mishie
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Eh, to be completely honest it kinda shows that you're new to this, especially with how you're characterizing some of the characters. But at the same time you've got a solid foundation of actually decent writing so learning how to not fuck up characters too much is something that will come with time and just learning how to write characters that you might not be too familiar with .