will, during his first child's conception, will be possessed by the lord Beelzebub and his child will be of Beelzebub. But then this isn't particularly relevant at the moment.
 
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They did indeed. It would be interesting to have it be like that. Could also have it be Danny who was into the demon shit, or his ancestors had a curse of the 3rd child of Hebert will, during his first child's conception, will be possessed by the lord Beelzebub and his child will be of Beelzebub. But then this isn't particularly relevant at the moment.
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The bugs viewing taylor as their Lady would certainly explain why Taylor was so easily able to adapt to bug powers despite having a traumatic experience that undoubtedly involved a lot of bugs.
 
Erwidze said:
If you are still looking for inspiration for hell bugs, here are a few that caught my fancy while I was browsing Artstation:
Humanoid bug
The last photo has some nightmarish looking bugs
And the one if really wanna give denizens of hell a real nightmare
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These are very nice, I can see that if Beelzebub does manages to find his way into this, at least some of these would be of his creation. I was also thinking of using the human bug hybrids from that one short film as something he has made as well out of some of the sinners that displease him, or are contracted to him. Bodies he has made to stick demons into when they finally fall to hell and become his. Maybe as punishment, maybe for a purpose. Or heck, maybe some expedition of humans came into hell and managed to piss of Beelzebub off so he punished them like a raging Greek god.
 
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These are very nice, I can see that if Beelzebub does manages to find his way into this, at least some of these would be of his creation. I was also thinking of using the human bug hybrids from that one short film as something he has made as well out of some of the sinners that displease him, or are contracted to him. Bodies he has made to stick demons into when they finally fall to hell and become his. Maybe as punishment, maybe for a purpose. Or heck, maybe some expedition of humans came into hell and managed to piss of Beelzebub off so he punished them like a raging Greek god.
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You did mention, IIRC, that Lucifer could shoot a laser once in a while at the nearby hives of wildlife near the city, Belzy could be one of the leaders of outside demons leading them. Perhaps feral from the beginning, or a disgraced Overlord gone mad, exiled for trying to overthrow Luci or for an experiment gone wrong. All the bug invasions once in a while are his countinious attempts to make a strain of bug-demons resistant enouth to get to the city for the revenge. Could be a plot point that he thinks he is The Bug demon, and no one else can have that title or something like that, or perhaps he thinks that Taylor is interesting enouth to experiment on.
 
Erwidze said:
You did mention, IIRC, that Lucifer could shoot a laser once in a while at the nearby hives of wildlife near the city, Belzy could be one of the leaders of outside demons leading them. Perhaps feral from the beginning, or a disgraced Overlord gone mad, exiled for trying to overthrow Luci or for an experiment gone wrong. All the bug invasions once in a while are his countinious attempts to make a strain of bug-demons resistant enouth to get to the city for the revenge. Could be a plot point that he thinks he is The Bug demon, and no one else can have that title or something like that, or perhaps he thinks that Taylor is interesting enouth to experiment on.
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Like I said I'm not sure what his role could be, though I was kind of leaning towards the mad scientist kind of guy, or those wizards that make experiments and then they escape. Since more of his work would be on insects and possibly have a sense of gluttony to them it could also just be that they are just threats that Beelzebub doesn't care to deal with like with most overlords. Only reason Luci might even do that is because it's easier to just blast a hive about to hit critical mass than to let the others deal with it. I do know that things like this are a big threat to those outside, due to the gluttony and cannibalism and such.

He is also known as the Prince of false... gods... oh my... That's rather interesting considering that Taylor is on her way to being worshiped by a cult.
 
VisV said:
It's Taylor with time to plan and build her power and study her enemy.
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That's actually her at her least dangerous. The thing a lot of people forget about Taylor is that she can't hold onto a grudge very long. Now a goal, or a constantly looming threat, those she can cling to for years on end.

But yeah, she fairly frequently will team up with people she recently was enemies with
 
Mastigos2 said:
That's actually her at her least dangerous. The thing a lot of people forget about Taylor is that she can't hold onto a grudge very long. Now a goal, or a constantly looming threat, those she can cling to for years on end.

But yeah, she fairly frequently will team up with people she recently was enemies with
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Yeah, Taylor with free time and no looming threats is relatively chill and unlikely to make a lot of splash, give her an enemy or goal she can focus on and the woman turns into a damn terminator.
 
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