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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Duke Long

    Duke Long Glomerulus

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    Extraneous ‘have’
     
  2. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
     
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  3. BrotherofaStudio

    BrotherofaStudio Know what you're doing yet?

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    Rinaker may want to get rid of Paul but he is smart enough to know he needs to bide his time. He'd probably go ballistic if he finds out that Paul is trying to get the Banshee to form an agreement with humanity as a whole. Something is going to give sooner or later and I can't wait to see it.
    If Percival was as efficient as Paul is while using the ring, then this will be the second time I will have heard of Leprechauns being incredible fighters. The first time being the LEP Recon.
     
  4. CTrees

    CTrees Chasing the ring

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    An alternate reading is that Rinaker already suspects the Green Knight is a Lantern. Obviously we don't know exactly how much he would know about current events in the galaxy, or how active the GL Corps is in other sectors. But if he suspects, and has an idea of what a Lantern is capable of, a strict noninterference policy would be a solid way to avoid attracting attention that could expose the Shadoen operations. That changes Blaze's mission from just historical info on the Green Knight to finding out if the Banshee have a Lantern on call, and are thus a danger to the Shadoen fleet.
     
  5. dw7thdoctor

    dw7thdoctor Getting sticky.

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    I can't remember if it was stated earlier in this story, but I believe in this continuity there isn't a Green Lantern Corps.
     
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  6. CTrees

    CTrees Chasing the ring

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    Well that would make it significantly less likely that Rinaker and the Shadoen were aware of Lanterns. Oh well.
     
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  7. dw7thdoctor

    dw7thdoctor Getting sticky.

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    I could be wrong though, just the feeling I got.
     
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  8. Darko

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    Even if there isn't a Corps it may be possible that the Maltusians are a known group and others know about their rings.
     
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  9. Doccer

    Doccer I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    Snort. I think you mean Alliance Law. If it's human law u wanna enforce I suggest you conform Alliance regs to human law. When's the trial and release date of say any alien in ur custody again?
     
  10. PDV

    PDV Revelation That Uncertainty Is Itself An Answer

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    FTFY
     
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  11. Doccer

    Doccer I trust you know where the happy button is?

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    It was hinted at that the Lanterns had never become a thing in this timeline. But not confirmed. As Percival was out of touch from his cousins and rarely worked with the Glow himself. No Lanterns on Earth at least.
    Their rings at this point the Rings are basically baby pacifiers, and I doubt they are the only species with rings. So I doubt many would see the difference between Rings and rings. Assuming the Lantern Corps was never begun.


    Mr Zoat
    Does this Paul display the Green Lantern symbol on his armor and such like his standard? Or is his armor unadorned?
     
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  12. CTrees

    CTrees Chasing the ring

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    Okay, I went back and looked. Percival left while rings were still something for Maltusian children, before anyone was giving them to aliens. Wanting to maintain his peace and quiet, he has intentionally been out of contact since. He didn't know what the Green Lantern Corps was, because it would have been founded after he left. That doesn't mean the GL Corps doesn't exist.

    So, it's still plausible that Reniker recognizes emotional spectrum manipulation and the threat it would represent to the Shadoen fleet.
     
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  13. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Illegal combatants.
    It's on his shield.
     
  14. RoninSword

    RoninSword Sky God

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    I'm pretty sure illegal combatants are entitled to some form of trial? Whether its a military tribunal or just regular court I have no idea.
     
  15. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Neither does America.
     
  16. Bramble Thorn

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    I think the only implication is that Mannheim is going to get ate the same way he ate Karon.
    And this was the plan all along.
    Mannheim isn't Charity Auction Darkseid, he's Darkseid DoorDashing it, Tyranid Gene Stealer style.

    *queue drumset rimshot SFX*
     
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  17. Threadmarks: Compass (part 1)
    Mr Zoat

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    Compass

    13th February 2013
    14:57 GMT -5


    "So how is he-"

    "RAAAAAAAGH!"

    I smile politely as the L.E.G.I.O.N. officer's eyes momentarily flick away from me in the direction of Orion's bellow.

    "-getting along?"

    A blinding flash over our heads as the nebula discharges its accumulated charge somewhere in the distance. We both cringe a little, even though it wouldn't do a thing.

    Taking this world from the Reach is being a slog.

    "He's an effective killer, sir. Normal protocol for Orange Lanterns is… Er…"

    He trails off, remembering exactly what my job is.

    "Carry on."

    "Right, well, we rotate them off the front lines after a while. The sane ones, because there's only so long a rational person can keep up that level of desire, and the ones who are losing it because we don't really want them to lose it completely. Orion told us… Ah… He didn't want to stop."

    "DIE, WORTHLESS PLAGUE CREATURES!"

    "He's been like this for four days. I don't think he's slept or eaten."

    Hm.

    "As I understand it, he doesn't actually need to do those things."

    "And he's alright staying that angry? Because…"

    "I don't know. I don't think anyone does. Part of why he's here is so that we can find out. But he should be able to regenerate any damage it does to him using his innate abilities."

    "Constantly or eventually?"

    "Um. Don't know that either."

    Another colossal lightning bolt passes over our heads, and we cringe a little less.

    "How's the fight going generally?"

    "It's a heavily fortified position and we have to use specialised ships to even get here. The whole place is riddled with tunnels and bunkers. Sir, is there something here?"

    "We don't know."

    The nebula contains planets. Unlike most nebulas, it isn't an area of infinitesimally increased particle density, but an actual electrified space fog. There's no actual sun, just a load of lumps of rock just big enough to have a liveable gravity field illuminated by the constant electrical discharges.

    So why are we spending time and blood to actually clear it rather than just mining the region and going right past it?

    Because they spent time and resources to fortify it rather than just mining the region and going right past it.

    And it's good field experience, because…

    I'm getting a slanted view of the war. I usually take part in major fights that have a squad of Orange Lanterns with them. Heck, we kicked this war off with the entire Corps in one place. So that's what the war looks like to me. But the fact is that the Orange Lantern Corps is less than a thousandth of a percent of the size of L.E.G.I.O.N.. Not all L.E.G.I.O.N. fleets have even one Lantern with them, let alone a team of three who could reliably deal with a Scarab Warrior without risking their lives.

    So most ground attacks are carried out by L.E.G.I.O.N. marines. Who are drawn from hundreds of different worlds that have no prior history of working together.

    "Must be something here."

    "If there isn't, we're no stupider than they are. Is there anything you need me to do while I'm here?"

    "Need?" He shakes his helmet. "No sir, I don't think so. Not unless the Reach just sent a fleet our way."

    "Rightoh. Keep up the good work, and keep up the record of Orion."

    "Will do, sir."

    I

    step out, and

    reappear at the minimum permitted distance from New Genesis.

    "This is the Illustres of the Orange Lantern Corps calling Supertown control. Mind if I come down?"

    The space in front of me shimmers… That's… Vikyn, isn't it?

    "You are authorised to approach. Highfather wishes to speak with you concerning Orion."

    I wince slightly. "Yes, I… Thought he might. Be right down."

    New Genesis really is a beautiful planet. I can't quite… Credit that this is the New God's original homeworld. The signs of industrialisation just aren't there. Though I remember reading something about how it would only take a few centuries for most of those signs to vanish from Earth, so maybe it was just that long ago?

    "Did you break him already?"

    I glance right.

    "Hello, Lightray. Basically, yes. Sorry."

    "Would you care to expand on that?"

    "He got a red power ring, because a crazy maltusian was so desperate to feel anything that he made sure that he went as red as possible as quickly as possible."

    "That sounds bad."

    "It was bad."

    "For the maltusian?"

    "For the maltusian. And possibly Orion. I mean, he seems to be coping and I don't have good data on what a stable Red Lantern looks like, but he's been killing Reach soldiers continuously for four days without rest."

    "I've known him do that with parademons."

    "Right, but parademons work for Darkseid. He has good reason for hating Darkseid. I hate the Reach, but as far as I know he'd had nothing to do with them. Because there's a difference between hating people who deserve it and hating people for being there."

    He stops in the air, his right hand on my shoulder to stop me.

    "You do have a plan to turn him back when this is done, I hope?"

    "Yes. But if you'd like to help…"

    I take a hologram projector out of subspace and generate an Indigo Lantern Corps sigil.

    "Do you know this symbol?"
     
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  18. Ngamer11

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    That should say 'to'.

    Now I'm curious as to who will be joining Paul from the Indigo Lantern Corps. Hopefully it'll be Indigo-1.
     
  19. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    I really hope his plan isn't to have Alan try blasting him with Blue Light.

    Because while that might work with a normal Red Lantern, I can't see that working with a New God that's internalized Rage to the degree Orion has.
     
  20. Chojin Patriarch

    Chojin Patriarch Veteran Lurker

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    ...Ah. I see Orion's dealing with the Red Light. Whether it's the good kind or the bad kind, we'll have to see, I suppose. In the meantime, at least he's making himself useful to his new allies.

    I see the 'normal' folks are justly concerned, though. I take it Orion is still in full 'Butcher host'-mode...

    Ironic. In most campaigns, it's clearing urban areas that's difficult, except for a Lantern. Here, it's more the vast, nominally-empty spaces that are challenging.

    Yes, rather rude to be telling OL his job. :p

    Logical enough... For Orange Lanterns, anyway. The Red Light, though...

    ...It tends to override simple concerns like that.

    But going without probably does have some psychological effect on New Gods.

    ...You hope. See, this cautious approach is why the Renegade beat you to the achievement. Though it's honestly in character for a Paragon. No shortcuts, no compromises. It gets done right or it doesn't get done at all.

    ...That's rather why you're letting him run off the leash, so to speak.

    In other words, where Orion isn't face-rolling his way through the Reach?

    Sounds like a right pain. An entire system that's pretty much a rabbit warren.

    ...Or perhaps an ant-hill.

    Never leave an intact enemy stronghold behind your lines.

    And your own time is limited, so you can't go haring off to their rescue... More reason to build up an honour guard capable of Greediporting.

    Ooof. I can only imagine the level of communication SNAFUs possible. Never mind things like logistics challenges or cultural clashes.

    At least that's something OL can deal with without having to think too hard.

    I detect an air of 'long suffering resignation' about that poor marine...

    Ah, yes. Might want to check in with the old man, see what He thinks of what's happening with Orion.

    One of the Forever People, eh? I see some of them have recovered...

    Ah, that British understatement. YEs, I rather suspect he will have words for you. Possibly loud ones. Almost certainly accompanied by an atmosphere of fatherly disappointment.

    Nature is damned impressive, just in its level of 'not giving a fuck about humanity's works'...

    Though he's at least broken in a useful way?

    And then the maltusian got to turn everything else red. Albeit in the form of chunky red paint, more than anything. :p

    It could have been worse. At least the giant planet-killing war machine he was in control of stayed asleep.

    So he's enthusiastic about his new job, if nothing else.

    Though, to be fair, the Reach have done a good job of making themselves hatable.

    One or two, perhaps. Depending on how bathing him in the cooler emotional lights goes...

    <sigh> Still coming at it entirely the wrong way, OL... :rolleyes:

    So, a new episode begins, and it looks like OL is finally starting to hunt down the Indigo Tribe. Especially if the subtle pun in the episode title is anything to go by. ...You know: Compassion. Or possibly 'Moral compass'. :p Certainly, OL might well be in need of both at this point. Some of the things he's needed to do to get this crazy plan underway... Makes me wonder what the Team would think.


    Absent Full Stop.
     
  21. Darko

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    Add a . at the end.

    Though he may need it for his mental health.

    Hope he's doing okay.

    "he's had"
     
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    Zoat, the spoiler box with the links for this episode is lacking the episode number.
     
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    Thank you, corrected.
    No, that's correct. He's definitely had something to do with them now.
     
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  25. hkim

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    Heh.

    Paul: "He's been down there killing stuff for literal days!"

    Highfather: "Well, it is Orion..."
     
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    My understanding is that his plan to 'fix' Orion is to hope that being exposed to the White Light will fix it. As Hinon said, either the White Light will help, or nothing will.
     
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    That's a really bad plan...

    But, it will probably work because narratively there's no way MrZoat will have his main character loose New Genesis as a potential ally.
     
  28. RoninSword

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    Well if being fixed removes him from being spiritually aligned to the Butcher, then he would suddenly need a personal lantern, so it can't be just changed back to how he was before he had the ring.
     
  29. _The_Bomb

    _The_Bomb Getting sticky.

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    Plan is to blast him with White light, not Blue.
     
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    Coda Versed in the lewd.

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    personal effects

    (Yeah, don't ask me why that's the phrase English decided to standardize on. It's easy enough to look up why it means what it means -- "effects" is derived from the Latin for "to make" so it's things that have been made that are personal... but we have the word "artifacts" that follows from the same root, meaning "that which was made by skill." I guess "effects" is technically broader, as it would also mean things that were made accidentally or coincidentally that have developed personal significance...)
     
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