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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

This would be their past.

Time Trapper Paul made things so that timelines branch off rather than overwrite, hence Mandate Earth surviving.

So Earth-16 logically doesn't have to worry about one Sheeda future, but every possible Sheeda future.

Hence some people being confused by Paul's logic here.
Do they branch? Doesn't time travel just create an entirely new universe with its own past now?
 
Please let us not discuss time travel anymore.

It will do us no good and just make us stressed and annoyed.

Speak for yourself. I find it interesting to hear other people's opinions and ideas. I wouldn't know what happened in the comics at all if people didn't discuss the time travel.
 
Doesn't time travel just create an entirely new universe

That's what 'branching' means. A new branch (new TL, new universe if you will) grows from the point of divergence caused by the time traveler. The new branch goes in parallel with the old one instead of overwriting it. The past (the trunk of the tree in this analogy) is the same for both. But this means that a bunch of bugs (alt TL Sheeda) can now jump from the new branches to the old one and eat their fill.
 
That's what 'branching' means. A new branch (new TL, new universe if you will) grows from the point of divergence caused by the time traveler. The new branch goes in parallel with the old one instead of overwriting it. The past (the trunk of the tree in this analogy) is the same for both. But this means that a bunch of bugs (alt TL Sheeda) can now jump from the new branches to the old one and eat their fill.
No, what I mean is time travel doesn't create a new branch, it creates an entirely new tree every time it's done. Any alternative Sheeda wouldn't reach this universe, they would just reach other universes more or less identical to it.
 
That... doesn't make sense. With the branching model in place wiping out your TL's Sheeda just means you're safe from your TL's Sheeda. You'd always be at risk from the other branches. OL helped Paul Trapper make Hypertime a thing. Ignoring inconvenient aspects of it won't insulate him from them.
I suspect that the same complicated wibbly bits that prevent "a billion instances of you from minorly different timelines all try to time travel to the same space and time and explode in a tidal wave of gore that devastates the country" are playing a factor
 
No, what I mean is time travel doesn't create a new branch, it creates an entirely new tree every time it's done.

That's not how the branching model works. What you're describing is closer to parallel reality (Earth-16, Earth-50, etc.) than alternate timeline (all those Earth-16s with same but different Pauls (OL/Grayven/Sybarite) i.e. the Hypertime).
 
That's not how the branching model works. What you're describing is closer to parallel reality (Earth-16, Earth-50, etc.) than alternate timeline (all those Earth-16s with same but different Pauls (OL/Grayven/Sybarite) i.e. the Hypertime).
Yes, that's not how it works. That would be why I asked, "are we sure the universe now works on branching model, and not on the model I suggested?".
 
"are we sure the universe now works on branching model, and not on the model I suggested?"

*shrug* the best I can give you is that Paul Trapper explicitly called it 'Hypertime' (in that chapter after the Crisis fight after all of alt Pauls were sent home) and Hypertime is described as the branching model by writers (they used the river analogy but that's the same as the tree one). Make of that as you will. Then again comicbook physics so...
 
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Nope.

In canon they captured the original time ship, tore it apart, reverse engineered it, and then built an entire fleet of time ships.



Of course... This leaves the logic hole of "How did Melmoth go back in time to escape the Queen?" since the Queen is in possession of their only time ship.

I thought he abandoned ship during a previous harrowing- ie the coup happened during a harrowing, so Melmoth was cut off from the larger sheeda power base, but he could both flee and wait till the next one as an immortal, and the queen could consolidate her power by leaving him with little resources other than time and prepare to fight him at the next harrowing.

I mean if you are trying to overthrow a monarch that regularly raids other nations very far away (in time in this case) then wouldn't it always be the smarter option to attack during one of the regular occasions they are away from their seat of power?

With regard to the ships, as far as I remember we don't see the interior of the harvest ships in canon, only the Castle Revolving. As such we have no idea whether the other ships have time drives as well, but every time that the Sheeda arrive they do so via the Castle. I choose to interpret that as the Castle bringing the other ships with it rather than them having their own drives, because unless a Harrowing requires a major commitment of forces you'd have to be an idiot not to actually do Harrowings rather than just parasitise on different eras simultaneously.

yeah this makes sense- cconsidering the Sheeda prioritize raiding the past for material and emotional benefit over intellectual benefit (ie, collecting all the high tech and magic along with people who can teach it to create a golden age of all the knowledge and power) it makes sense that either their ability to reverse engineer their time machine is limited- or they just don't want to risk anyone stealing one. The second actually makes more sense beyond the Sheeda's sadistic temporal version of the ironborn's iron price, Castle revolving is also a huge fortress and the seat of royal power- by also having it be their only time machine but able to bring a fleet of flying but not time traveling ships with them, It becomes the cornerstone of their society, and further centralizes the monarchy's power. Really even if your society is based on time travel that means you want to regulate it more not less, and having fewer time machines helps with that- otherwise rivals to the throne could just steal one and travel back and raid enought to build up their own power base. If they had more time machines we would see Queen Tenebrous and King Melmoth having a time war as each tries to gather more power and catch the other at a time of weakness to strike them down. Even if there wasn't a reasonable explaination for the sheeda having only one time machine, it would be a nightmare to write or read the mess such a conflict would be- it would be like when fry and bender jumped around time in the big score movie but with both of them being competant megalomaniacs.

Do they branch? Doesn't time travel just create an entirely new universe with its own past now?

I think they do branch- it is the future that becomes entirely new now- so the sheeda are limited because they can now only raid the timeline that produces them, if they end up changing things to make a new branch, then their home in the future is completely altered as well- and the heroes only have to beat them once because 1, Their time travel is limited to one dreadnought time machine so once it is taken out, any other sheeda are trapped in the future and 2 if the timetravel creates a branch then the new future won't be the one the sheeda came from. There may be other timetraveling threats but there is no longer the chance of the Sheeda using wibbly wobbly time to raid a timeline that "might" lead to their future home- I am not sure if they could but now it is definitely impossible

That... doesn't make sense. With the branching model in place wiping out your TL's Sheeda just means you're safe from your TL's Sheeda. You'd always be at risk from the other branches. OL helped Paul Trapper make Hypertime a thing. Ignoring inconvenient aspects of it won't insulate him from them.

The thing it now the sheeda's future is only on one branch, so they can only go back in time along that branch, and if they change things enough it sprouts a new branch with a new future, which isn't the one the sheeda came from. In short if the heroes are in the timeline that eventually creates the sheeda, then any harrowing is a potential last harrowing as soon as they take out castle revolving, and if they end up in a branch timeline, then they not only can still win by taking out the time machine, but the sheeda might not exist in the future anyway so if they loose the sheeda also have to deal with making a new base since the future changed- more headache inducing but still bad for the sheeda as well.
 
I figure instead of possibly traveling through time and space, like Grayven and Artemis, Paul and company are likely to find the Castle being under siege by Melmoth's forces only for the Sivannahs to show up with a specially designed superbomb to wipe out the Sheeda for good. Unlike the renegade version of Sivannah who's been working by himself the paragon version has help from his children and has gathered more data to create something more thorough.

Granted I wouldn't mind seeing Paul undergo his own time travel odyssey, possibly to get better records of the past to learning about more future events to deal with them before they become an issue, and see how Paul's actions have made things better or worse overall.
 
I thought he abandoned ship during a previous harrowing- ie the coup happened during a harrowing, so Melmoth was cut off from the larger sheeda power base, but he could both flee and wait till the next one as an immortal, and the queen could consolidate her power by leaving him with little resources other than time and prepare to fight him at the next harrowing.

I mean if you are trying to overthrow a monarch that regularly raids other nations very far away (in time in this case) then wouldn't it always be the smarter option to attack during one of the regular occasions they are away from their seat of power?

The Sheeda can send things back in time without taking the castle with them, like those Huntsman things, so Melmoth may have used those methods to travel back in time instead of taking a time ship.

yeah this makes sense- cconsidering the Sheeda prioritize raiding the past for material and emotional benefit over intellectual benefit (ie, collecting all the high tech and magic along with people who can teach it to create a golden age of all the knowledge and power) it makes sense that either their ability to reverse engineer their time machine is limited- or they just don't want to risk anyone stealing one. The second actually makes more sense beyond the Sheeda's sadistic temporal version of the ironborn's iron price, Castle revolving is also a huge fortress and the seat of royal power- by also having it be their only time machine but able to bring a fleet of flying but not time traveling ships with them, It becomes the cornerstone of their society, and further centralizes the monarchy's power. Really even if your society is based on time travel that means you want to regulate it more not less, and having fewer time machines helps with that- otherwise rivals to the throne could just steal one and travel back and raid enought to build up their own power base. If they had more time machines we would see Queen Tenebrous and King Melmoth having a time war as each tries to gather more power and catch the other at a time of weakness to strike them down. Even if there wasn't a reasonable explaination for the sheeda having only one time machine, it would be a nightmare to write or read the mess such a conflict would be- it would be like when fry and bender jumped around time in the big score movie but with both of them being competant megalomaniacs.

The last thing we need is a time war.

Granted I wouldn't mind seeing Paul undergo his own time travel odyssey, possibly to get better records of the past to learning about more future events to deal with them before they become an issue, and see how Paul's actions have made things better or worse overall.

Paul did technically have his time travel odyssey with that whole multiversal thing and the Mandate episode, but if I remember correctly Zoat once said that Paul may have some success in time travel in 2016 in universe, assuming he hasn't changed his mind.
 
The First Descriptions we get of Hypertime in fiction as a fully formed idea is from "The Kingdom"

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So, from that and later explanations, hypertime isn't quite like how say, marvel handles timelines, while yes, there are multiple timelines going on, and moving between distinct ones happens, with marvel, each case of time travel that alters events creates a new time line, a distinct branching path, from which other timelines spring.

Hypertime is a lot more fluid then that. It's compared somewhat to a River, more then a branching Tree. Each time line is a distinct current with in the river, but they flow in the same general direction, and they cross and merge and separate, changed. Elements bleed in across them even without them directly crossing over. Even characters that have demonstrated knowledge of events can get caught up in changes, and either they're subsumed into their reality without causing a ripple, or they get noticed. During the story of the Kingdom, the then current 'mainline' universe got a peek at the kingdom come 'verse. Batman was investigating alterations on his earth that were...leaks, from a pre crisis version, including the then forgotten alternate kryptonite colours and other heros.

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And from one John Kent, of the Kingdom's Future time line child of Supes and Wondy.

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The thing to remember about time travel is that there is no future, only the present, and the past.

In this case the Sheeda are the present, and Paul is the past.
 
So, do you think Paul is going to mantle the Ophidian today?

Obligatory Zoat Proclamation: "There is no Mantling in this story. We have dismissed that claim. Why is no one reading the FAQ?!"

Even if something looks like Dresden Files Mantling, quacks like Dresden Files Mantling, it totally isn't Dresden Files Mantling.
 
Faed Away (part 19)
5th May
03:28 GMT -5


Suffer-Not-Obstinacy Chandler shoves his sabre through the head of a wounded spider, takes a moment to check that the strike was mortal and then takes a moment to survey the town. He exhales sharply through his teeth then heads back towards my aid tent. I haven't simply been able to flit around healing everyone because while the majority of the attackers were nice and visible, a few weren't and exposing myself wasn't a good idea. But with the attackers slain the local civilians have been bringing their fallen friends here in a way which suggests a degree of familiarity with the process.

"We are done for now." He looks at two I haven't touched. "They are cursed in some way?"

I nod. "My healing techniques appear to make the wounds worse. Can you do anything about it?"

"I am trained to wound, not mend. And the local Reverend was targeted by the assassin spiders before the attack commenced. We will have to arrange for them to be escorted to New Plymouth."

"Do you need me to remain?"

"We are far from secure, but it would be churlish for me to ask that when our fellow Columbians are still under attack." He looks at the area where the local grundies are being stacked for salvage. Most of them are severely damaged, but I suppose that they won't dispose of them as long as they can soak a few hits. "T'will be a hard planting season with our labour gone. What is that strange grundywoman you have brought with you?"

"Another victim of Melmoth's. I want to see if we can restore her mental faculties to the point where we can question her in detail."

"I can break her to your will, if that is your desire."

"No, thank you. I'm not even sure that she's completely dead. If she can be truly resurrected, I wouldn't-."

He scowls for a moment before schooling himself.

"Many are those who have looked to a grundy for the mind and soul of the departed. 'Tis absent, and 'tis sinful to pervert their purpose."

"I.. assure you that I wasn't planning anything 'sinful'. She wasn't born of Melmoth's line, and I'm hopeful that she doesn't have the same restrictions as your people's grundies do."

He shakes his head. "When I speak of 'sin', I do not merely refer to lust for the pleasures of the flesh outside of wedlock. But if she can be restored to true life, then what you say may be true. Where will you go now?"

"I'll find out. Orange Lantern to Justice League. The attack on New Southampton is over. Orders?"

"Blue Lantern here. Have you got room for refugees?"

Evacuating the smaller settlements is a sound plan, though I can hear that Alan's not happy about doing it. I raise my eyebrows at Mr. Chandler, who nods cautiously.

"Aye, we can, though food will become scarce if this situation continues."

"Yes."

"I'll fly them your way, then. The Columbians are getting hit all over, and I'm sure the outcasts are getting it worse. You got any way to track Melmoth down?"



"Wonder Woman, how long can you spare me for?"

"What do you have planned?"

"I felt the pattern of Melmoth's desires on the creatures he sent after me. I might be able to feel him through the Honden. It will be far quicker than a waveform scan if it works."

"And then?"

"Confront and control. Sheeda normally self-destruct when I try that, but he's immortal. Then I can either have him end the attack or at least remove the higher level coordination."

"Do it. We will hold here."

"Understood. Orange Lantern out." I look at Aurakos. She might be able to cope with the journey, but I'd rather not chance it. "Mister Chandler, would you please look after Aurakos while I'm away?"

He nods. "Certainly. May God bless you with good fortune."

And deep breath and out we go.

Hm. Again, I look around for the Ophidian but I can't really see her. Honestly, it just feels unnatural at this point, but… On with the job. I focus on the desire-patterns of the Columbians I've come to know, most importantly on their commonalities, and I find myself drawn in their direction. There's a sense of movement and having travelled but the journey feels like it takes no time at all.

And I'm in an edifice to their shared drive and a room and a corridor and yet I know that it's not a real 'place' in any normal sense. Trying to describe it in material terms is an exercise in futility. Instead, I look for those desires which don't quite fit. Deviants within-.

I press my lips against his and pray that none disturb-.


No, not like that, though it's hardly surprising that the Columbians forbid homosexuality. How about-

…would be so much more efficient if the grundymen could be repaired rather than interred. A small change in the blood magic animating them-.

Yes, a warlock.

…joy as I cut off another of its legs and watch as it tries to crawl away.


Hello Klarion.

It can't understand what I am, can't see that I'm so much more than it is-. But then I realise that I could be in the same position; that something greater than me could be ruining my fun. I look away, my mood ruined, and resolve to make sure that can't ever happen.

Yes, more like that.

Desires move around. Or I move around them, until the ones which feel like that are a table/map/diagram in front of me.

I hold out my hand and the outline of the desire I felt from the spiders appears.

More like this.

Some desires flake off, returning to their usual webs. But a few remain, their feel and structure and relatedness being all the more apparent.

I don't recall Lanterns operating in quite this way before. Perhaps it would be best to monitor this one a little more closely.


Good. Now show me desires related to this. Desires from the same person.

The network grows.

Look at them all run! Look at them all bleed! Look at them die! Not so clever now, are you, dear children?

And more and more. I try not to look at them all too closely, limiting myself to checking that they have the same feel and flavour. And more and more they grow, millennia of desires laid bare before me-

A full belly. Just for once, to be freed of the pain-.

-earliest to latest. I pull the latest towards me, surrounding myself in the feel of his avarice.


And then I step in.
 
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That's certainly a useful trick. Is it even possible to ward against Honden-based scrying and teleporting?
Trivially, if you don't feel desire in any way. Possibly, if you're also Orange-Enlightened and have conscious control of your desires...? You could do things like blending your desires into the population around you for camouflage?

And, of course, the simplest answer: Be a big enough badass that OL dares not teleport on top of you, or even look too closely at your desires. So, basically, "be Darkseid".
 
and the takes a moment

'then takes'


'outcasts'

And deep breath and out we go.

Hm. Again, I look around for the Ophidian but I can't really see her. Honestly, it just feels unnatural at this point, but… On with the job. I focus on the desire-patterns of the Columbians I've come to know, most importantly on their commonalities, and I find myself drawn in their direction. There's a sense of movement and having travelled but the journey feels like it takes no time at all.

And I'm in an edifice to their shared drive and a room and a corridor and yet I know that it's not a real 'place' in any normal sense. Trying to describe it in material terms is an exercise in futility. Instead, I look for those desires which don't quite fit. Deviants within-.

Were this lines you kept as the regular color instead of orange intentional?

It can't understand what I am, can't see that I'm so much more than it is-. But then I realise that I could be in the same position; that something greater than me could be ruining my fun. I look away, my mood ruined, and resolve to make sure that can't ever happen.

Was this when Klarion decided to pursue something that would allow hm to become a Lord of Chaos.


'remain'

would be best monitor

'to monitor'

Look at the all bleed!

'them all'
 
Were one of these supposed to be somewhere else?
Thank you, corrected.
Is this Good Omens reference? :)
Not intentionally.
'then takes'
'outcasts'
'remain'
'to monitor'
'them all'
Thank you, corrected.
Were this lines you kept as the regular color instead of orange intentional?
Somewhat. I can't remember the original rationale I used to determine which lines were supposed to be orange and which ones weren't.
 
5th May
03:28 GMT -5


Suffer-Not-Obstinacy Chandler shoves his sabre through the head of a wounded spider, takes a moment to check that the strike was mortal and the takes a moment to survey the town. He exhales sharply through his teeth then heads back towards my aid tent. I haven't simply been able to flit around healing everyone because while the majority of the attackers were nice and visible, a few weren't and exposing myself wasn't a good idea. But with the attackers slain the local civilians have been bringing their fallen friends here in a way which suggests a degree of familiarity with the process.
Yeah, common practice in this situation would be to, using the Shadowrun parlance, 'Geek the mage first'. He'd be a prime target for any smarter Sheeda creatures or warriors.

"We are done for now." He looks at two I haven't touched. "They are cursed in some way?"

I nod. "My healing techniques appear to make the wounds worse. Can you do anything about it?"
Ugh, that's a nasty trick. Some sort of Negative Energy infection, perhaps. Or an Inversion spell, making healing into harm.

"I am trained to wound, not mend. And the local Reverend was targeted by the assassin spiders before the attack commenced. We will have to arrange for them to be escorted to New Southampton."

"Do you need me to remain?"
Presumably the reverend was trained in healing magic, since they targetted him first. Or Melmoth was feeling vindictive?

"We are far from secure, but it would be churlish for me to ask that when our fellow Columbians are still under attack." He looks at the area where the local grundies are being stacked for salvage. Most of them are severely damaged, but I suppose that they won't dispose of them as long as they can soak a few hits. "T'will be a hard planting season with our labour gone. What is that strange grundywoman you have brought with you?"

"Another victim of Melmoth's. I want to see if we can restore her mental faculties to the point where we can question her in detail."
And technically not quite a proper Grundywoman, when you think about it...

"I can break her to your will, if that is your desire."

"No, thank you. I'm not even sure that she's completely dead. If she can be truly resurrected, I wouldn't-."
ooh, that might ruffle a few feathers, given their outlook on dealing with grundyfolk.

He scowls for a moment before schooling himself.

"Many are those who have looked to a grundy for the mind and soul of the departed. 'Tis absent, and 'tis sinful to pervert their purpose."
Presumably he isn't talking about the obvious kind of sin, if you know what I mean, nudge-nudge... Though I don't doubt there are some depraved enough to consider it...

"I.. assure you that I wasn't planning anything 'sinful'. She wasn't born of Melmoth's line, and I'm hopeful that she doesn't have the same restrictions as your people's grundies do."

He shakes his head. "When I speak of 'sin', I do not merely refer to lust for the pleasures of the flesh outside of wedlock. But if she can be restored to true life, then what you say may be true. Where will you go now?"
Thought so. Presumably he means things like holding the grundy of a deceased loved one too closely to the household. Like, treating them as if they were still alive, when they aren't.

"I'll find out. Orange Lantern to Justice League. The attack on New Southampton is over. Orders?"

"Blue Lantern here. Have you got room for refugees?"
Doesn't sound like things are going too well, then. Logical enough to gather the population in more easily-defended groups, even if it does make them a bigger target in return.

Evacuating the smaller settlements is a sound plan, though I can hear that Alan's not happy about doing it. I raise my eyebrows at Mr. Chandler, who nods cautiously.

"Aye, we can, though food will become scarce if this situation continues."
Well, there's always fabricated food. I doubt it would be too pleasant, and there might be the risk of some toxic fault, but hey, better than starving?

"Yes."

"I'll fly them your way, then. The Columbians are getting hit all over, and I'm sure the outcastes are getting it worse. You got any way to track Melmoth down?"
That's a good question. And the Warlock-breed are definitely in much greater danger than the townships proper. I can't imagine how many small settlements might already have been overrun. But it's probably a lot.



"Wonder Woman, how long can you spare me for?"

"What do you have planned?"
Yes, do tell. This should be interesting.

"I felt the pattern of Melmoth's desires on the creatures he sent after me. I might be able to feel him through the Honden. It will be far quicker than a waveform scan if it works."

"And then?"
Have you ever head of 'Scry-and-die'?

"Confront and control. Sheeda normally self-destruct when I try that, but he's immortal. Then I can either have him end the attack or at least remove the higher level coordination."

"Do it. We will hold here."
Ooh, that's actually a decent plan. Especially if you can exploit some of ol' Swirly-cheeks' desires to alter his outlook. Moreso if you can make those changes stick.

"Understood. Orange Lantern out." I look at Aurakos. She might be able to cope with the journey, but I'd rather not chance it. "Mister Chandler, would you please look after Aurakos while I'm away?"

He nods. "Certainly. May God bless you with good fortune."
Presumably he'll actually do so. I can imagine how annoyed OL might be if he returns and she's not been treated like a regular wounded person...

And deep breath and out we go.

Hm. Again, I look around for the Ophidian but I can't really see her. Honestly, it just feels unnatural at this point, but… On with the job. I focus on the desire-patterns of the Columbians I've come to know, most importantly on their commonalities, and I find myself drawn in their direction. There's a sense of movement and having travelled but the journey feels like it takes no time at all.
More proof that Witchworld is fairly out of the way... And now I'm picturing the astral trip Doctor Strange took in the movie as visuals for all this.

And I'm in an edifice to their shared drive and a room and a corridor and yet I know that it's not a real 'place' in any normal sense. Trying to describe it in material terms is an exercise in futility. Instead, I look for those desires which don't quite fit. Deviants within-.
The human mind makes sense of things as best it can. Floors, walls and ceilings are sensible, stable.

I press my lips against his and pray that none disturb-.

No, not like that, though it's hardly surprising that the Columbians forbid homosexuality. How about-
Oh, my [/takei] I can understand the proscription of same-sex relationships, though. Small population, you can't afford to have people not breeding. Every baby counts, even if they don't live long. Though I shudder at the thought of grundybabes... Columbians are probably far tougher against illness though given their Sheeda blood...

…would be so much more efficient if the grundymen could be repaired rather than interred. A small change in the blood magic animating them-.

Yes, a warlock.
And quite the disturbing one, just from that. Practical reason, sure, but I doubt it worked out to well.

…joy as I cut off another of its legs and watch as it tries to crawl away.

Hello Klarion.
Easy to recognise. That sneering feeling of superiority is probably hard to mistake. He was always a nasty little boy...

It can't understand what I am, can't see that I'm so much more than it is-. But then I realise that I could be in the same position; that something greater than me could be ruining my fun. I look away, my mood ruined, and resolve to make sure that can't ever happen.
Like Darko said, I could easily see this being the impetus for finding his way into a Lordship of Chaos. It's impressive that he managed it so quickly, but who knows what he stumbled upon when he fled Columbia after turning Warlock?

Yes, more like that.

Desires move around. Or I move around them, until the ones which feel like that are a table/map/diagram in front of me.
A good analogy. I can almost imagine each resembling a fluttering wisp, pinned down like a butterfly collection... o_O And now it feels weird...

I hold out my hand and the outline of the desire I felt from the spiders appears.

More like this.
No need to use logic or conscious sorting. Just want the ones you need. This is the realm of avarice, after all.

Some desires flake off, returning to their usual webs. But a few remains, their feel and structure and relatedness being all the more apparent.

I don't recall Lanterns operating in quite this way before. Perhaps it would be best monitor this one a little more closely.
Yeah, that's the bastard. This shouldn't take long, to track him down.

Good. Now show me desires related to this. Desires from the same person.

The network grows.
And it would be a big network, given his age. Thousands of years of desires, most of which would have been fulfilled instantly...

Look at them all run! Look at the all bleed! Look at them die! Not so clever now, are you, dear children?

And more and more. I try not to look at them all too closely, limiting myself to checking that they have the same feel and flavour. And more and more they grow, millennia of desires laid bare before me-
A long, nasty life, from an ugly start to a hopefully ugly end.

A full belly. Just for once, to be freed of the pain-.

-earliest to latest. I pull the latest towards me, surrounding myself in the feel of his avarice.


And then I step in.
And gearing up as you go, i expect, since while he might not be expecting this, he's surely not undefended. Honestly, you call this Scry-and-die?

And so things will come to a head. Hopefully Melmoth will get his righteously-deserved Face-punching desserts. Knock the swirls off those cheeks of his.:p With any luck, he won't be smiling when this is done.
 
I know it won't happen...

But I really hope Paul get's his ass kicked for being this stupid about a thing...

And on that note, you want me to believe he shields his abandoned bases from that sort of teleportation but not where he actually is? Suspension of disbelief once again broken.
 

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