Undying Litch-King
Not too sore, are you?
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[X] Plan Smuthunter [First Presence Excellency]
Happy new year to everyone.
Ditto
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[X] Plan Smuthunter [First Presence Excellency]
Happy new year to everyone.
This is what the first paragraph of my write-in is trying to get across. We don't care that Phenex and Gremory set up an arranged marriage, we care that Rias would have done just about anything to get out of it. If she had been okay with marrying Raiser then there would have been no reason for us to get involved in the first place.Our problem is not that a marriage was arranged but that Raiser had an absolute disregard for anything but his trophy.
Same way a Solar does, just slower. Most of the wonders of the First Age were built by teams of mortal craftsman, maybe with a Solar foreman leading them if it's something important or really complicated like a Warstrider. But stuff like that can take a full year to build, and a year in Creation is longer than on Earth. Princes of the Earth have better things to do than spend all day every day for a full year supervising people who already know how to do their jobs.Also, the sword was forged by mortals, right?
If so, Bright's probably trying to figure out how mortals were able to make something so powerful.
So maybe something more like...I would rather emphasize that we honestly did not know about the engagement until Raiser told us right before the fight and that we were not fighting him because of the engagement but because Raiser threatened us and our friends. as to the political speak we even mentioned it to Raiser at the start of the fight beating up the person doing good things for your species is a bad thing and likely to earn you some ill will. the battle was not motivated by the fact the engagement existed but Raisers attitude towards those beneath him. The engagement was something we were going to stay out of hell Rias was even somewhat upset that we got involved directly.
Needs a little bit of work. If nothing else, it's only a one die stunt. You have to interact with the enviroment to bring it to two dice. Describe actions, don't just monologue.
still figuring out the details to add to increase the die count.Needs a little bit of work. If nothing else, it's only a one die stunt. You have to interact with the enviroment to bring it to two dice. Describe actions, don't just monologue.
[X] Plan Silversun 2, with the First Presence Excellency and other relevant charms.
Very goof Bard, it conveys perfectly how ridiculous powerful the Masters of Ryozampaku are ^^. I only wish I can reward you with Xp for this.
[COMMON SENSE]: This one speaks the truth.If you remove the line about the wedding equaling rape I will have no protests to the rest. it strikes me as a bad idea to accuse the devil noble whose son we beat the shit out of while lambasting an ideology he has some belief in of being an accessory to rape in his own home. I would be offended at that even if I did agree with the rest.
Yep ^^. But remember that Issei is a Solar Exalted before being a Dragon. Please have him act on that too.Something funny about the dragon mindset when you think about it.
At the core of their being lies the concept of "mine." My strength. My Confidence. My everything.
And it makes you realize, how utterly stupid it would be to try and take something they consider their's, be it a friend, a lover, or a companion.
Eh.Very goof Bard, it conveys perfectly how ridiculous powerful the Masters of Ryozampaku are ^^. I only wish I can reward you with Xp for this.