0zymandias
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Hi Mr Zoat, I'm in awe of your work I started reading it on SB, and followed you all the way here. It took me a few days and a few nights but I've caught up with everything.
And firstly I would like to ask if you have a patreon that I could donate to because I feel like this monument of work deserves some appreciation more than words.
And secondly, considering Paul's own views on human augmentation I'm surprised that the paragon timeline hasn't taken any long term enhancements. I remember he considered the impacts of transhumanism early in the story and decided against doing so but considering all that he's faced and done I think he would be more willing to do as such.
His use of the ring to temporarily enhance his reaction times and brain functions Flash(?) levels of comprehension. He can do it to himself permanently and safely by applying the Garrick formula. Or having someone graft cybernetic enchantments to his brain. I can't see why he wouldn't take the opportunity in the long run.
Furthermore, since the infiltration of the Hell arc, I don't think he's ever used the shapeshifter abilities, while I can see why he'd prefer constructs I don't see why he won't modify his cells to enable kryptonian level strength and resilience? He knows it/ possible, he has access to the Jor-El's work and to Superboy not to mention Overgirl's own DNA. If he doesn't want to upset the Kryptonians he's friends with then, he could at least Danner himself. (If he has and I've forgotten, please ignore that).
Another point I think after Satanus captures Paul, is that he realised that he can use demon magic due to the corruption of his soul, (also I don't think he's seen Constantine since he became a Lord of Chaos) has he tried any kind of sorcery after that? If it's the soul that the issue it's should be possible for him to have his soul seen to by Hades or Thanatos, and learn Greek sorcery. Alternatively he could try and absorb heavenly powers and learn from there.
Also very early on in the story, when Paul was having a small party at Luthor's, Paul recommended Lex to Munroe saying that he had more infrastructure than Paul. Why didn't Paul start his own magitech company? With his asteroid mining he didn't lack capital, his meta-knowledge and JL contacts would have access to all he needed. This would have enabled him another channel to innovate the human race as by openly owning/running the firm he would be answerable to himself and wouldn't need to rely on Lex or Kord. He could have be superhero Elon Musk in a sense. I can see that you did something later like that with Peter Wynne but it could also have been done by Paul.
Once more I honestly believe this is one of the if the best fanfic I've seen on the Internet. I truly would be willing to donate to a patreon or something like that. I can't wait to read more of your work.
And firstly I would like to ask if you have a patreon that I could donate to because I feel like this monument of work deserves some appreciation more than words.
And secondly, considering Paul's own views on human augmentation I'm surprised that the paragon timeline hasn't taken any long term enhancements. I remember he considered the impacts of transhumanism early in the story and decided against doing so but considering all that he's faced and done I think he would be more willing to do as such.
His use of the ring to temporarily enhance his reaction times and brain functions Flash(?) levels of comprehension. He can do it to himself permanently and safely by applying the Garrick formula. Or having someone graft cybernetic enchantments to his brain. I can't see why he wouldn't take the opportunity in the long run.
Furthermore, since the infiltration of the Hell arc, I don't think he's ever used the shapeshifter abilities, while I can see why he'd prefer constructs I don't see why he won't modify his cells to enable kryptonian level strength and resilience? He knows it/ possible, he has access to the Jor-El's work and to Superboy not to mention Overgirl's own DNA. If he doesn't want to upset the Kryptonians he's friends with then, he could at least Danner himself. (If he has and I've forgotten, please ignore that).
Another point I think after Satanus captures Paul, is that he realised that he can use demon magic due to the corruption of his soul, (also I don't think he's seen Constantine since he became a Lord of Chaos) has he tried any kind of sorcery after that? If it's the soul that the issue it's should be possible for him to have his soul seen to by Hades or Thanatos, and learn Greek sorcery. Alternatively he could try and absorb heavenly powers and learn from there.
Also very early on in the story, when Paul was having a small party at Luthor's, Paul recommended Lex to Munroe saying that he had more infrastructure than Paul. Why didn't Paul start his own magitech company? With his asteroid mining he didn't lack capital, his meta-knowledge and JL contacts would have access to all he needed. This would have enabled him another channel to innovate the human race as by openly owning/running the firm he would be answerable to himself and wouldn't need to rely on Lex or Kord. He could have be superhero Elon Musk in a sense. I can see that you did something later like that with Peter Wynne but it could also have been done by Paul.
Once more I honestly believe this is one of the if the best fanfic I've seen on the Internet. I truly would be willing to donate to a patreon or something like that. I can't wait to read more of your work.