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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Cappare (part 19) New
27th July 2013
04:29 GMT


"How many?"

"Thirty… Three in space."


Lantern Stewart clenches his right fist. "Green Lantern to Justice League. Assistance required in near-Earth space."

Humanoid robots from Daxam? Would they have had Eradicators-?

"Assume they're Eradicators until proven otherwise."

"Eradicators?"

"
Performance specifications are on your database. Pull back, don't engage." Ah. "Are there any guarding the ship?"

"No."

"
Board them, extract their database and any other records you find. Assimilate the crew if required. Find out what they're planning."

"Yes, Illustres."


Right, let's take a look at Cara Yat's desires in more… Detail. How prescient of me. The ship builders around Daxam-. Might be Eradicators or they might be Daxamites who can use the theta wave state, but Cara can definitely use it. Can the other two..? Priest yes, Ken Lee… No.

I hoik him up with a construct. "How'd you like to stop feeling like shit?"

"Uuuuughnot talking."

"If I don't know what you want, I can't decide what to do about it. As things stand I'm forced to conclude that Daxam is declaring war on Earth. And while that does restrict what I can legally do to you, it also authorises me to, for example, destroy Daxam's entire planetary defence system."

"Hhu-. Can't-. You can't."

"They're unmanned weapon systems. They're the definition of a morally acceptable target. I gain nothing from allowing Daxam to remain isolationist."

Lantern Stewart glances my way as he strides towards the zeta tube terminuses. "You got this?"

"Yes. I'll relay information to you as I get it."

"Arsenal to Oh El."

I meet Ken Lee's eyes for a moment. I can give him another ten seconds, then I'll start prodding his brain.

"Go ahead."

"Har-Zod says it matches parts of the 'Doomsday', the Kryptonian navy's old flagship. When the fleet got decommissioned it was supposed to be mothballed, but Admiral Dru-Zod programmed it to fly off into space instead."

"And parts of it ended up here?"

"Maybe it all ended up here. Maybe that's what they're here for."

Ken Lee isn't. Ken Lee wants to go home and forget this ever happened. We profoundly disturb him. He thinks this whole endeavour is a bad idea.

Okay, so… The Doomsday comes here and… Self destructs? Hits something? Gets hit by something? And if they could… Poke anywhere in the system using a boom tube, the only reason they'd have to talk to us is.. that part of it ended up on Earth. Or Mars, but they'd have spotted that.

"Advocate Ken Lee, this is extremely foolish. If you'd asked us for the ship to augment your self-defence forces then we'd probably have just given it to you. And now you're risking me counterattacking. Please, talk to me before I'm forced to use extreme measures."

"C-." He takes a pained breath. "Cure me first."

"Alright." I extend filaments into the meeting room's lighting systems, altering the wavelength. The shutters are down to seal the breach from earlier, so there's no other wavelengths coming in. Now, touch filaments to his body and… Send the lead carbonate from his lungs into subspace. "Better?"

He breathes in deeply, then out, then in deeply again. Then he nod. "Yes. Thank you." He glances down at Cara Yat as she wheezes in agony. "Could you-?"

"She gets fixed when she talks or once this is resolved. So talk."

He shakes his head. "This was never about Sodam Yat. I-. He should be returned, be amongst his people and his family. But Cara Yat-. She argued that the fact that you and that other alien were able to land on Daxam indicated that our defences were inadequate. That we needed more."

"But you're primitivists. You can't build better."

"There was.. debate. In the end, it was agreed that activating an A.I. and asking it to oversee the process would be less damaging than relearning the skills of our ancestors."

"An Eradicator A.I.? I didn't realise they were that old."

"Not an Eradicator. The Eradicator program. It was originally intended to rid us of.. foreign cultural influences. Our ancestors purified themselves and then shut it down. But it was never supposed to be deleted. It's.. endemic in all of our ancestral systems. We thought it was on our side."

"What did it do?"

"It took control. Had the old manufacturing systems create new robots for it to command. And it-. We're different from kryptonians, we all know that, but we thought it was-." He shakes his head. "The Eradicator barely acknowledges us as people. I think it was going to kill us, until-. Until Diro Yat told it that Kal-El survived."

"And the Doomsday?"

"The bridge component is on Earth… Somewhere. The Eradicator's program requires it to recover kryptonian technology."

"And what about the boom tubes?"

"I don't know." I narrow my eyes. "I don't! I'm a lawyer! I only know this much because I-. I might have needed to carry on the mission myself."

"What does the Eradicator want with Kal-El? Genetic samples?"

"No. No. It wants to correct him." He shakes his head. "Raised by aliens. It's not his fault, of course, and we-. Daxamites wouldn't have anything to do with someone from the family of Kem-El. But to the Eradicator program he's the most important person in the universe."

"Right, thank you. Arisia, you're on guard duty. Keep an eye on them." She nods stiltedly. "They shouldn't die, but you've got a purple healing ray if they start worsening."

"Yes." She nods again. "Yes."

"Call someone. I need to make sure that Kal-El's alright."

She nods as I

raise my fingers to my forehead, homing in on his genuine desire to be a good person. I

appear in Texas, just behind him.

26th July 2013
23:33 GMT -5


"Superman, we have a problem."

He turns around, his expression… Cold.

Alien.

Oh dear.

"No. We don't."
 
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Aw, crap. This is like that one story arc where Clark got subjected to a fake Kryptonian maturity cycle that turned him cold and distant towards all of humanity, but then it turned out that he actually got brainwashed.

And it was also making him wear dorky Kryptonian clothes too.
 
raise my fingers to my forehead, homing in on his genuine desire to be a good person. I

appear in Texas, just behind him.

26th July 2013
23:33 GMT -5


"Superman, we have a problem."

He turns around, his expression… Cold.

Alien

Oh dear.
Well the desire to be a good person is still there, so big blue is ostensibly buried under the reprogramming. How to get him out?
 
27th July 2013
04:29 GMT


"How many?"

"Thirty… Three in space."
Definitely either stowed aboard-ships like stacked logs, or shunted through a Boom Tube. The latter would be noticed, though... Unless Jupiter's magnetosphere is blocking emissions. Regardless, that's a bad number of Eradicator droids.

Lantern Stewart clenches his right fist. "Green Lantern to Justice League. Assistance required in near-Earth space."

Humanoid robots from Daxam? Would they have had Eradicators-?
If not active, then at least in storage, ready to activate if needed. And evidently they have been.

"Assume they're Eradicators until proven otherwise."

"Eradicators?"
Ah, right, not exactly a well-known thing these days.

"Performance specifications are on your database. Pull back, don't engage." Ah. "Are there any guarding the ship?"

"No."
While not as adaptable as a Scarab Warrior, they're almost as strong as an empowered Kryptonian, so even a two-on-one fight is dangerous for anyone but OL.

"Board them, extract their database and any other records you find. Assimilate the crew if required. Find out what they're planning."

"Yes, Illustres."
Hopefully it won't come to that and they'll surrender peacefully. But I suspect there's going to be some sore heads and lead-choked lungs aboard before she's done...

Right, let's take a look at Cara Yat's desires in more… Detail. How prescient of me. The ship builders around Daxam-. Might be Eradicators or they might be Daxamites who can use the theta wave state, but Cara can definitely use it. Can the other two..? Priest yes, Ken Lee… No.
Not surprising for the priest. It's a form of martial arts, and who better to maintain such skills than a priest?

I hoik him up with a construct. "How'd you like to stop feeling like shit?"

"Uuuuughnot talking."
I don't think you're going to have to worry too much about the others letting on that you blabbed. If you know anything at all...

"If I don't know what you want, I can't decide what to do about it. As things stand I'm forced to conclude that Daxam is declaring war on Earth. And while that does restrict what I can legally do to you, it also authorises me to, for example, destroy Daxam's entire planetary defence system."
And he's not joking, either. Hell, if you tick him off enough, he may decide to do it single-handedly... With Assimilated Daxamites.

"Hhu-. Can't-. You can't."

"They're unmanned weapon systems. They're the definition of a morally acceptable target. I gain nothing from allowing Daxam to remain isolationist."
And they're already acting as an enemy, so...

Lantern Stewart glances my way as he strides towards the zeta tube terminuses. "You got this?"

"Yes. I'll relay information to you as I get it."
Big show of trust there, even if Arisia is staying to watch the Daxamites.

"Arsenal to Oh El."

I meet Ken Lee's eyes for a moment. I can give him another ten seconds, then I'll start prodding his brain.
Think fast, lawyer, or your usefulness may fall depending on what OL hears next.

"Go ahead."

"Har-Zod says it matches parts of the 'Doomsday', the Kryptonian navy's old flagship. When the fleet got decommissioned it was supposed to be mothballed, but Admiral Dru-Zod programmed it to fly off into space instead."
...Shit. And we know from the Renegade's timeline exactly where it is...

"And parts of it ended up here?"

"Maybe it all ended up here. Maybe that's what they're here for."
So Sodam was the excuse for them to get in-system and scan.

Ken Lee isn't. Ken Lee wants to go home and forget this ever happened. We profoundly disturb him. He thinks this whole endeavour is a bad idea.

Okay, so… The Doomsday comes here and… Self destructs? Hits something? Gets hit by something? And if they could… Poke anywhere in the system using a boom tube, the only reason they'd have to talk to us is.. that part of it ended up on Earth. Or Mars, but they'd have spotted that.
If it had been anywhere else, they'd have just blown past and grabbed for it without talking. But Earth is defended, heavily. The question is why now?

"Advocate Ken Lee, this is extremely foolish. If you'd asked us for the ship to augment your self-defence forces then we'd probably have just given it to you. And now you're risking me counterattacking. Please, talk to me before I'm forced to use extreme measure."

"C-." He takes a pained breath. "Cure me first."
Smart. He aims to survive, after all. This isn't really his cause, no matter how important it is to the priest or Cara Yat.

"Alright." I extend filaments into the meeting room's lighting systems, altering the wavelength. The shutters are down to seal the breach from earlier, so there's no other wavelengths coming in. Now, touch filaments to his body and… Send the lead carbonate from his lungs into subspace. "Better?"
No re-empowering, of course, OL doesn't trust him that much. Bu he's evidently not interested in fighting as long as he gets to sit this out and go home...

He breathes in deeply, then out, then in deeply again. Then he nod. "Yes. Thank you." He glances down at Cara Yat as she wheezes in agony. "Could you-?"

"She gets fixed when she talks or once this is resolved. So talk."
And she'd probably rather die than blab.

He shakes his head. "This was never about Sodam Yat. I-. He should be returned, be amongst his people and his family. But Cara Yat-. She argued that the fact that you and that other alien to land on Daxam indicated that our defences were inadequate. That we needed more."
Which means either she's highly placed in the government, or was able to attract a big following due to the optics of 'Mother whose son was stolen by aliens.'

"But you're primitivists. You can't build better."

"There was.. debate. In the end, it was agreed that activating an A.I. and asking it to oversee the process would be less damaging that relearning the skills of our ancestors."
So instead, you repeat their mistakes. AI is a total crapshoot, especially Kryptonian ones. Those smart enough to be sophonts can easily be fanatical about their goals.

"An Eradicator A.I.? I didn't realise they were that old."

"Not an Eradicator. The Eradicator program. It was originally intended to rid us of.. foreign cultural influences. Our ancestors purified themselves and then shut it down. But it was never supposed to be deleted. It's.. endemic in all of our ancestral systems. We thought it was on our side."
...So the second you turned it back on, it took full control of every bit of old tech you had and conquered you.

"What did it do?"

"It took control. Had the old manufacturing systems create new robots for it to command. And it-. We're different from kryptonians, we all know that, but we thought it was-." He shakes his head. "The Eradicator barely acknowledges us as people. I think it was going to kill us, until-. Until Diro Yat told it that Kal-El survived."
Well, thank goodness for small mercies. The one failed visit by Superman saved the Daxamite race... Edit: Or knowledge of him. Honestly can't remember if Supes visited or not... 🤔

"And the Doomsday?"

"The bridge component is on Earth… Somewhere. The Eradicator's program requires it to recover kryptonian technology."
Which it will then use to re-establish the Great Kryptonian Empire, because of course it will.

"And what about the boom tubes?"

"I don't know." I narrow my eyes. "I don't! I'm a lawyer! I only know this much because I-. I might have needed to carry on the mission myself."
Hopefully the ships crew are slightly better informed.

"What does the Eradicator want with Kal-El? Genetic samples?"

"No. No. It wants to correct him." He shakes his head. "Raised by aliens. It's not his fault, of course, and we-. Daxamites wouldn't have anything to do with someone from the family of Kem-El. But to the Eradicator program he's the most important person in the universe."
And if it finds out about the Karas... Well, it's probably gonna be celebrating.

"Right, thank you. Arisia, you're on guard duty. Keep an eye on them." She nods stiltedly. "They shouldn't die, but you've got a purple healing ray if they start worsening."

"Yes." She nods again. "Yes."
Hoo-boy. She sounds a bit shell-shocked. Between the extreme violence she's witnessed today, the way the negotiations turned out and this whole little crisis, she's not having a good week.

"Call someone. I need to make sure that Kal-El's alright."

She nods as I
Bets she calls Team members in, including at least one Supergirl?

raise my fingers to my forehead, homing in on his genuine desire to be a good person. I

appear in Texas, just behind him.
...Shit. If he's in Texas, then...

26th July 2013
23:33 GMT -5


"Superman, we have a problem."
And Kal-El is going to be part of it, I suspect.

He turns around, his expression… Cold.

Alien
Naturally, the Eradicator got to him. A stealth unit that probably slipped in under the interdiction systems, I bet.

Oh dear.

"No. We don't."
Time to kick his ass and restrain him, OL...

Oh, boy. If the Eradicator is complex enough to have fantasies, I can just picture something like MAWS' Kryptonian invasion forces running through them. Even if it has to use 'inferior' Daxamites. And at their head, Kal-El as their general, or something like that. The excrement is in the air, and the fan is spinning up...
 
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I don't know if Zoat is using it but in the comics it was revealed that the Eradicator is not a Kryptonian artifact.

It's an alien probe that Superman's ancestor Kem-L reprogramed with his xenophobia because he was a true piece of shit.

In the comics David Conner merged with the Eradicator, he found out that he wasn't David Conner, he was the Eradicator that remembers being David Conner because as a probe it's function is to absorb and store information. So the "merging" was it absorbing the information in David's brain.

He discovered he was actually dead, that the Eradicator isn't Kryptonian, and beat down the digital avatar of Kem-L in the Eradicator's programming to free himself from Kem-L's progamming.

So this plotline might be dealt with with a digital exorcism.
 
"Advocate Ken Lee, this is extremely foolish. If you'd asked us for the ship to augment your self-defence forces then we'd probably have just given it to you. And now you're risking me counterattacking. Please, talk to me before I'm forced to use extreme measure."
'measures'
He shakes his head. "This was never about Sodam Yat. I-. He should be returned, be amongst his people and his family. But Cara Yat-. She argued that the fact that you and that other alien to land on Daxam indicated that our defences were inadequate. That we needed more."

"But you're primitivists. You can't build better."

"There was.. debate. In the end, it was agreed that activating an A.I. and asking it to oversee the process would be less damaging that relearning the skills of our ancestors."
'were able to'?
'than'
He turns around, his expression… Cold.

Alien
Missing full stop?

I can't remember, does Superman still use that environmental shield or does he have a radiation ward?

How did they get to the surface without anyone noticing? The only things I can think of are a hush tube (possible if they're receiving Apokoliptian support, which is implied by them using boom tubes), or them establishing a link with the Doomsday fragment which allowed them to activate onboard robots/manufacturing or a weird mind control ray or something, or when they boom tubed to Jupiter they dropped a few robots which flew to Earth under their own power, and weren't detected because they were small/slow/had cloaking systems?

Also, nice callback to Grayven excavating this stuff with LexCorp. It's fun when the same things have radically different repercussions in different universes because of the different conditions.
 
I just realized this means this same Eradicator is the one inside Renegade timeline Kara's head. Hopefully she can be saved once that becomes a problem.
 
'measures'
'were able to'?
'than'
Missing full stop?
Thank you, corrected.
I can't remember, does Superman still use that environmental shield or does he have a radiation ward?
First one.
Also, nice callback to Grayven excavating this stuff with LexCorp. It's fun when the same things have radically different repercussions in different universes because of the different conditions.
In Renegade, you deal with plot threads.
In main thead, plot thread deals with you.
I just realized this means this same Eradicator is the one inside Renegade timeline Kara's head. Hopefully she can be saved once that becomes a problem.
it's not 'in' Kara's head. It's just that the Eradicator Program's idea of what a 'healthy' kryptonian is includes them being goodthinkful.
 
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So the Eradicator program just brainwashes kryptonians into racism?

Didn't it get one of the Karas in the other timeline too?
 
So the Eradicator program just brainwashes kryptonians into racism?

Didn't it get one of the Karas in the other timeline too?
The Renegade used a medical machine he stole from Daxam to heal Kara, which made her more in line with what the Eradicator thinks pure Kryptonians should be like.

Seeing as the Eradicator doesn't see Daxamites as pure Kryptonians I hope before this episode is over that they have a very bad time that either keeps them from leaving their planet for the foreseeable future or forces them off of it against their will and at the mercy of the aliens they hate so much.
 
A lot was revealed, though we still don't know if any New Gods are involved or maybe Eradicator stole a Motherbox
 

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