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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Plutonian (part 9)
12th April
09:28 GMT


Koriand'r lowers her left hand, ring dimming as she shakes her head.

"I do not know where the ship went."

I nod, then look at Khan just in case he's got something helpful to say. Since I'm not a member of the Justice League I don't know quite how critical things are going in the Kremlin at the moment. I don't think that someone prone to fits of genuine rage -as opposed to the staged kind- would survive in the current atmosphere, so I think that we're going to get a reasonably measured response… At least in the short term. In the longer term… This was a major investment of financial and political capital. The heads that roll might do so from any height.

Khan hasn't noticed-.

"Lantern Khan?"

"Hm? Yes, one class three ClusterShip, seventeen executive level-. Yes, that's the one. The valuation is up to date?"

Jam.

"You see, it's rather clever: we make sure that anyone who could be due a payout is also on the ship. That way we minimise our exposure to piracy. Hah, 'bring your child to work year' was a masterstroke. And you have a backup of L-Ron's personality? I'm pretty sure I paid for it, but I want to make sure that it's ready to go."



"Did you just hang up on me? How dare you hang up on me! I want to speak to your manager!"

"Lantern Khan, if I could borrow you for a moment?"

"See if I use you people again. Yes, Illustres, how may I help at this tragic time?"

"Do you have any way of tracking the ship?"

"Yes, of course. L-Ron!"



He's… Looking around.



I'm actually feeling a little sad.

"I'm assuming that he was on the ship?"

"Yes, I-. Yes."

"Okay, does he have a locator beacon of some k-?"

"L-RON!"

Orange energy bursts out of him in a high-power scan wave, and I spot Lantern Savenlovich hurriedly throw up a shield as the orange light cascades through local space. Leonid's ship actually overcharges its shields in response to what the mostly reassembled tactical computer thinks is an attack.

I'm actually a little impressed with that. Not only was it powerful, I'm pretty sure that would have bypassed most forms of stealth and phasing. I was pretty sure that wasn't what had happened here, but it's nice to be certain.

Khan… His armour is just armour, so there's no body language to read. His gaseous form on the other hand is Brownianing with alarming ferocity and I.. don't know what that means. I don't know if he knows what that means. And then-.

A construct L-Ron appears besides him. His helmet swivels a hundred degrees right and he stares at it for a moment. Then it bursts.

"L-Ron doesn't get sick days or job-share. I'm going to find him so that I can dock his pay."

And he actually wants him back. There are ways to mislead my empathic sense, but using power rings requires the real thing.

"Alright then, both of you. How could the ships have vanished, given that we can't detect them?"

Koriand'r looks thoughtful. "Some form of faster than light travel that is not on our database, which leaves no traceable sign?"

"If it's not on a Maltusian database then we've got bigger problems than a missing ship. And unless there was something a lot more valuable on board than I think there was, they were wasting their time."

"Your reports mention that some people on Earth with great technical ability do not apply their skills wisely."

"Painfully true, but perfectly stealthy mass-teleportation is incredibly difficult, and the Justice League is perfectly capable of detecting the sort of massive power draw it would require. It could be that, but what's more-?"

"Magic." Khan's eyeholes are glowing orange. "A rare resource I wanted to exploit. Hard to detect with power rings."

"That's my first guess. There isn't much we can do about it until Doctor Mist arrives, but just in case they weren't as clever as they think they were…"

I take out a couple of rune stones and use construct tethers to move them around where the ClusterShip used to be.

"Now, it would be quite hard to actively cast this far from the Earth, but there have been some rather significant breakthroughs in bound spells recently, so with a little luck…"

No, nothing. Ah well. I pull the stones back.

"Lantern Khan, do you have a record of every trip your people made to and from the Earth?"

"Yes, but our security-. Mmrughmrppffah, would not be easy to breach. We've had incidents in the past, infiltrators and the like. L-Ron can-."

I float forward and pat him on his armoured shoulder. He really thinks about L-Ron in the same way as I think of my rings; not exactly separate from my own concept of me.

"Then the obvious potential source is the Russian ships. I'm sure that everyone involved underwent extensive vetting, but Russian magic is rubbish. It wouldn't be too hard for a sufficiently skilled person to sneak something in."

Would they have done this deliberately? Would they risk the security complement of the ship in an attempt to steal it? No. No. They might get away with salvaging ships that crashed in their territory, but they have to know that if they tried piracy then the Green Lantern Corps would not be on their side. They were already stealing a march on every other country on the planet; there wasn't any need for them to risk it.

The Light is a possibility, but… I'm not seeing the payoff. Khan was here to trade. If they wanted technology then buying it was the easiest way to get it. And we get enough alien visitors that any competent international conspiracy could get hold of parts… And the ClusterShip wasn't all that advanced by interstellar standards.

I've got a worrying feeling that this is going to be someone I've never heard of.

"Orange Lantern Illustres to Watchtower."

"Manhunter here. Go ahead."

"I'm not getting anything. If the Russians will have us, I'd like to take a look around their launch site in case something got onto their ships that wasn't supposed to be there."

"Doctor Mist, Hawkman and Batman are already on-site."

"And none of them are empaths."

"True. I will relay your request. Stand by."
 
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"And none of them are empaths."

Considering that Dr Mist has white enlightenment and is a 11.000 year old sorcerer I think he'd have at least some skill in reading the emotions of other people using his magic and any powers he may have gotten, aside from his immortality, when he saw the White Entity.

Probably not as strong as the paragons since his soul is made of a piece of an Entity, but still.
 
USA and Justice League: I see this as an absolute win!
 

Was referring to this:



Today on "What resources did Paul forget he could use" we have.

Super Geniuses living on Venus

Kyrptonian Space Station

Scott Free and his Motherbox

He has a power ring, one of the universes most advanced pieces of technology.

The tech Supes and the Sivanas have may be more advanced than a large portion of the universe, but it still may be inferior to a power ring.

Supes may not even have any scanning devices with him, he may have the knowledge on how to build them in his records of Krypton, but probably not physical versions.

The Motherbox that Scott has is one Barda took when she killed a soldier from New Genesis, unlike the renegades FatherBox and later MotherBox that one didn't use to be one of the Boxes belonging to a brilliant New God scientist, so its unlikely to have some of the more advanced functions of the renegades Boxes.
 
12th April
09:28 GMT


Koriand'r lowers her left hand, ring dimming as she shakes her head.

"I do not know where the ship went."
Oh, boy... This is going to be a loooong day for OL, isn't it? With any luck, it'll be something simple he can take his frustation out on without regrets...

I nod, then look at Khan just in case he's got something helpful to say. Since I'm not a member of the Justice League I don't know quite how critical things are going in the Kremlin at the moment. I don't think that someone prone to fits of genuine rage -as opposed to the staged kind- would survive in the current atmosphere, so I think that we're going to get a reasonably measured response… At least in the short term. In the longer term… This was a major investment of financial and political capital. The heads that role might do so from any height.
And those below are going to get shit on from such a height, they'll think God himself is taking a dump...

Khan hasn't noticed-.

"Lantern Khan?"

"Hm? Yes, one class three ClusterShip, seventeen executive level-. Yes, that's the one. The valuation is up to date?"
:eek: ...Is he on the 'phone' to his Insurance agent?

Jam.

"You see, it's rather clever: we make sure that anyone would could be due a payout is also on the ship. That way we minimise our exposure to piracy. Hah, 'bring your child to work year' was a masterstroke. And you have a backup of L-Ron's personality? I'm pretty sure I paid for it, but I want to make sure that it's ready to go."
Honestly, I am not surprised. This is entirely in character for him.



"Did you just hang up on me? How dare you hang up on me! I want to speak to your manager!"
He needs the proper 'Karen' haircut for best effect... Which simply raises amusing images of him with hair at all...:V

"Lantern Khan, if I could borrow you for a moment?"

"See if I use you people again. Yes, Illustres, how may I help at this tragic time?"
Can the smarminess, gape-face. This is a serious investigation.

"Do you have any way of tracking the ship?"

"Yes, of course. L-Ron!"
<Pinches nose> Khan... You might be forgetting something.



He's… Looking around.
He better be amazingly powerful when suitably motivated, because he is not making a good showing of worthiness right now.



I'm actually feeling a little sad.

"I'm assuming that he was on the ship?"
Well, since he hasn't answered... I'd say that's a sucker's bet.

"Yes, I-. Yes."

"Okay, does he have a locator beacon of some k-?"
Good thinking. What's the frequency, Kenneth Khan?

"L-RON!"

Orange energy bursts out of him in a high-power scan wave, and I spot Lantern Savenlovich hurriedly throw up a shield as the orange light cascades through local space. Leonid's ship actually overcharges its shields in response to what the mostly reassembled tactical computer thinks is an attack.
Hiuh, he really is powerful when motivated. I hope no-one takes that pulse wrong, though.

I'm actually a little impressed with that. Not only was it powerful, I'm pretty sure that would have bypassed most forms of stealth and phasing. I was pretty sure that wasn't what had happened here, but it's nice to be certain.

Khan… His armour is just armour, so there's no body language to read. His gaseous form on the other hand is Brownianing with alarming ferocity and I.. don't know what that means. I don't know if he knows what that means. And then-.
So his brain (as it were) is aglow with whirling, transient nodes of thought careening through a cosmic vapor of invention. How Blanc-ian of him.

A construct L-Ron appears besides him. His helmet swivels a hundred degrees right and he stares at it for a moment. The it bursts.

"L-Ron doesn't get sick days or job-share. I'm going to find him so that I can dock his pay."
Not the L-Ron he wanted. That's a damn good motivation to track him down.

And he actually wants him back. There are ways to mislead my empathic sense, but using power rings require the real thing.

"Alright then, both of you. How could the ships have vanished, given that we can't detect them?"
Because they might think of something he can't. Good plan.

Koriand'r looks thoughtful. "Some form of faster than light travel that is not on our database, which leaves no traceable sign?"

"If it's not on a Maltusian database then we've got bigger problems than a missing ship. And unless there was something a lot more valuable on board than I think there was, they were wasting their time."
Oooh, scary. But I'm hoping it's something less predictable than that...

"Your reports mention that some people on Earth with great technical ability do not apply their skills wisely."

"Painfully true, but perfectly stealthy mass-teleportation is incredibly difficult, and the Justice League is perfectly capable of detecting the sort of massive power draw it would require. It could be that, but what's more-?"
And such things tend to be flashy, whether by nature or by design. And if some Malign Hypercognitive had done this, they'd be crowing about it...

"Magic." Khan's eyeholes are glowing orange. "A rare resource I wanted to exploit. Hard to detect with power rings."

"That's my first guess. There isn't much we can do about it until Doctor Mist arrives, but just in case they weren't as clever as they think they were…"
Must have been some magic, to operate this far from a planetary Thaumaturgic field...

I take out a couple of rune stones and use construct tethers to move them around where the ClusterShip used to be.

"Now, it would be quite hard to actively cast this far from the Earth, but there have been some rather significant breakthroughs in bound spells recently, so with a little luck…"

No, nothing. Ah well. I pull the stones back.
Bugger. A random bleed portal, perhaps? Or would that be detectable with Maltusian tech?

"Lantern Khan, do you have a record of every trip your people made to and from the Earth?"

"Yes, but our security-. Mmrughmrppffah, would not be easy to breach. We've had incidents in the past, infiltrators and the like. L-Ron can-."
What the... Something he didn't want to say? We've seen that before. Please tell me he has spare meds ready.

I float forward and pat him on his armoured shoulder. He really thinks about L-Ron in the same way as I think of my rings; not exactly separate from my own concept of me.

"Then the obvious potential source is the Russian ships. I'm sure that everyone involved underwent extensive vetting, but Russian magic is rubbish. It wouldn't be too hard for a sufficiently skilled person to sneak something in."
Or some hidden feature of the alien tech they used as the design. Who knows what hidden trojan horse code was in a black-boxed system?

Would they have done this deliberately? Would they risk the security complement of the ship in an attempt to steal it? No. No. They might get away with salvaging ships that crashed in their territory, but they have to know that if they tried piracy then the Green Lantern Corps would not be on their side. They were already stealing a march on every other country on the planet; there wasn't any need for them to risk it.
Yeah, that would not have gone down well in the court of public opinion, much less the theatre of international politics.

The Light is a possibility, but… I'm not seeing the payoff. Khan was here to trade. If they wanted technology then buying it was the easiest way to get it. And we get enough alien visitors that any competent international conspiracy could get hold of parts… And the ClusterShip wasn't all that advanced by interstellar standards.

I've got a worrying feeling that this is going to be someone I've never heard of.
At least, someone you'd never heard of before your arrival, eh, Mr Zoat? Research!

"Orange Lantern Illustres to Watchtower."

"Manhunter here. Go ahead."

"I'm not getting anything. If the Russians will have us, I'd like to take a look around their launch site in case something got onto their ships that wasn't supposed to be there."
Fingers crossed that they are willing. Hopefully the shouting and such in Moscow is finished.

"Doctor Mist, Hawkman and Batman are already on-site."

"And none of them are empaths."

"True. I will relay your request. Stand by."
Gotta admit, Doctor Mist would almost certainly have ways to emulate his empathic vision, assuming as Darko said, he didn't already have some form of it.

And the guessing games of 'Whodunnit' begin. Place your bets, folks. What The Eff happened, and who's responsible? Was it an intentional attack, or some cosmic fluke? From the Future? The Past? Another plane altogether? Let us see!
 
He has a power ring, one of the universes most advanced pieces of technology.

The tech Supes and the Sivanas have may be more advanced than a large portion of the universe, but it still may be inferior to a power ring.
Actually the Sivanas already showed they could defeat everything his Power Ring can do besides Avarice teleporting.

Supes may not even have any scanning devices with him, he may have the knowledge on how to build them in his records of Krypton, but probably not physical versions.
No... The Kryptonian Space Station with the Kryptonian AI that Paul brought back from the Rao system...

The Motherbox that Scott has is one Barda took when she killed a soldier from New Genesis, unlike the renegades FatherBox and later MotherBox that one didn't use to be one of the Boxes belonging to a brilliant New God scientist, so its unlikely to have some of the more advanced functions of the renegades Boxes.
All Motherboxes have the same functions.
 
Actually the Sivanas already showed they could defeat everything his Power Ring can do besides Avarice teleporting.

They showed that they could take some of his stuff from subspace when it wasn't closed, not that they would have any better scanning equipment than a thing made by a race of immortal super geniuses.

No... The Kryptonian Space Station with the Kryptonian AI that Paul brought back from the Rao system...

Kryptonians were advanced, but not as advanced as Maltusians

All Motherboxes have the same functions.

A MotherBox that was made or FatheBox that was used by brilliant scientists, one of which is their inventor, is most likely going to be more advanced and knowledgeable than one used by a common warrior. As well as have more adavnced features added into it to make it useful for the scientist to perform certain experiments.

The last time he visited them...

Or possibly the second to last...

Think he used the Honden to travel there not because he wanted to get past any security they may have, but because it was the quickest way back.
 
I'm going to place my bet on "New God or Apokalypian powers/technology" as the source of this strangeness. With that said, I think Paragon-Paul is correct in that he is not currently familiar with the exact perpetrator. I reckon this will be some splinter group or faction, though there certainly are individuals with the resources to pull this off alone.

I just really, really hope this isn't Mister Mxyzptlk from Superman storylines.
 
Since it was Russian ships that disappeared then the comic book answer would be able me sort of anti- communist, anti- Soviet character. Someone who strongly detests Russians getting a space fleet. That would be the supervillain way of thinking. Other motive could be to keep Earth relatively isolated.
If this is a magic based attack as Paul pointed out it's hard to do magic in space so the magic has to be advanced. So a radical Atlantean in an attempt to get rid of the threats to them.
 
What if its Douche Bag Paul from the alternate world? He wants something? "I'll just take it".

Probably not him.

Ok, this is just getting silly now. How, and more importantly, why the fuck would he do that?

He has a lot of advanced equipment with him as well as several powerful magic users, one is Circe, the other is a Lord of Order, so that solves the 'How' if it was him, as for the why, well we've seen him do some fairly evil and pointless things that serve in virtually no practical way, and might harm him in the long run, just for his own amusement and pleasure, so that would explain the 'why'.

It's still probably not him though.

It wouldn't be all that surprising if it was the Light though.

I know OL said that they could just negotiate for the tech there, but they may view someone like Manga as being too beneath them to do something like that.

Their stated goal is to advance Humanity, but we know that's just bullshit they tell themselves to justify their actions for what is essentially world domination, as well as to make themselves feel like noble people that are being prevented from achieving their noble goals from those they see as stagnating the world.

If given the choice between ruling the world, but the world no longer advances, and the world advancing, but they are not allowed to rule it, most of them will chose the first option.

Since it was Russian ships that disappeared then the comic book answer would be able me sort of anti- communist, anti- Soviet character. Someone who strongly detests Russians getting a space fleet. That would be the supervillain way of thinking. Other motive could be to keep Earth relatively isolated.
If this is a magic based attack as Paul pointed out it's hard to do magic in space so the magic has to be advanced. So a radical Atlantean in an attempt to get rid of the threats to them.

This is honestly fairly plausible.

Another person responsible for this could be Boss Smiley.

While it is true he is altering the way he does things, an alien ship coming to Earth to trade would throw a big wrench in his plans and he may think it necessary to remove it.

He was able to convince the Angels to attack Paul, so if he could convince another powerful being or beings to help him then it's possible.

Paul also never got to scan Boss Smiley with his ring so he wouldn't know how he worked if he did this himself.
He may have been connected to those theurgy machines like Karrien was, seeing as he was able to conjure some of that angel fire, and Angels can apparently affect things on a planar level, like making it so that Power Lanterns are no longer connected to their respective elemental plane.
 
Can Paul detect hush tubes? I'm assuming normal boom tubes leave some sort of residue (though I guess they wouldn't make noise in space)?

My guess is Uncle Sam. A sufficiently motivated, literal Spirit of America, pissed off first by the threat from ClusterCorp and then by the Russians having a space fleet before America? And run like Zoat has been running the personifications of different countries (Russia, Nazi Germany)? Quite possible. Or maybe the Spirit of China? A national personification, at any rate.
 
Can Paul detect hush tubes?

He may have asked Scott to give him some data to detect them so he can deal with any that open on Earth to bring Apokaliptian trouble to it

He could have also gotten the data from the Controllers or Dox, who was working on something that looked like a Boom Tube.

My guess is Uncle Sam. A sufficiently motivated, literal Spirit of America, pissed off first by the threat from ClusterCorp and then by the Russians having a space fleet before America? And run like Zoat has been running the personifications of different countries (Russia, Nazi Germany)? Quite possible. Or maybe the Spirit of China? A national personification, at any rate.

It's probably not Uncle Sam since I don't think this is in his power range to pull off.

He also needs patriotism to be at full power and America is most likely not as patriotic as it was during WWII.
 
Was referring to this:

Trouble is, culture is so fragmented these days that expecting anyone to get any particular cultural reference can be... rather optimistic. Tricky problem, because a punchy cultural reference can be fun. Sometimes I compromise, throw in a Wikipedia link, or stick something in a Spoiler.
A MotherBox that was made or FatherBox that was used by brilliant scientists, one of which is their inventor, is most likely going to be more advanced and knowledgeable than one used by a common warrior. As well as have more advanced features added into it to make it useful for the scientist to perform certain experiments.
We can't really tell if who made a MotherBox makes any difference. But, they do seem to pick-up characteristics from their owners, like Orion. FatherBoxen? Who knows? Might be the New God super-scientist types (just) get more mileage out of them?

Trouble is that a MotherBox is a 'dea ex machina' ('dea' is goddess as opposed to 'deus' god). They do whatever the story requires, if the writer isn't Kirby.
What if its Douche Bag Paul from the alternate world? He wants something? "I'll just take it".
Probably not, if he knows it's coming from SI OL's world. When he found out about Enlightenment that appeared to really worry him...
OL could do worse than go have a chat with Hephaestus about this... The whole world (that pays attention to news media) knew about ClusterCorps, and the Russian spaceships might've been enough to trigger creation of an Old God, who is the Defender of Earth from Space? And, neatly removed both of the problems?

That would be an interesting twist...
 
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DC earth being kept in a tech stasis by a unseen force + Alien Company trying to uplift earth with uncontrollable Capitalism + Russian Spaceships potentially starting a space race + Both conveniently disappearing as soon as they get close to each other = ?

Boss Smiley, what are you doing?
 

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