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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by Mr Zoat, Jan 27, 2019.

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  1. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    Heck, there was an Elseworld story that had an Aladdin-like premise with the Green Lantern.
     
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  2. Cuchulin

    Cuchulin Versed in the lewd.

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    The story of Aladdin was basically where they got the idea for Green Lantern.
     
  3. Old Knife

    Old Knife Not too sore, are you?

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    On one hand he's a real person.
    On the other hand he owns the dreams of being the most powerful evil wizard in the Disneyverse.

    Does this mean he's recruitable?
     
  4. RichardWhereat

    RichardWhereat Aia airëa Fëanáro.

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    That link goes to some sort of character from 2011 onwards, but everyone knows DC stopped making comics in 2011.
     
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  5. Stsword

    Stsword Versed in the lewd.

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    Making ring based supers seemed to be all the rage back in 1940.

    Fawcett had Diamond Jack, a magic ring that like Tim Kelly's Eye had divine origins as the eye of a god's statue, and Boy Wizard, who despite his moniker has scientific powers based on his scientist parent's child endangerment.
     
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  6. Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    Thank you, corrected.
     
  7. Coltsguy

    Coltsguy Colts fan. Anime fan. Breast and back fan.

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    *grabs a bystander and points at this volume*

    References! References everywhere!
     
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  8. theaceoffire

    theaceoffire Versed in the lewd.

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    I miss Gilbert godfreed... And despite the many things he did over his life, he will finally always be an annoying parent in my heart.
     
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  9. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    We all do.
     
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  10. Aelyx

    Aelyx It is I, Q, who are you?

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    Funnily enough, he'd probably make a decent Orange Lantern.
     
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  11. rkyeun

    rkyeun Cabbitus Maximus

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    Excuse me.
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    No complaining about ring-based supers.
     
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  12. Windona

    Windona Beetle Queen of Crackshipping

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    So, we're placing bets on Vizer Jafar? I place mine on 'decent but definitely with a clever/unscrupulous edge'. Though depending on the situation him wanting to overthrow the caliph might not be a bad thing.
     
  13. Bud-E

    Bud-E Stand up so I can push you down!

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    The magical girl powers in Madoka Magica are more gem based than anything the Soul Gems just turn into rings so they are easier to carry around. Also anytime a magical girl uses a lot of power the rings turn back into the Soul Gems or they transform.
     
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  14. Stsword

    Stsword Versed in the lewd.

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    And where exactly in the text you quoted did you see a complaint?

    Which one? Diamond Jack? Who by the by I always have the toughest time looking up because I keep wanting to remember his name as Blackjack.

    Or the teen genius Boy Wizard?
     
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  15. Aelyx

    Aelyx It is I, Q, who are you?

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    Meant to say Aladdin.
     
  16. Stsword

    Stsword Versed in the lewd.

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    Yes, a guy who has been hoarding supernatural power for at least 300 hundred years does sound like a guy who is halfway there to being an Orange Lantern already.
     
  17. Threadmarks: False Dawn (part 19)
    Mr Zoat

    Mr Zoat Dedicated ragequitter

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    8th November 2012
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    "Blue Lantern?"

    I frown as a group of guards escort Alan and Sanderson into the drawing room The Demon and I were politely escorted to following our audience.

    "Hey, Orange Lantern. Having fun?"

    "I think I might have headed off a potential problem. And I've found out that what we're attempting is suicide. You?"

    "I got abducted and locked up in a dungeon while they sucked my dreams out."



    "I trust that you've resolved matters to your satisfaction?"

    "They dragged the people away in chains. Their boss is explaining himself to the Caliph now." Alan looks around the room. "No sign of Doctor Mist?"

    "If any of us could navigate a magic city, I'd assume it would be him."

    Sanderson perks up a little. "I can probably do that now."

    "Now?"

    "I made a deal with Morpheus."

    There's a sharp intake of breath through my lips, and the lips of… The courtier who brought them in, who after a moment nervously walks towards him.

    "Sir, did you say that you made a 'deal' with the Lord of Dreams?"

    "Yeah, I guess that's kind of a big deal for you guys, huh?"

    "Could this humble one ask what the terms of your deal were?"

    "Sure. The Dream will give me prophetic visions in exchange for living through them. Oh, and I can get visions of other places in the Dream and teleport to them."

    I blink. "Does that include the Tower of Fate?"

    "I dunno. I don't know what the Tower looks like." He shrugs awkwardly. "I never visited. Salem wasn’t exactly a day trip."

    "Okay, but-." I glance over to where the courier is dashing out of the room with one hand on his turban. I suppose that if the Caliph wasn't informed of that fact before now it does warrant a bit of haste. "Ah, but what exactly are the limitations? Can you take people with you? Because I wasn’t exaggerating earlier when I said that everyone I asked said it was suicide."

    "I don't know. I haven't tried much with it yet."

    "Okay, well, try teleporting back to the graveyard. That way we'll know whether you can go between regions of the Dream or not."

    He looks to Alan to check whether that's a good idea or not. Alan considers for a moment, then nods slowly. "Yeah, that sounds like a good idea. If you can just teleport us inside the Tower-. Paul, you've got recordings of the inside of the Tower, don't you?"

    "No, but I can generate three dimensional images from my memory. I'm… Not sure what it looks like from outside, though."

    "Why would we want to get outside?"

    "I'm not sure if the interior exists from the Dream."

    "Would Mist know?"

    "I don't know. He'd probably have to look at it. Constantine?"

    He leans back, folding his arms across his chest. "Oh, remembered I exist? How about getting this seal removed?"

    "How about getting the Caliph to tell us how to activate it?"

    "That's cruel and unusual punishment. What happened to being recognised as a person?"

    "We're not in America and I'm not an American. And you're an escaped supervillain. You're still at large on the condition that you actually help us resolve this situation. In case I wasn't clear before: we're not friends or colleagues."

    "Hey." I turn to Sanderson, who's still here for some reason. "The Constitution doesn't ban 'Cruel and Unusual Punishment' because the Founding Fathers just felt like it. It's banned because it's so immoral that no one should ever do it, whether they're American or not."

    "I'll be sure to remind Zauriel of that next time I find myself in Hell."

    "I don't know who that is, but someone else doing it doesn't make it right for you to do it."

    The Demon raises his eyebrows, clearly pleased at the situation. Alan looks a little awkward, but I know he agrees with Sanderson.

    "Do you feel that it's cruel and unusual to handcuff normal prisoners?"

    "No, of course not."

    "Demons are able to either tear through or magically subvert normal cuffs. The only things we have to restrain them are magic artefacts or spells. Not all of them work in the way we'd ideally like or as reliably as we'd like, but so far courts have found that having a restraint that actually works is more important that having a restraint that makes the prisoner comfortable. It's like how Belle Reve collars have the capacity to electrocute their prisoners. Unusual, yes, but not 'cruel' because it's actually required. The Demon Constantine has already escaped Belle Reve. As such, a spell that cripples him when activated is legally proportionate and necessary."

    Sanderson shifts uncomfortably. "O-kay, I guess. But could you sound a little less enthusiastic about it?"

    I nod. "If it makes you feel better. Are you going to try teleporting now?"

    "Yes." He takes a moment to calm himself, then-.

    That's… Instant Transmission. He even did the little shimmer thing that Goku does before he vanishes.

    Damn it. I'm going to have to find a new joke.

    There's another shimmer as he reappears.

    "It worked. They're sitting around camp fires and telling stories."

    "Oh yeah?" Alan raises his eyebrows. "What are they saying?"

    "Rrrruh. Aaaagh. Things like that." He takes in our confusion. "I can tell that they make sense to each other. I've just got no idea what they're saying."

    "Honoured guests!" The courtier from earlier runs back in, looking a little dishevelled. "Honoured guests." He comes to a halt. "His Excellency believes that he can resolve your issues here to your satisfaction, and can ease your path to the great storm."

    "He believes that he can get us out of the way before anything else goes wrong."

    "… It is impolite to argue with guests."

    "Then we would be delighted to hear what he has to say."
     
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  18. Bud-E

    Bud-E Stand up so I can push you down!

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    No you don't Paul, Sandy's power only really works while he's inside the Dreaming and I highly doubt Sandy knows what Dragon Ball Z is.
     
  19. Bloodalchemy

    Bloodalchemy Versed in the lewd.

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    This guy has had his job for a long time. That is not something you can think up until you're in the shower two weeks later.
     
  20. Darko

    Darko Connoisseur.

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    "we want"

    "happened"
     
  21. Handlewithcare

    Handlewithcare Versed in the lewd.

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    I like Sanderson. He's a fun foil to Paul.

    And Paul, I get you don't like him, but constantly antagonising the demon isn't very productive.
     
  22. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    You mean the person who had nothing to do with you being in hell?
     
  23. NightmareWarden

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    I wonder how often people dream about Dragon Ball these days.
     
  24. Ngamer11

    Ngamer11 Experienced.

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    Who exactly did Sandy see when he teleported?
     
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  25. Signaller

    Signaller Know what you're doing yet?

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    Until Eris told Paul off, I wasn't sure if DBZ existed within the WTR universe.
     
  26. Xmaster3000

    Xmaster3000 Know what you're doing yet?

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    Dream zombies, from earlier in the chapter.
     
  27. Whenever Possible

    Whenever Possible Versed in the lewd.

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    I assume that Dream does, though, and set up the aesthetics of his gift with that in mind.
     
  28. Chojin Patriarch

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    Ah, time to catch up, and see what kind of trouble each party member has been getting up to in the absence of the rest. I bet there'll be a few surprised looks once OL hears what happened to Alan...

    So, the Caliph is considering your suggestion, then? It's certainly a lot less disruptive than having a magical city pop out of nowhere right in the middle of Iraq...

    ...Oooh, that's a loud silence.

    An impressive show of restraint from OL. I suspect if Alan said it wasn't resolved, there'd be a conspicuous lack of orange in the room right now... Plus some very unhappy people, including the Caliph... Since OL tends to get a bit noisy.

    Then again, he may show up as they go to leave, complaining that he spent all that time wandering around lost and none of them thought to look for him...

    And OL feels a sudden need to facepalm, hard. Give in to it, OL. You know you want to.

    I'm amazed he got any of that out without his voice breaking in fear and horror.

    If only to gauge how big the blast radius will be when it goes wrong?

    Ha! Trust OL to consider the min-max possibilities.

    No, no, simply dying is the best probable result. I'm sure you got a few 'erased from existence as if you had never been' responses too, right?

    Well, one way or another, Sandy's going to be doing some training, huh?

    I mean, the teleportation could be entirely conceptual. He's only been taking short hops with it so far.

    Which makes for some real dimensional fuckery when it transits in and out, I suppose.

    The Demon has been rather quiet, hasn't he? Hope he's not sulking too hard over the mystical binding... :D

    Hard to go past a classic like chanting a religious mantra under your breath. Worked for Tang Sanzang, when he needed to make Sun Wukong play nice.

    Think of it as a work release program.

    Now, now, OL. Don't get grumpy because the young man has principles not aligned with yours...

    You're outvoted, OL. It happens.

    ...OL, are you seriously trying to defend yourself? Great, now I want to facepalm. :oops:

    All true, but you were seriously rolling across the fine line between 'sassy anti-hero' and 'dick'.

    Yes, let's put that rubbish behind us. Back to the experimentation! :rolleyes:

    For visual reference: over an hour of Instant Transmission scenes. Enjoy. :p

    Pfft. Like anyone in your circle of colleagues would know what it was.

    ...What would the stories involve? Surprising mundane moments? :p

    Anything to get them out of explosion range of his city, I suppose?

    In other words: 'You're right, but I'd probably lose my head if I said it... Literally, mind you!' :p

    Honestly, I'm not surprised the Caliph has had such a sudden change of heart. Deals with the Endless have a long history of going wrong sooner or later, so getting the unlucky fellow out of his city is an entirely sensible precaution. At any rate, it sounds like they'll be done with this little side-trip soon, and on their way to their real destination. ...Once they collect Doctor Mist, anyway... :confused:
     
  29. Vaermina

    Vaermina Well worn.

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    Not just with it in mind, but the express knowledge that it would annoy LePaul.
     
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  30. DAT_NOOB

    DAT_NOOB Accused of writing in a far away land

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    (replying to Vaermina)

    That's actually a good point of all the angels Zauriel is probably the one that had the least say in whether Paul was sent to hell and likely argued against it.
     
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