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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

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I can imagine Luna just cracking up at random with polite giggle snorts. "Oh woe is my stallion! I shall return to Canterlot to impart thy actions to mine sister and her former apprentice. They shall find mirth in my words and have joy in their hearts; and laugh as one. For surely that was thy true plan to bring them back together!"
 
Ngamer11 said:
This should be part 22. It's also incorrect on the TOC.
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Chojin Patriarch said:
Arthur frowns. "But he's been in the ground for months.
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Thank you, corrected.
...I would have included some sort of brief-cycle gold-Kryptonite pulse, if just to prevent accidents while he's coming to.
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Do you want to think about why nullifying a kryptonian's solar reserves when those are the thing keeping him nearly-alive might be a bad idea?
The Renegade being surprisingly candid with Lane. Does he suspect she won't print that part of it, if only to keep the world on an even keel by not undermining their conqueror?
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No, but he's made a big thing about honesty in government. He has committed himself to being honest in turn.
 
Mr Zoat said:
Anyway, he's on a knock-off Möbius Chair thing reviewing all of my plans with his newly expanded awareness. I don't know exactly what his portfolio covers, but I imagine that he's as good a person to check my work as anyone I could find.
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In a realistic take of things this would end terribly for everyone involved.

Because this has in fact happened before and did in fact end horribly for everyone involved.
 
Chojin Patriarch said:
Somehow, that's exactly how I'd expect an Aquaman as portrayed by Jason Momoa to operate. Inure yourself to Anti-Life by exposing yourself to it and fighting back...
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I mean if you want to fight something then you sometimes need to experience it, so you can know what to expect.

Chojin Patriarch said:
Bet it's something like 'strategic planning'. Or, to put it more memeishly, 'Prep-time'. :V
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Or investigation.

Chojin Patriarch said:
Once again: Kryptonian bio-engineering is bullshit good. They made themselves paragons of physicality even before you add in super-powers.
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Yeah, I remember a DCEU/MCU crossover where Jor-El mentions that even without his powers, Clark would still have Captain America levels of physical ability.

Though there were downsides to the bioengineering.

Zod for example was made to be a warrior since before he was born and was raised to be that, so his nature and nurture compelled him to view problems through a lens of combat and conquest, even if such a view was not the best.

Chojin Patriarch said:
The Renegade being surprisingly candid with Lane. Does he suspect she won't print that part of it, if only to keep the world on an even keel by not undermining their conqueror
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I don't think he cares so much.
 
I'm actually really liking Justice Segu Earth hope this isn't the last time we see it and it's version of the Justice League
 
Ngamer11 said:
I was rereading and found a video link that doesn't work anymore; I don't remember what it linked to. Does anyone remember where this quote comes from?
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That one I remember.


Ngamer11 said:
Mr Zoat, what did Future Renegade do to Luthor after taking over most of the world? And what significant changes has he done within these two months?
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Had telepaths destructively read his mind, then publicised his misdeeds before publically executing his technically-living body.
 
Mr Zoat, can anything be done about All-American Boy? Or will he need to stay in a cell for the rest of his life?
 
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Mr Zoat, can anything be done about All-American Boy? Or will he need to stay in a cell for the rest of his life?
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Putting him in a cell wouldn't work. He needs constant non-violent social interaction to put his human mind back in the driving seat. Turning him back is also a non-starter, as it's pure luck that he survived the first time. He's going to get a re-socialisation process with a g-nome on his shoulder.
 
Mr Zoat said:
Putting him in a cell wouldn't work. He needs constant non-violent social interaction to put his human mind back in the driving seat. Turning him back is also a non-starter, as it's pure luck that he survived the first time. He's going to get a re-socialisation process with a g-nome on his shoulder.
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How long will it take before he's fit to join whatever organization the Renegade is creating?
 
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"I never met Superman. You don't need me for that." He paces, staring at the boom tube opening point. "If I'm going to do anything against Darkseid I need to learn to cope with it."
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You know, I looked up the DCEU Aquaman's wiki page to see how good he actually is in a fight. I had seen the movies, but there's a lot of stuff I didn't remember well and it was convenient to have it all in one place. The answer is... quite good, actually! Possibly the version of Aquaman that's the toughest combatant we've seen in any universe.

https://dcextendeduniverse.fandom.com/wiki/Aquaman#Powers_and_Abilities

He's definitely fighting in the Apocalyptian Elite weight class. Not top tier, he couldn't beat Steppenwolf, but he can at least make the fight not a joke. Reading through, it seems like Arthur already has training and offense pretty well covered. I think if Renegade wanted to upgrade him, the most useful thing would be to give him some armor that is as good as his magical trident.
 
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How long will it take before he's fit to join whatever organization the Renegade is creating?
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I don't have a firm figure in mind.
Steelplaza said:
You know, I looked up the DCEU Aquaman's wiki page to see how good he actually is in a fight. I had seen the movies, but there's a lot of stuff I didn't remember well and it was convenient to have it all in one place. The answer is... quite good, actually! Possibly the version of Aquaman that's the toughest combatant we've seen in any universe.

https://dcextendeduniverse.fandom.com/wiki/Aquaman#Powers_and_Abilities

He's definitely fighting in the Apocalyptian Elite weight class. Not top tier, he couldn't beat Steppenwolf, but he can at least make the fight not a joke. Reading through, it seems like Arthur already has training and offense pretty well covered. I think if Renegade wanted to upgrade him, the most useful thing would be to give him some armor that is as good as his magical trident.
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Given how advanced Atlantis is, Grayven would probably be better off using them as an industrial centre.
 
Steelplaza said:
You know, I looked up the DCEU Aquaman's wiki page to see how good he actually is in a fight. I had seen the movies, but there's a lot of stuff I didn't remember well and it was convenient to have it all in one place. The answer is... quite good, actually! Possibly the version of Aquaman that's the toughest combatant we've seen in any universe.
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No, that's pretty much par for the course, except for the hydrokinesis which he didn't get until after Flashpoint.

In the comics he has the physical power to go toe to toe with Kryptonian level threats and has enough telepathy to defeat Martians and power ring bearers.
 
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No, that's pretty much par for the course, except for the hydrokinesis which he didn't get until after Flashpoint.

In the comics he has the physical power to go toe to toe with Kryptonian level threats and has enough telepathy to defeat Martians and power ring bearers.
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Sadly, he doesn't get much recognition and is usually mocked as the guy that just talks to fish.

Though I am reminded of Throne of Atlantis Abridged where the Justice League, specifically Batman, were responsible for depicting him as a loser because they were worried that he'd outshine them all and make them look stupid.

The guy is almost as strong as Superman, has a magic trident that made the League its bitches, rules his own country, had a terrific rockstar on his side, has the voice of an angel, is incredibly nice and doesn't have any daddy issues.
 
Avatar: Legend of Azula (part 3)
Third Year, Reign of Fire Lord Izumi, Midwinter

I frown as I consider the date. No, they don't do it like that anymore, do they? It should be '170 After Genocide', but that makes me quite uncomfortable. Planning a calendar after a brutal extermination campaign conducted by one still extant group against another? Even dating it from the start of the Great War has that problem, even if the phrasing would be a little more neutral.

I pull the oars again, while on the bench across from me Azula sniffs as she considers the map. And if I was more invested in the events of this world I might well sniff as well.

Firelord Zuko gave up every gain the Fire Nation made in the Great War, regardless of how long the region in question had been integrated into the Fire Nation, the ethnicity or disposition of the people living there and whether or not anyone living there wanted to go back to being ruled by whatever Earth Kingdom royal family used to rule them. An actual revolt in the oldest settlements resulted in one city and its surrounding rural region gaining theoretical independence as Republic City, but it only got actual independence after some sort of mass revolt by a non-bender paramilitary led to the council made up of appointees of the four nations being disbanded.

It beggars belief that the system lasted as long as it did.

Azula rolls the map up. "This isn't helping."

"Oh?"

"I thought that Zuzu might have grown into being Firelord."

"He made the decision to decolonise almost immediately after Aang defeated Ozai. There wasn't much time for him to gain more experience."

"Then he should have given the throne to Uncle Iroh." She reties the cord around the map and returns it to her satchel as we come up to the beach. "I don't think this is helping."

"On the contrary. I think this is exactly what you need."

She takes hold of the mooring rope and jumps, easily passing over the intervening patch of water and landing on the dark volcanic sand of the beach. I give the oars two more strokes before stowing them, then I stand up and jump into the knee-deep water besides the boat. The water feels entirely too warm for this latitude and time of year, which is the main reason that I wanted to come here once I heard about it.

Azula pulls on the rope and I push the hull, and between us we get the boat up past the high tide line before the guards reach us.

"Hey! You can't be here!"

Azula's eyes narrow immediately, but she calms herself a moment later. She's come a very long way in the last seventy years, but I must admit that I'm a little worried that reinstating the earlier context might cause her to relapse. Which is essentially why I suggested this journey: she is as well. That and the obvious.

The guards are wearing red and black leathers, and carry shields and cudgels rather than spears or swords. Armed for dealing with street criminals rather than a serious fight. It's rather nice that someone issued that order.

I smile broadly, walking past Azula to greet them. "Hello!"

The leader of the trio sighs. "Look, sir, this island is off-limits for as long as the volcano is acting up. It's for your own safety. So it's really best if you and your…" He considers Azula for a moment, presumably attempting to divine the nature of our relationship. "Girlfriend, try another island."

Azula takes another calming breath.

Azula has similar attitudes towards personal decay that I do, her eighty-five year old body looking perhaps half of that. She only started allowing her hair to grey in places when people assuming that she was a lot younger than her true age began to irritate her. I on the other hand have far more experience with looking like the old man I have allowed myself to become; a slightly more withered version of the face I wore when I first met her.

"Yes, that's why I'm here."

"Sir-."

"To commune with the spirit of the island and try to calm it." I point my right thumb at Azula. "She's my assistant, not… That. Hah! Not at my time of life."

"Oh! Ah, sorry, sir. Ma'am."

Azula makes a show of rolling her eyes and shaking her head, before turning away to pick up our bag from the boat.

"Ah, you're a Fire Sage?" The lead guard looks me over sceptically, no doubt noting my plain dress. "Lord Bao did send for one, but we weren't expecting a reply for a few weeks."

Radios, they have. Radios with good reception in isolated areas next to- I look up at the ash column. -powerful sources of electromagnetic interference, they don't have. And a traditionalist like Lord Bao would probably feel a little off about expecting the Fire Sages to respond to a radio call anyway.

"No, merely a humble wandering shaman. But I've been talking to spirits most of my life-" Certainly true by now. "-and I was closer."

The lead guard looks up at the volcano, sucking in air through his teeth.

The island is usually inhabited, but the villages have already been evacuated. The locals wouldn't be happy about having to rebuild from scratch, but they could do it and the Fire Nation is well accustomed to the idea that sometimes volcanoes erupt. The problem Lord Bao is more worried about are the neighbouring islands, where the falling ash and obscured sunlight is killing off the tourism from people trying to get away from the colder weather in other parts of the world, and the damage it will do to the next tourist season.

That actual problem is a good deal more serious, but he doesn't know that.

He doesn't want to let me up there. He has orders, and he knows how dangerous active volcanoes are and he doesn't want me to come to harm. But he also doesn't want to pass up on an opportunity to get this problem fixed. So 'we'll take you to our officer' in two, one-.

He turns back to me. "I'll take you to our Captain. He can decide if it's alright for you to go up the slope."

"Splendid!" Azula passes me my pack and I shrug it over my shoulders. "Lead the way."

The guard nods, then turns to his more slender compatriot. "Jin, take them back to base camp. Bo and me will keep watching the shore."

Jin nods with a smile, while Bo slumps slightly. "Aww…"

"You can do the next escort." The two of them start to walk off. "Seriously, you're getting paid to go to the beach, how do you..?"

"This way back to camp." Jin leads us in the opposite direction, towards the evacuated settlement. "So what's got the volcano spirit riled up? This island hasn't gone up for centuries."

"I don't know yet. Was the shrine at the peak in good repair?"

"I have no idea. Is that it?"

"Some spirits can be fairly sensitive about that sort of thing. Or traditional festivals being abandoned. Or made more touristy."

He winces. For the most part, spirits don't actually care much about how the humans who live near their holy places live. The issue is when there was some pact or other that requires that the humans do certain things at certain times, and then the humans forget about it. Most spirits do not handle that well, and just about everyone is raised on stories of why traditions are important...

And then the tourist money starts coming in, and that goes right out of the window.

"But I imagine that between us, we can sort this out. A quick refresh of the shrine, a few candles, a little chanting…" I smile reassuringly, while Azula remains po-faced. "We should be able to calm things down within a day."

Within A Day

And I didn't do any of those things. But things are a good deal calmer now nonetheless.
 
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Third Year, Reign of Fire Lord Izumi, Midwinter
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I've been waiting for this since you first said what Paul and Azula would do here.

Mr Zoat said:
"But I imagine that between us, we can sort this out. A quick refresh of the shine, a few candle, a little chanting…" I smile reassuringly, while Azula remains po-faced. "We should be able to calm things down within a day."

Within A Day

And I didn't do any of those things. But things are a good deal calmer now nonetheless.
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I'm honestly a little disappointed that this is just a set up chapter more than anything else, but I still enjoyed it. I also wish we got to see what Paul did with the volcano spirit.
 
Mr Zoat, that comment about Azula not being his girlfriend has me wondering if Paul has decided to be celibate due to his longevity. Was he able to find a similarly long lived life partner the way the Renegade did with Luna?
 
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