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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

"The Black Circle snuck an infiltration squad onto the mining station. They were using the mining robots and mineral shipments to smuggle narcotics from outside the system back to the surface. But all that was a distraction from their real job."
When the distraction can turn a profit, it's a bonus.

"Gas thrusters and patience. Ungaran ships used radar and infrared sensors.
Does this need to be past tense?

He frowns, not seeing where I'm coming from. "The Ungaran's get them.
Unncessary apostrophe.

"An unarmed spare station is one thing.
"An unarmed space station is one thing.

"I'll…" He looks away awkwardly. "I'll bring it up at the next meeting."
That's not a 'No' yet. Take what you can get...

"Could they be salvaged?"
Good being. He's starting to work out angles.

To much too much! I close my eyes.
Too much too much! I close my eyes.

...do we do it at the same time of leave it until we're done with the bases we know about?"
...do we do it at the same time or leave it until we're done with the bases we know about?"

I had.. half-thought about trying to recruit Amon Sur. But… While there's a connection to Abin Sur and Soranik Natu there, I… Think I can find potential Lanterns who don't voluntarily join pirate groups and try to rebuild the fleets of a mass-murderer. And while Abin Sur was happy to give a ring to the woman who murdered his daughter-.
That would be Indigo-1, yes? As for Amon Sur, no, just... no. He's not the kind of person worth having in any Corps.

"Hey, John. Is Abin Sur's wife still alive?"
Good of you to think of her...

Yes, that is something of a sticking point.

"I'd choose for you to die screaming."
Oh, boy. I foresee a Red ring in his distant future.

Well, the plot thickens.
I'm pretty sure you meant "Any idea how they got past the Ungarans?" since that's the question that got answered.
I read it as him asking how much the pirates stole. Getting it out under the guards' noses, basically.
 
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I'm pretty sure you meant "Any idea how they got past the Ungarans?" since that's the question that got answered.
"Gas thrusters and patience. Ungaran ships used radar and infrared sensors.
Does this need to be past tense?
He frowns, not seeing where I'm coming from. "The Ungaran's get them.
Unncessary apostrophe.
"An unarmed spare station is one thing.
"An unarmed space station is one thing.
To much too much! I close my eyes.
Too much too much! I close my eyes.
...do we do it at the same time of leave it until we're done with the bases we know about?"
...do we do it at the same time or leave it until we're done with the bases we know about?"
Thank you, corrected.
 
"Okay, how about one of their support carriers? You don't have zeta tubes everywhere. You could easily justify it as a transport vehicle, and the Ungarans are far less likely to complain about you taking one ship."

"One ship we can't fuel, repair or crew."

"I could get you a crew. I could upgrade the Watchtower's manufacturing facilities as well."

"I'll…" He looks away awkwardly. "I'll bring it up at the next meeting."
I don't know why the JL is being so hesitant. I mean, last we checked basically every time traveler that the League has come across has described a different, sometimes multiple stellar empires taking over Earth and crushing it. Do they think that if they mash their eyes shut tightly enough it'll just not happen?

Oh, boy. I foresee a Red ring in his distant future.
Nah. Anyone can muster up some rage in the heat of the moment. If he can maintain that level of frothing madness after five years in solitary then we'll talk. :)
 
I don't know why the JL is being so hesitant. I mean, last we checked basically every time traveler that the League has come across has described a different, sometimes multiple stellar empires taking over Earth and crushing it. Do they think that if they mash their eyes shut tightly enough it'll just not happen?
My guess is that it's a combination of 'this is really quite different from what we're used to doing' and 'most of us don't trust Orange Lantern all that much.'
 
"I can change his desires. Rehabilitation through mind control. I could try making him the perfect Orange Lantern. That would be far more useful than having him sit in a cell for the rest of his life."
Yea... Someone needs to nip this particular line of thinking in the butt... Fast...

Because mind control ends nowhere good.
 
Yea... Someone needs to nip this particular line of thinking in the butt... Fast...

Because mind control ends nowhere good.
Ah, yes, of course. Far better to lock people in a cage for their entire life; a choice between "mind control or prison" is clearly completely unacceptable and horrifying.
 
My guess is that it's a combination of 'this is really quite different from what we're used to doing' and 'most of us don't trust Orange Lantern all that much.'

And off the top of my head the only superhero in DC who it would actually be a worthwhile use of their time and capabilities dealing with a space fleet would be the Veteran, who is an actual general who has experience commanding troops.

Dealing with a space fleet would take time and effort to learn to do well, time and effort best spent by people who don't have the unusual skills or abilities to be a superhero.
 
Abin Sur agreed to the point of co-founding the Indigo Tribe oh wait...

Also is it still "mind control" if you re-write once and leave it? Same end result as psychotherapy, just cutting out the endless months spent on couches.

Is it still mind control to rewrite someone's brain by force into the exact pattern you want and they don't? Yes, yes it is :V
 
And off the top of my head the only superhero in DC who it would actually be a worthwhile use of their time and capabilities dealing with a space fleet would be the Veteran, who is an actual general who has experience commanding troops.

Dealing with a space fleet would take time and effort to learn to do well, time and effort best spent by people who don't have the unusual skills or abilities to be a superhero.

There's also Alpha Centurion, who has his own spaceship and is working for the Alliance of the Just, if I recall the names properly. He should have at least some experience with spaceships and space fleets, I think.
 
Is it still mind control to rewrite someone's brain by force into the exact pattern you want and they don't? Yes, yes it is :V

That's why you should give them a choice of two options:

1: We will re-write your brain so that you don't do all that horrible stuff again.
2: We will quickly and painlessly kill you.

... oh, right, and because people really like this option for some unfathomable reason:

3: We will lock you in a concrete box with terrible food, constant violations of privacy, and ever-present danger from guards and other people in the box. You will stay in the box until death by old age, which will probably take a few decades assuming no one stabs you.
 
That's why you should give them a choice of two options:

1: We will re-write your brain so that you don't do all that horrible stuff again.
2: We will quickly and painlessly kill you.

... oh, right, and because people really like this option for some unfathomable reason:

3: We will lock you in a concrete box with terrible food, constant violations of privacy, and ever-present danger from guards and other people in the box. You will stay in the box until death by old age, which will probably take a few decades assuming no one stabs you.
Mostly because in the third case if/when you come back later and realize that you made a big mistake you can open the box and let the person out again; 1 and 2 are a bit more final.

My guess is that it's a combination of 'this is really quite different from what we're used to doing' and 'most of us don't trust Orange Lantern all that much.'
You know what else was quite different from what they're used to doing? Cleaning up all the dead children from Klairon's little dick move, which should still be fresh in their minds as it happened a bit over a year ago IIRC. How many global mass casualty incidents do there need to be before the Justice League starts to realize that they need to take the ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure approach to some threats? Indications are that the answer for most of them is "more than one."
 
And off the top of my head the only superhero in DC who it would actually be a worthwhile use of their time and capabilities dealing with a space fleet would be the Veteran, who is an actual general who has experience commanding troops.
In this setting, 'The Veteran' was what they nearly rebranded Captain Nazi as.
That's why you should give them a choice of two options:

1: We will re-write your brain so that you don't do all that horrible stuff again.
2: We will quickly and painlessly kill you.

... oh, right, and because people really like this option for some unfathomable reason:

3: We will lock you in a concrete box with terrible food, constant violations of privacy, and ever-present danger from guards and other people in the box. You will stay in the box until death by old age, which will probably take a few decades assuming no one stabs you.
More or less what the SI who ended up in the Warhammer setting did to the crew of a Black Ark.
 
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I step around him. "Hey, Amon!" He looks up, his face calm but his thoughts murderous. "Given the choice, would you choose serving your prison sentence, or having me rewrite your value systems and letting you go?"

"I'd choose for you to die screaming."

"That wasn't one of the options."

He makes an obscene gesture with his right hand and then turns away.

I shrug. Okay then.
Huh, so this version of OL will get along pretty well with the Indigo Lanterns if and/or when they exist.

Or that was just a throwaway joke because this guy's father is usually credited as either the founder or the inspiration for the Indigo Corps. Kinda hard to tell with this story.
 
Huh, so this version of OL will get along pretty well with the Indigo Lanterns if and/or when they exist.

Or that was just a throwaway joke because this guy's father is usually credited as either the founder or the inspiration for the Indigo Corps. Kinda hard to tell with this story.

An Indigo Lantern has already shown up in story, though I don't recall the name of the episode- the same one where Paragon meets the Guardians.
Given that the Lantern was apparently a villain in DC comics canon (Professor Ub'x or something similar), I believe the Indigo Tribe's brainwashing-criminal MO is evident in WtR continuity too.
 
Something I feel a number of people are forgetting...

Mind control always ends up broken.
 
Something I feel a number of people are forgetting...

Mind control always ends up broken.
Then you're using some shitty mind control, and you need to improve it or find a new technique.

That, or the metaphysics of your universe are terrible and you should probably go find a new one. Looking at you, DC.
 
There's also Alpha Centurion, who has his own spaceship and is working for the Alliance of the Just, if I recall the names properly. He should have at least some experience with spaceships and space fleets, I think.

Experience with space ships, yes, but unless Zoat changed things (which is certainly his prerogative), I doubt they gave him much experience with waging war in outer space.

You see, Alpha Centurion is an unwitting quisling for an alien invasion, ala Blue Beetle.

The difference is that instead of an unwitting sleeper agent, he's a PR move for cultural assimilation. "See how cool we are? We gave you a superhero! Now be good little barbarians and join our glorious Space Roman Empire," the "or else" unsaid, because if the carrot doesn't work they intend to beat humanity into submission with the stick.

Fortunately the alien they left on Earth to prepare for the invasion went native, he decided that humans deserve better than conquest by an empire that was a corrupt shadow of what it used to be.

The comics, it has a weird set up, perhaps the Green Lanterns have a wary eye on them too, because Alpha Centurion in the comics was given tech that allows him to go toe to toe with Superman. They did not give Alpha Centurion their good tech, so the non expendable schmucks have power armor that would make them more powerful than Superman. Yet they expand by preying upon primitive worlds.

When you can make your grunts more powerful than Superman, you shouldn't have to rely on subterfuge to deal with a planet in which bows and arrows is state of the art technology.
 
1: We will re-write your brain so that you don't do all that horrible stuff again.
2: We will quickly and painlessly kill you.

To be perfectly honest, after they re-write your brain, they've already killed you.

You're not you any longer...just a meat puppet walking around to someone else's programing.
 
To be perfectly honest, after they re-write your brain, they've already killed you.

You're not you any longer...just a meat puppet walking around to someone else's programing.
Well... eh. Kinda, maybe, maybe not.

First, how much did they actually change? There's gotta be a threshold somewhere, a amount of change beyond which you can be considered a new person. I mean, you wouldn't consider someone a completely different person if a dastardly villain altered your mind so that you no longer like yogurt, would you?

For the second part, in a figurative sense, kinda yeah. Assuming it's not a continuous sort of mind control, you aren't being actively controlled, but you have had your mind altered to something by someone else. I mean, hopefully with the simple goal of removing whatever bit made you do that horrible thing, with a minimum of other changes and done in a publicly-verifiable manner, but still, it's reprogramming. It's definitely a massive violation of personal autonomy, privacy, etc etc.

But the thing is, at that point you're already more-or-less willing to kill the person. At least, you're willing to imprison them, and how is life imprisonment meaningfully better than death, aside from the fact that it's technically reversible. Forget about 'quality' of life, it's basically decades of borderline torture. And you can't reverse time, so congrats, you proved their innocence 50 years later... well, guess you'll just have to live without those 50 years.

Mind reading-and-editing techniques would both allow you to harm someone the least while also achieving the goal of rehabilitation/removal of threat to society. If you kill them, they die, because people die if they're killed. If you put them in prison, they die a long while later and they're tortured for the entire duration, so it's even worse than dying. But mind-control would plausibly allow you to harm them less than outright death, because some of them is still there afterwards. And if they disagree, and think that it would be worse than death to have a goody-two-shoes copy of them running around... well, that's why you give them the choice of death instead.

And the very same techniques you use to read-and-change their mind would also let you determine if they're really guilty, or narrow down the possibility of their innocence to "someone kidnapped them and altered their mind to look exactly like a crazy axe murderer!"
 
Did he feel he should have at least given it a token effort or something? Honestly, I hope we never see Amon Sur again, cause he was nothing but a contemptible coward with daddy issues.

He might have wanted to experiment. After all, there are lots and lots of people who he's going to kill, such as the Reach - if he can reliably mind control people into being perfect Orange Lanterns then he can kill his enemies with his enemies. Efficiency!

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Regarding the Justice League's hesitancy to accept a fleet of warships, it's probably because they're trying really hard to not conquer the world. As is, they can be stopped if they try it. If they control the orbitals with a space fleet of warships then it's a hopeless cause to oppose them.
 
Ah, yes, of course. Far better to lock people in a cage for their entire life; a choice between "mind control or prison" is clearly completely unacceptable and horrifying.

Mind controlled prisoners are useful to you. Caged prisoners are not. This creates a much bigger incentive to abuse the mind control process than the imprisonment process.
 
Mind controlled prisoners are useful to you. Caged prisoners are not. This creates a much bigger incentive to abuse the mind control process than the imprisonment process.
So the solution to potential abuse of the system is to abuse the people in the system instead?

Why not just take the people who abuse the system, and put them in the torture-box, and keep using the better system for everyone else?
 
I have a question. Weren't the Dolman gates, supposed to have difficulty reaching past the orbit of the moon? How did Paul set up one that could reach Alter Clemetia to pull souls through for Hades to judge?
 

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