Mr Zoat
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Thank you, corrected.Without the interruption:
At times like this, Lantern Grayven, that I am reminded of your Apokoliptian origins.
That doesn't read quite right. Maybe drop the "that"?
At times like this, Lantern Grayven, I am reminded of your Apokoliptian origins.
Or change the beginning?
It's times like this, Lantern Grayven, that I am reminded of your Apokoliptian origins.
Due to the time skip, we never find out exactly what happened.I'm not too familiar with Canon YJ to be honest. I read there was some mind fuckery, editing Connor's memories, but not the specifics. What all (else) happened that would be so horrifying?