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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

I don't think it'll be that difficult to convince Superman that letting someone that committed a genocide raise a child is not the best of ideas.

Eeeehhhh… he can be a great person, but as the Daxamites proved, he can also be a stubborn, stupid jackass. Note that the only thing he apologized for regarding that incident was trying to kill Paul - specifically, the thing he was mind controlled into doing. The one thing he knew Paul would forgive him for, or rather, that there was nothing to forgive, because he was mind controlled and couldn't be held accountable for his actions.

His morality demands that he see his moral code as the highest thing - and a lot of the time, he can be what the newest Superman movie was. "People were going to die." "Of course I put him against a cactus; he was trying to commit genocide." Clark can be amazing, a determined person trying to do good in a world that keeps getting murky and daring people to do nothing, out of fear of the consequences.

Or he can follow a code that says that drug users are bad, black and white. That women don't commit genocide, and mothers are always blameless, and should always be in charge of their child as long as they aren't outright molesting them/trying to kill them, since they love them. Old-fashioned and based on a ton of unsupported assumptions - he can be Golden Age Superman, who attacked weapons dealers and beat back physical abusers, or he can be what the corporations turned him into, a pretty supermodel talking about how it would be great if we all just got along and smiled at each other and trusted the system - and in this case, I'm not hopeful, because it's connected to his blind spots (Krypton, and parents).
 
Eeeehhhh… he can be a great person, but as the Daxamites proved, he can also be a stubborn, stupid jackass. Note that the only thing he apologized for regarding that incident was trying to kill Paul - specifically, the thing he was mind controlled into doing. The one thing he knew Paul would forgive him for, or rather, that there was nothing to forgive, because he was mind controlled and couldn't be held accountable for his actions.
To be fair to Superman about the Daxamite situation, you have to remember that it wasn't that long ago that Paul drugged Batman with a serum that turned him into a psychopath.

Bruce is Clark's friend and now Clark has to watch as his friend turns into a dictator.

What Paul did may have been necessary and got rid of Anti-Life, but it was still messed up.

The outcome of his actions may be good, but the actions themselves leave a lot to be desired.

It's not that difficult to imagine that Superman would want a second opinion instead of just taking Paul at his word.

Even if he knew that Paul wasn't lying, he also knows that Paul has a...unique way of seeing things.
 
Eeeehhhh… he can be a great person, but as the Daxamites proved, he can also be a stubborn, stupid jackass. Note that the only thing he apologized for regarding that incident was trying to kill Paul - specifically, the thing he was mind controlled into doing. The one thing he knew Paul would forgive him for, or rather, that there was nothing to forgive, because he was mind controlled and couldn't be held accountable for his actions.

His morality demands that he see his moral code as the highest thing - and a lot of the time, he can be what the newest Superman movie was. "People were going to die." "Of course I put him against a cactus; he was trying to commit genocide." Clark can be amazing, a determined person trying to do good in a world that keeps getting murky and daring people to do nothing, out of fear of the consequences.

Or he can follow a code that says that drug users are bad, black and white. That women don't commit genocide, and mothers are always blameless, and should always be in charge of their child as long as they aren't outright molesting them/trying to kill them, since they love them. Old-fashioned and based on a ton of unsupported assumptions - he can be Golden Age Superman, who attacked weapons dealers and beat back physical abusers, or he can be what the corporations turned him into, a pretty supermodel talking about how it would be great if we all just got along and smiled at each other and trusted the system - and in this case, I'm not hopeful, because it's connected to his blind spots (Krypton, and parents).
No offense but I feel like you're projecting a certain view onto Superman that doesn't match the characterization of him in the story. Frankly speaking, him sneaking off to Daxam to confirm for himself was genuinely the right thing to do given what he knew. Paul has shown to have a very different modus operandi that is at odds with the Justice League and he hasn't really cultivated the relationship with the League for them to believe him with no pushback.

Superman being weird on the upcoming issue is a given as you've rightly pointed out that it's connected to the things he's more sensitive about. However, until we see what he actually does, I feel like any judgement would be premature.
 
No offense but I feel like you're projecting a certain view onto Superman that doesn't match the characterization of him in the story. Frankly speaking, him sneaking off to Daxam to confirm for himself was genuinely the right thing to do given what he knew. Paul has shown to have a very different modus operandi that is at odds with the Justice League and he hasn't really cultivated the relationship with the League for them to believe him with no pushback.

Superman being weird on the upcoming issue is a given as you've rightly pointed out that it's connected to the things he's more sensitive about. However, until we see what he actually does, I feel like any judgement would be premature.
I mean, I give grieve to the Illustres for being so weird and villain-forgiving, but I don't doubt his good intentions nor his, frankly, strange honesty. He doesn't shy from reporting his weird and sometimes even objectionable actions. That Superman doesn't trust Paul to the level that he had to go check himself, even when the Illustres has saved or helped to save the world multiple times?

And let's not forget, not trusting Paul's word led to Superman opening himself to corruption/mind control and if the Illustres wasn't who he is, Superman would have killed a fellow hero that he apparently didn't trust.

The Illustres does have a different Modus Operandi and he doesn't want the Justice League to follow his, but that doesn't mean that every decision or action he makes has to be double checked by them. He might not be as close to most of the members, but I believe he merits some trust from everyone after everything he has done. Superman wouldn't even know of Daxam if Paul hadn't told him, in the first place.
 
It's not that Superman doesn't trust Paul, it's that Superman understands that Paul doesn't always view things through the same lens that he does, and Paul's perspective on things can sometimes be... not necessarily biased but unusual compared to the average human being.

Double checking something extreme to make sure that you have understood Paul correctly and aren't making the wrong assumptions is pretty reasonable given his track history. It is rather unfortunate that in that instance it resulted in mind control, but this is the DC-verse, getting unexpectedly mind controlled is just a reality that you have to deal with sometimes.

e: Also like, Paul isn't perfect, he can and has made mistakes. When you're dealing with something serious like potential child kidnapping it is entirely sensible to double check and make sure that everything lines up correctly.

I wouldn't be surprised if Superman fully expected to find out that everything that Paul had said about Daxam was true, but he decided to double check just in case, which is really not unreasonable. Trusting people is fine, but when something is important you double check anyway just to be sure, because sometimes shit happens.
 
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To be fair to Superman about the Daxamite situation, you have to remember that it wasn't that long ago that Paul drugged Batman with a serum that turned him into a psychopath.

Bruce is Clark's friend and now Clark has to watch as his friend turns into a dictator.

What Paul did may have been necessary and got rid of Anti-Life, but it was still messed up.

The outcome of his actions may be good, but the actions themselves leave a lot to be desired.

It's not that difficult to imagine that Superman would want a second opinion instead of just taking Paul at his word.

Even if he knew that Paul wasn't lying, he also knows that Paul has a...unique way of seeing things.

…he hasn't had any unease at 'seeing Batman turn into a dictator.' We've seen him talk to Paul about Batman; he trusts Batman, so his basic assumption is that he isn't doing anything wrong. Once he knew Paul undid the formula, he dropped it.

And frankly, yes, Paul should have had more backups. He should have noticed that he didn't have a boom tube equivalent and made contacts with more of his alternative selves, or with morally decent yellow lanterns in other verses. He should have been prepared, and even the way he dosed Batman was stupid; he nearly got himself killed in a surprise attack. Heck, he could have used Crane.

But he very much saved the world at the last second by doing so, after trying and failing to find an alternative for multiple arcs. That's a desperation move, and not typical of him; it can be used to show how far he'll go, but not what his typical behavior was like.

And he did inform them of how bad Sodom had it, if indirectly. With Diana, who can hear outright lies.

If Superman thought Paul was lying, or hiding something about how secretly evil his actions were? Truth lasso. "What are you hiding about this?" "Is there anything you think you haven't considered?" Etc.

It's such a basic, Perfect effect - designed to end nonsense like this - and Diana had it, in the room. It makes them look progressively dumber each time they sneak around rather than just pushing the win button; kind of like when they didn't Lasso Clone Roy as he babbled about moles and in-universe mentioned mind control when talking about Kon. In canon. For fuck's sake, it takes five minutes to clear this stuff up!

Which it did. In canon. After Lex repeatedly used Red Sun on Kon, he finally went to M'gann for help after the Big Reveal… meaning they never checked for something that wouldn't be his fault, even when Red Arrow admitted that it was a way someone could be the more while still being trustworthy as a person. Because, you know.

You can't really have things like the Lasso or Judge's Ear Technique in an intrigue plot. They sort of take those plots behind a shed out back and shoot them.

No offense but I feel like you're projecting a certain view onto Superman that doesn't match the characterization of him in the story. Frankly speaking, him sneaking off to Daxam to confirm for himself was genuinely the right thing to do given what he knew. Paul has shown to have a very different modus operandi that is at odds with the Justice League and he hasn't really cultivated the relationship with the League for them to believe him with no pushback.

Superman being weird on the upcoming issue is a given as you've rightly pointed out that it's connected to the things he's more sensitive about. However, until we see what he actually does, I feel like any judgement would be premature.

Truth. Lasso. And in that previous example, he gave them more than enough reason to understand how awful Daxam and Ms. Yat were; they just ignored him. If they didn't trust him? Truth lasso. If they seriously thought he was committing a crime and lying about it? Truth lasso. It was in the fucking room, and he would have consented in a hot second to being lassoed, because he's done that before, time and time again.

I mean, I give grieve to the Illustres for being so weird and villain-forgiving, but I don't doubt his good intentions nor his, frankly, strange honesty. He doesn't shy from reporting his weird and sometimes even objectionable actions. That Superman doesn't trust Paul to the level that he had to go check himself, even when the Illustres has saved or helped to save the world multiple times?

And let's not forget, not trusting Paul's word led to Superman opening himself to corruption/mind control and if the Illustres wasn't who he is, Superman would have killed a fellow hero that he apparently didn't trust.

The Illustres does have a different Modus Operandi and he doesn't want the Justice League to follow his, but that doesn't mean that every decision or action he makes has to be double checked by them. He might not be as close to most of the members, but I believe he merits some trust from everyone after everything he has done. Superman wouldn't even know of Daxam if Paul hadn't told him, in the first place.

Truth Lasso, and… yes. Even if he isn't a flawless superhero, Paul has indeed earned some trust - enough that Smilexing Batman was an unforeseen, unforgivable betrayal, even when (as stupid as it was that he ended up in that situation in the first place) it was the only way to make the White Light and stop the Anti-Life.

I mean, for fuck's sake. Talk to Hinon about tracking down Lord Protector, and use the fact that Mr. Miracle has a mother box that can, as R!Grayven has shown, casually open book tubes to other universes if you know where you want to go. Prepare for the worst, you're in DC!

But yeah. And if we want to go for outright ad hominem, I could say that the League was complicit in exploiting a slave in Mr. Zatara, something which they've never really seen any punishment or accountability for, so why doesn't Paul have to double check everything they do? But outside of that, and their insistence on leaving open wide windows of weakness for every Master, Stranger, Trump and Stranger to take advantage of… they've mostly been ok. So he doesn't. Because it's not representative of their general behavior.
 
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Diana's lasso forces you to tell the truth as you understand it.

It is entirely possible to tell the truth as you understand it and just be wrong.

That's not even getting into whether forcing an ally to submit to mind control is a more reasonable course of action than just, like, taking a look for yourself to make sure.


If Daxam was known for mind controlling people then sure going to take a look would be stupid. But they weren't, there was literally zero reason to believe that going to Daxam would result in Superman being mind controlled.

You cannot predict everything and sudden unexpected mind control is one of those things that is impossible to always predict in the DC-verse, sometimes you just have to deal with it.
 
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That Superman doesn't trust Paul to the level that he had to go check himself, even when the Illustres has saved or helped to save the world multiple times?
It's not about trust. I'll refer you to Mr Zoat's own words.
Regarding Superman taking a trip to Daxam himself... The SI is not a member of the Justice League. Superman is effectively his superior. Him wanting to get an idea for himself what Daxam is like is completely reasonable, and the SI didn't know that the Eradicator Program was there. Is there something I'm missing?

The Illustres does have a different Modus Operandi and he doesn't want the Justice League to follow his, but that doesn't mean that every decision or action he makes has to be double checked by them. He might not be as close to most of the members, but I believe he merits some trust from everyone after everything he has done. Superman wouldn't even know of Daxam if Paul hadn't told him, in the first place.
The Justice League has shown trust though. Mind you, they learned of the situation when the birth mother framed it as her child being kidnapped. See the following except.
"Green Lantern." She sounds like she is only reluctantly talking to him, but that's more than I managed. "You are a police officer for this world?"

"For this region of space. And unless you've got a very good reason to be here, I'm going to need you to turn your ship around."

"Yes. I do. My name is Cara Yat. My son has been kidnapped, and I have reason to believe that he is being held here. I want him returned, at once."
"Paul…" Superman looks decidedly disappointed. "Child kidnapping?"

I nod. "Effectively, yes."

He dips his head, sighs, then looks down the Watchtower table to Diana.

"We'd like an explanation, Paul."

Then in part 8, Paul gave his rundown on events and he only faced some questioning from the JL. From our perspective, it's annoying as we know OL is right and Daxam really is that bad, but that's the burden of being a reader, I guess.

Truth. Lasso. And in that previous example, he gave them more than enough reason to understand how awful Daxam and Ms. Yat were; they just ignored him. If they didn't trust him? Truth lasso. If they seriously thought he was committing a crime and lying about it? Truth lasso. It was in the fucking room, and he would have consented in a hot second to being lassoed, because he's done that before, time and time again.
The Truth Lasso makes the user give the truth as they see it, cutting through those little lies we tell ourselves while doing so. It isn't Google. It's entirely possible that he could've gotten the situation completely wrong in which the Lasso wouldn't do anything except confirm OL's personal truth.

Also, nothing screams "we don't trust you" like OL being forcibly made to tell the truth, an action which would spit in the face of his good works. The only times OL has been truth lassoed has been to confirm to reality that he was alive during Zagreus' Anti-Life retrieval and when he was interrogated after the death of Nabu. Hardly, "time and time again" as you put it.

Given everything, the Justice League would've been in the wrong to Truth Lasso him.
 
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He has offered and willingly submitted to Truth Lasso more times than that - see Coup Data, for example. Diana hasn't always gone through with it (even after he volunteered), and it was especially hit-and-run early on, when he did indeed get Truth Lassoed by Kaldur to confirm her wasn't the mole - namely, because it got him high as a kite and rendered him rapidly incoherent.

But it's still a perfect effect that discourages self-deception. And forcing the lasso on him is not the same as offering to let him use the lasso to confirm what he's talking about. Especially when he brings it up on occasion, and genuinely believes (if perhaps foolishly) that magical truth compulsion comes with no downsides if you have nothing to hide. It means that they have no excuse to say, "Well, I didn't really believe him." What he told them about Daxam, combined with his empathic abilities and what he told them about Sodom Yat in particular was enough for them to back off. They didn't, because the words Cara Yat used pushed their buttons, even after he outright told them that Sodom could go back whenever he wanted (literally, because Orange Power Ring), was kept away from the fighting, and that his father tried to murder a castaway in front of him after he befriended the castaway. Instead of asking for more details on Daxam? They kept telling him how important this Accusation was.

And if they'd agreed with Cara Yat, and tried to enforce their will? Sodom would likely have simply left Earth and gone to Maltus, outside of their jurisdiction. Given how they acted, I'm hesitant to applaud their 'restraint' and 'even-handedness' in a situation where they lacked total dominance; they gave the impression that they would have indeed handed Sodom back to his mother bar immediate accusations of 'yes, she was planning on sacrificing him to the Ebon Dragon for the Broken Winged Crane."

I'm not saying they're the most evil people in the world. But I didn't spend that entire arc feeling a visceral loathing for them solely out of trauma.
 
I can give Paul some slack just cause, in story time, he's not actually been doing this that long? How long has it actually been ATM since his insert?
 
Negotiations (part 20) New
12th August 2013
13:34 GMT

What?

I look around at the sound-.

Lar-On has… Burst, red fur replacing his skin, talons replacing fingernails and a face like Beastman from He-Man replacing his usual face.

How-?

Okay, there's a dozen superheroes standing-.

Heat vision slashes out in the direction he was looking, cutting through the force field emitters!

Uh-?

Lar-On dives forwards as the backups activate, narrowly avoiding both Amon's grasping hand and the reactivated barrier!

How-?

We let him get powered up because he didn't commit a crime and we need the help, but-.

Kal-El flies at him, swinging his right fist towards Lar-On's face. Lar-On ducks, claws swiping through the decking and-

The force field around Dru-Zod and Ursa Dou-Ka vanishes.

-heat vision flaring, narrowly missing Kal-El as he jinks to the side but slicing though the cage containing the prisoners.

What?

Dru-Zod batters the weakened bars apart with the manacles around his arms and charges out, Ursa Dou-Ka just behind him!

I… Don't-.

Wait, this feels like-. Like when I was hit by the intellect suppressor, I should-.

Armour.

It flashes into being around me and oh that's better. I-.

Lar-On backhands me through a wall.

Crunmch!

Ugh. Up.

Superman's fighting Lar-On in a confined space, and Lar-On's desires are… Suppressed. He's lashing out in an instinctive and primal response to existing, not out of a desire to kill a particular individual. It's too simple for me to just turn off or down.

Fly back, add my construct barrier to the one Jordan is making while Carol tries encasing Lar-On in crystal.

"Har-Zod, shut down the force field so I can make a zeta tube construct."

"Done."

"Everyone who can't take a hit from a kryptonian, out."

Beryl jumps through without hesitation, Leonid a moment later and Arisia after a glare from Jordan. Icon tries the same on Raquel, but she just flies past in the direction Dru-Zod ran off in. There's no way off Xenon without the appropriate authorisation which he doesn't have, so I don't-. He doesn't know that.

He's irrelevant.

"Everyone ready? Good. Go!"

Kon and Mitchell charge in to support Superman the instant Jordan drops his shield. I-. Great, Lar-On's clothes got shredded but his radiation shield is on a lanyard around his neck. Lar-On manages to twist while grappling Superman, shoving his face into the deck plates only to get shoulder charged by Kon and knocked back. Kon continues his charge, slamming Lar-On into the far wall!

"RAAWRH!"

Lar-On raises his right claw, only for Mitchell to hit him in the right eye with a beam of heat vision.

"GRAH!"

Kon gets out of the way as Kal-El and Amon fly in, punching the disorientated Lar-On in the face and diaphragm. He stumbles, rapidly losing any idea of what's going on around him.

Karsta frowns at me. "I thought you got the kryptonite out of him!"

"I did! There wasn't any-. Shit."

"Talk!"

"I removed the kryptonite, but I didn't remove any residual radiation, because… I don't know how red kryptonite works. But it shouldn't-."

Kal-El holds up his right hand, watching the battered Lar-On cautiously. Amon stops attacking at once, awaiting his direction. "Stand down, Lar-On. We can-."

Lar-On's eyes focus on him for a moment, then he bunches up his legs and leaps, punching through the ceiling!

"Darn it."

"There's no moon here. His condition requires-."

Karsta points down. "This is a moon!"

"I-." She's right, but-. "He didn't change immediately, so that can't be the trigger. We're not getting any sunlight from here, and…" Ah, Babylon 5 cheat… "We're too far away from Krypton for a measurable amount of light to reach here-."

"Where are we relative to your sun?"

Calculate-.

My eyes widen. "We just emerged from the Earth's shadow-."

I transition up through the hole to where Superman, and Amon are… Wrestling with Lar-On in the narrow corridor, all three parties about to fly and trying to batter and claw at each other! There's cuts and bruises all around and Lar-On isn't going down-.

How do I cut out the light-? Paint. Light-absorbing-. Fabricate.

Compliance.

And spray!

A cloud of extremely sticky black particulates blasts down the corridor, coating the walls and the combatants equally. Superman won't be able to recover his energy quite so quickly until he can clean it off, Amon won't be affected…

Lar-On blinks in bestial confusion.

Amon takes the opportunity to punch him in the face-.

"Radiation shield! Neck!"

Amon rips it off, and I chuck a piece of gold kryptonite towards them… As Lar-On's body begins to contract, fur turning… Inwards, and being replaced by smooth flesh. Give him another blast of black spray paint to make sure I've coated everything…

Okay.

"Orange Lantern…" Superman wipes the worst of it away from his eyes. "What just happened?"

"One moment." I

lock onto Dru-Zod, and

appear…

Non-Du massages his right fist, looking at his former comrades laying knocked out on the ground. His eyes flick to me, then go back to looking at them. After a few moments he turns around and walks away, leaving them where they fell.

Right. Now to clean up the mess.
 
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Okay, there's a dozen superheroes standing-.

Who have to fight a Kryptonian monster.

Not exactly easy.

heating vision flaring, narrowing missing Kal-

"heat vision"

"narrowly missing"

There's no way off Xenon without the appropriate authorisation which he doesn't have, so I don't-. He doesn't know that.

Unless he knows how to bypass any security or whoever hit you with the stupid ray gets him out.


I'd say that the escaping genocidal Kryptonian is very relevant.

Non-Du massages his right fist, looking at his former comrades laying knocked out on the ground. His eyes flick to me, then go back to looking at them. After a few moments he turns around and walks away, leaving them where they fell

Huh.

When I first saw the name I was sure that he was behind their escape.

Granted, I'm still suspicious as hell.

Maybe that Power Ring Jordan was behind this, and the bodies Paul just saw were fabrications.
 
"I did! There wasn't any-. Shit."

"Talk!"

"I removed the kryptonite, but I didn't remove any residual radiation, because… I don't know how red kryptonite works. But it shouldn't-."
Corralation does not equal causation.

You guessed it was red kryptonite, found traces of red kryptonite, but that doesn't mean it was red kryptonite that was the cause.
 
There's no way off Xenon without the appropriate authorisation which he doesn't have, so I don't-. He doesn't know that.
Karsta points down. "This is a moon!"

"I-." She's right, but-. "He didn't change immediately, so that can't be the trigger. We're not getting any sunlight from here, and…" Ah, Babylon 5 cheat… "We're too far away from krypton for a measurable amount of light to reach here-."

"Where are we relative to your sun?"

Calculate-.

My eyes widen. "We just emerged from the Earth's shadow-."

Is the implication here that with Krypton now space debris, Lar-On's condition is now keyed to Earth's moon regardless of where he is in the universe?
 
12th August 2013
13:34 GMT


What?

I look around at the sound-.

Lar-On has… Burst, red fur replacing his skin, talons replacing fingernails and a face like Beastman from He-Man replacing his usual face.
What the bloody hell! I though OL fixed that problem?! Or is there some permanent change he overlooked? Lar-On has spent years trapped in the Phantom Zone with Red K soaking into his organelles... Have they adapted to reproduce the effect without the stimulus?

How-?

Okay, there's a dozen superheroes standing-.
Most of which are kind of squishy when compared to a kryptonian werewolf, and depending on how his change operates, he may well be infectious.

Heat vision slashes out in the direction he was looking, cutting through the force field emitters!

Uh-?
Intentional, or just randomly lashing out at something producing an energy signature that annoys him?

Lar-On dives forwards as the backups activate, narrowly avoiding both Amon's grasping hand and the reactivated barrier!

How-?
Questions later, OL, restraints now. He's powered up and lethal!

We let him get powered up because he didn't commit a crime and we need the help, but-.

Kal-El flies at him, swinging his right fist towards Lar-On's face. Lar-On ducks, claws swiping through the decking and-
And even in a berserk rage, he's a better fighter than the farm boy... Or simply that much quicker.

The force field around Dru-Zod and Ursa Dou-Ka vanishes.

-heating vision flaring, narrowing missing Kal-El as he jinks to the side but slicing though the cage containing the prisoners.
Oh, hell! that is the worst possible combination of events.

What?

Dru-Zod batters the weakened bars apart with the manacles around his arms and charges out, Ursa Dou-Ka just behind him!
Okay, not empowered yet, but letting him run around loose is not good.

I… Don't-.

Wait, this feels like-. Like when I was hit by the intellect suppressor, I should-.
That or the fact that all this is probably happening at Kryptonian speeds, and all anyone else is seeing is a blur.

Armour.

It flashes into being around me and oh that's better. I-.
Oh, hell, the wolf is projecting a stupidity field? Or was that coincidental?

Lar-On backhands me through a wall.

Crunmch!

Ugh. Up.
...You know Jordan is going to poke fun at you about that later.

Superman's fighting Lar-On in a confined space, and Lar-On's desires are… Suppressed. He's lashing out in an instinctive and primal response to existing, not out of a desire to kill a particular individual. It's too simple for me to just turn off or down.

Fly back, add my construct barrier to the one Jordan is making while Carol tries encasing Lar-On in crystal .
Sadly, I doubt the reminder of his lost love from the crystal's emanations isn't helping his temper any.

"Har-Zod, shut down the force field so I can make a zeta tube construct."

"Done."

"Everyone who can't take a hit from a kryptonian, out."
Good thing the laser-eyed doom puppy is distracted by Clark.

Beryl jumps through without hesitation, Leonid a moment later and Arisia after a glare from Jordan. Icon tries the same on Raquel, but she just flies past in the direction Dru-Zod ran off in. There's no way off Xenon without the appropriate authorisation which he doesn't have, so I don't-. He doesn't know that.
And if the planet's sun is in any way friendly to kryptonian organelles, he's probably already powering up.

He's irrelevant.

"Everyone ready? Good. Go!"
I hate to say it, but he's right. A rampaging beast with superspeed, flight and laser eyes is a walking natural disaster in need of containment.

Kon and Mitchell charge in to support Superman the instant Jordan drops his shield. I-. Great, Lar-On's clothes got shredded but his radiation shield is on a lanyard around his neck. Lar-On manages to twist while grappling Superman, shoving his face into the deck plates only to get shoulder charged by Kon and knocked back. Kon continues his charge, slamming Lar-On into the far wall!
At least the boys are well-trained fighters, between encoded combat skills and the lessons of Themyscira.

"RAAWRH!"

Lar-On raises his right claw, only for Mitchell to hit him in the right eye with a beam of heat vision.
A distraction, at best. He's likely stronger, tougher and faster than an average kryptonian as it is...

"GRAH!"

Kon gets out of the way as Kal-El and Amon fly in, punching the disorientated Lar-On in the face and diaphragm. He stumbles, rapidly losing any idea of what's going on around him.
At least they're able to team up on him. Rather than taking turns flying in and getting knocked away, like some less skilled heroes might do.

Karsta frowns at me. "I thought you got the kryptonite out of him!"

"I did! There wasn't any-. Shit."
Maybe the change isn't because of the Red K? Magic, perhaps? Could some lingering magic have remained at the Gold Volcano and inadvertently gotten snagged on Lar-On?

"Talk!"

"I removed the kryptonite, but I didn't remove any residual radiation, because… I don't know how red kryptonite works. But it shouldn't-."
So a heavy dose of Gold-K to flush out his organelles' charge? And hopefully examination by some skilled curse-breaking wizards, once he's restrained...

Kal-El holds up his right hand, watching the battered Lar-On cautiously. Amon stops attacking at once, awaiting his direction. "Stand down, Lar-On. We can-."

Lar-On's eyes focus on him for a moment, then he bunches up his legs and leaps, punching through the ceiling!
...Right, 'able to leap tall buildings in a single bound' and all that...

"Darn it."

"There's no moon here. His condition requires-."
Xenon base, right? Parked on the dark far side of the moon?

Karsta points down. "This is a moon!"

"I-." She's right, but-. "He didn't change immediately, so that can't be the trigger. We're not getting any sunlight from here, and…" Ah, Babylon 5 cheat… "We're too far away from krypton for a measurable amount of light to reach here-."
So something changed in the time between his arrival and the incident...

"Where are we relative to your sun?"

Calculate-.

My eyes widen. "We just emerged from the Earth's shadow-."
Which causes the Moon to shine. And Lar-On is somehow soaking that up? Indoors, through a radiation shield. Yeah, no way is this purely physical.

I transition up through the hole to where Superman, and Amon are… Wrestling with Lar-On in the narrow corridor, all three parties about to fly and trying to batter and claw at each other! There's cuts and bruises all around and Lar-On isn't going down-.

How do I cut out the light-? Paint. Light-absorbing-. Fabricate.
Vantablack-equivalent, eh? Prevent the light from reaching him directly by soaking him in light-absorbing goo?

Compliance.

And spray!
Not great for Superman, but Amon will have a natural advantage due to his magical empowerment.

A cloud of extremely sticky black particulates blast down the corridor, coating the walls and the combatants equally. Superman won't be able to recover his energy quite so quickly until he can clean it off, Amon won't be affected…

Lar-On blinks in bestial confusion.
Yeah, he's suddenly feeling a lot weaker now, isn't he? Enough to disorient the lupine mind in control.

Amon takes the opportunity to punch him in the face-.

"Radiation shield! Neck!"
Still empowered until his batteries expire, so just hitting him won;t help.

Amon rips it off, and I chuck a piece of gold kryptonite towards them… As Lar-On's body begins to contract, fur turning… Inwards, and being replaced by smooth flesh. Give him another blast of black spray paint to make sure I've coated everything…

Okay.
He's gonna be washing that out of cracks for weeks, isn't he? 😏

"Orange Lantern…" Superman wipes the worst of it away from his eyes. "What just happened?"

"One moment." I

lock onto Dru-Zod, and

appear…
Right, one problem solved, on to the next extant issue.

Non-Du massages his right fist, looking at his former comrades laying knocked out on the ground. His eyes flick to me, then go back to looking at them. After a few moments he turns around and walks away, leaving them where they fell.

Right. Now to clean up the mess.
...I guess that proves he's not willing to work with them, then.

Props to Non for handling that. Probably felt terrible, given that they were his friends (sort of) for years. But at least the escapees are contained. And it's telling that Zod tried to escape lawful captivity. An innocent man wouldn't try to run, after all. 🤔Although he could have been following some sort of military protocol: When captured by 'non-governmental' forces, attempt to escape...
 
Is the implication here that with Krypton now space debris, Lar-On's condition is now keyed to Earth's moon regardless of where he is in the universe?
I believe the implication is that residual red kryptonite radiation was 'activated' in response to being in 'direct' line of sight with Sol; as long as the Earth was in the way things were dormant but once there wasn't a planet in the way Lar-On's physiology started absorbing the residual red kryptonite radiation and transformed him.

But that doesn't explain the intellect suppressor, which implies there is more to this than just unfortunate circumstances.
 
I… Don't-.

Wait, this feels like-. Like when I was hit by the intellect suppressor, I should-.
I was just thinking that he seemed unusually stupid.
Lar-On backhands me through a wall.

Crunmch!
'Crunch'? Or is it deliberate?
Fly back, add my construct barrier to the one Jordan is making while Carol tries encasing Lar-On in crystal .
Extraneous space before full stop.
Beryl jumps through without hesitation, Leonid a moment later and Arisia after a glare from Jordan. Icon tries the same on Raquel, but she just flies past in the direction Dru-Zod ran off in. There's no way off Xenon without the appropriate authorisation which he doesn't have, so I don't-. He doesn't know that.

He's irrelevant.
There could've been some sort of conspiracy to rescue him. Unlikely but possible. Also, a little surprised they outran Racquel effectively enough to make it to Non-Du.
"I-." She's right, but-. "He didn't change immediately, so that can't be the trigger. We're not getting any sunlight from here, and…" Ah, Babylon 5 cheat… "We're too far away from krypton for a measurable amount of light to reach here-."
'Krypton'

What does Babylon 5 have to do with this? I haven't watched it.
A cloud of extremely sticky black particulates blast down the corridor, coating the walls and the combatants equally. Superman won't be able to recover his energy quite so quickly until he can clean it off, Amon won't be affected…
'blasts'
Amon rips it off, and I chuck a piece of gold kryptonite towards them… As Lar-On's body begins to contract, fur turning… Inwards, and being replaced by smooth flesh. Give him another blast of black spray paint to make sure I've coated everything…
I half-expected that gold kryptonite would cause Lar-On to be stuck as a werewolf.
So is he just… not going to follow up on him being targeted with a psi weapon?
He probably is going to follow up next chapter. My guess is that it wasn't a psi weapon but rather a wacky effect of the red kryptonite transformation, since apparently red kryptonite can do whatever the fuck it wants.
 
Props to Non for handling that. Probably felt terrible, given that they were his friends (sort of) for years

Not necessarily.

Zod may have just considered him to be useful muscle.

And it's telling that Zod tried to escape lawful captivity. An innocent man wouldn't try to run, after all.

Not necessarily.

Innocent people can be screwed over by a legal system and they may know that they're screwed, so they'd run.

So is he just… not going to follow up on him being targeted with a psi weapon?
I think it may be more like something like the Delirium Werewolves from World of Darkness can induce.
 
"heat vision"
"narrowly missing"
Thank you, corrected.
Is the implication here that with Krypton now space debris, Lar-On's condition is now keyed to Earth's moon regardless of where he is in the universe?
No, that it's keyed to one of Krypton's moons being illuminated by the local star.
So is he just… not going to follow up on him being targeted with a psi weapon?
Of course he is, but the rampaging werewolf was a more immediate problem.
'Crunch'? Or is it deliberate?
I think it was deliberate.
Extraneous space before full stop.
'blasts'
'Krypton'
Thank you, corrected.
What does Babylon 5 have to do with this? I haven't watched it.

View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=meCcsXQ1sMI
 
Speaking of Babylon 5, I watched it after seeing it mentioned in the WtR discussion threads, and it was quite enjoyable. Thanks everyone for your indirect recommendation.
Now I need to find a way to watch Red Dwarf for the other often mentioned science fiction show.
 

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