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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

Not Jade, of course. She's starting her training-. Well, her training placement assessments. Since the Darkstars take in people with a wide range of backgrounds and knowledge bases they have developed a system of individualised curricula. By local standards Jade's training is extremely lopsided: her actual combat skills and knowledge of tactics are highly advanced while her technical knowledge lags far behind. I know that she'll manage, but I am.. aware that her pride might take a hit when commandos from allied worlds start joining up and passing out faster than she does.
Belated realization regarding this. Is Paul factoring for how Jade modified her brain during her brief stint with an Orange Ring, which I remember including accelerated learning among the benefits, or is she just that far behind?
 
Belated realization regarding this. Is Paul factoring for how Jade modified her brain during her brief stint with an Orange Ring, which I remember including accelerated learning among the benefits, or is she just that far behind?
She's probably just that far behind. But she comes from a pretty primitive planet, so I'd hardly blame her for it.
 
Sorry, I have unfuness enlightenment, and as such jokes usually pass me by as I stare mercilessly at them to scare them off.
'Heavily warded' means that it has powerful wards.
'Heaviest warded' means that it is very heavy and has some wards.
It's a mountain, a type of object known for being fairly heavy.
 
Hoard (part 2)
11th January
09:32 GMT


"You want me to what?"

Hinon huffs, putting her newly completed personal lantern down on her work bench. It's… A little better than mine.

"I want you to come to Earth and make sure that my techniques haven't caused-."

She turns around to glare at me. "It was a rhetorical question. I have already assured you that your teleportation does not cause any sort of 'spillage' which could affect those around you. If you are not prepared to take my word for it, why would a 'field trip' suddenly make me more authoritative?"

"It's not just my teleportation. Larfleeze drew visitors from all across this galaxy. You've spent more time with them than I have. You know-."

"Yes, they were drawn to Okaara by the Light Fountain. Which has never been on Earth."

"But I connected to it to draw the Ophidian to me. She spent months inside my personal lantern. A personal lantern that wasn't in the best condition when I took possession of it." She doesn't look convinced. "And given what else is on Earth, I don't think asking you to take a couple of days to check the place over is all that unreasonable."

"If anything, that would make it less dangerous."

"Really? Because we've got an unusually active magic system and Dream of the Endless was literally trapped on our planet for years."

"Hmmm."

"And once you've checked Earth, you'll be able to say for certain that everywhere else is safe as well. Come on; how often do you get to see a location where one of the Endless was trapped against their will?"

"Maltusians don't dream."

"All Maltusians, or just the ones who used to be Guardians?"

Her eyes narrow. "You know."

"I know that Killala cheated on Dream with the embodiment of Sto-Oa, resulting in the Endless deciding against romantic relationships with mortals. I know that he used to be petty, but I hadn't realised that there was an ongoing penalty for her actions."

"There are Maltusians who don't know about that."

"I don't want to insult your education system, but isn't that somewhat important? Anyway, look, Dream's a lot less vengeful than he used to be. If you want to regain the ability, you might be able to talk him around."

"Regain? I've never had it."

"Alright, gain, then. Hinon, how often does someone your age get a genuinely novel experience?"

She turns away, her right hand waving to send the lantern she just created… Somewhere. I note that she's still wearing John's old ring. "Is this impeding your operational effectiveness?"

"I.. suppose? A little. An entity which may or may not have been called Boss Smiley made certain observations about my cavalier attitude to my own powers, so I've been-."

"You've been cutting down, which is probably exactly what he wanted."

"And I can stop doing that just as soon as you make a site visit." She picks up a device which.. looks a little like a tuning fork. "Hinon, what do you want out of this relationship?"

She half turns back, looking a little distracted. "What?"

"I suggested building a Corps because I thought that was what you wanted. Either.. what a Corps could do for you, or just so you could get one over on your peers. But the Guardians have an ideological attachment to the green light. I never asked if you had one to the orange light. In fact… If anything, I assume that you don't. And yet, you attached yourself to the Orange Central Power Battery."

"Mm. Better me than someone else."

"Is that it? You don't actually want this?"

She puts the tuning fork down and turns back to face me. "Why are you suddenly concerned about it?"

"This is part of what Boss Smiley was saying. I did this to you, a member of a species worshipped in significant parts of this galaxy, an individual whose juniors make new planets to resettle evacuees so often that individual instances aren't considered significant. I'm.. worried that I'm blundering through the universe… And I'd like to stop. Controller Hinon, what do you want? Because if it wasn't this-."

"This is perfectly adequate."

I shrug, shaking my head. "Adequate wouldn't be enough for me, and I don't think it should be for you either."

"How very thoughtful. Are you going to keep this up until I say 'yes'?"

"This isn't about-. Appa Ali Apsa came to Earth once. Just spent a week or so driving around with Lantern Jordan and Mister Queen."

She frowns. "He.. did?"

"Yes. I'm not exactly sure why. I think the official reason was to do an assessment of Earth society, given that Lantern Jordan only got recruited because Lantern Sur was dying and desperate and we didn't have FTL yet. But given what else I know about the Guardians, I can't help but wonder if he was checking up on other things as well."

"Appa is the one Guardian I might genuinely believe would take a holiday." She frowns faintly, her eyes growing slightly distant. Then she sighs. "Very well. Since this is so important to you, I will accompany you back to Earth. And… Test things until your late onset paranoia has been ameliorated."

"Thank you."

"Will Mister Scott be there?"

"Ah… As far as I know. He hasn't.. said anything about leaving Earth."

"I should probably check him over as well."

"You like younger men, do you?"

"I… Beg your pardon?"

"Well… There's nothing wrong with that. You're both single adults, and I'm sure he's a fascinating case study on the results of long term light exposure in a high magic environment."

"Are you implying that I wish to mate with him or that I wish to study him in detail?"

I bend my legs, leaning in slightly. "Is there a difference for a Maltusian?"

"Yes there most certainly-." She stops, frowning more deeply. "Hm. There used to be. I admit that as I am now, a really thorough investigation would most likely represent the most intimate thing I've done since…" She looks up. "Since I checked your tattoos. Yes, that was it."

"Abandoned for an older man." I hold out my right hand. "Do you think your robes will survive a trip through the Honden of Avarice?"

"I suppose we'll find out."
 
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"Really? Because we've got an unusually active magic system and Dream of the Endless was literally trapped on our planet for years."
Huh, he almost yelled there. Was the entire second half intended to be Italicised?

...resulting in the Endless decided against romantic relationships with mortals.
...resulting in the Endless deciding against romantic relationships with mortals.
(Tense mismatch)

"I.. suppose? A little. An entity which may or may not have been called Boss Smiley made certain observations about my cavalier attitude to my own powers, so I've been-."
Don't forget to mention it occurred inside a virtual space generated by a magical mental reprogramming device... That could be relevant... :rolleyes:

"Mm. Better me than someone else."
"Had to be me. Someone else might have gotten it wrong."

"Will Mister Scott be there?"
Heh. Watch out, Diana, a potential rival appears!

"You like younger men, do you?"
Dammit, Paul, you can't just out and ask that sort of thing! :oops:

"Are you implying that I wish to mate with him or that I wish to study him in detail?"
Both? Both. Both is good.

Heh, some nice teasing of the eons-old super-scientist. Let's hope this trip doesn't go poorly for her...
 
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Hm ... so the reincarnating hawk woman was once Thanagarian? And is also a different hawkwoman from the current Thanagarian one with the same name? I thought she was an Egyptian priestess who found a Thanagarian ship or something? Is the same thing true of the reincarnating hawk man? Don't quite remember if Zoat said anything along these lines beforehand.

Zoat got creative with the Hawks.

The reincarnating Egyptian Princess Hawk Girl was a Thanagarian that crashed on Earth and married into local royalty instead of her husband's cousin as per the comics, so she's a former thanagarian with magical experience, and Zoat made her current incarnation the retconn Hawkwoman Sharon Parker.
 
Grayven has the spine Oh El seems to be lacking.

And he was mind raped and took months to recover.

That mere words have affected Oh El so much is ridiculous, unless in Worm terms, there is some Master effect going on?

Can't we have some Bounty Hunter after Oh El or something?

Like Boss Smiley told Lobo that Paul killed Dolphins and have him several hundreds millions in space dough to kill him?
 
Grayven has the spine Oh El seems to be lacking.

And he was mind raped and took months to recover.

That mere words have affected Oh El so much is ridiculous, unless in Worm terms, there is some Master effect going on?

Can't we have some Bounty Hunter after Oh El or something?

Like Boss Smiley told Lobo that Paul killed Dolphins and have him several hundreds millions in space dough to kill him?

You know, if you want to be the Vaermina for the Paragon side then all you have to do is say so. There's no need for this run around.
 
You know, if you want to be the Vaermina for the Paragon side then all you have to do is say so. There's no need for this run around.
Eh, IMO there's a much better argument for OL being overly cautious. He's been transitioning people around everywhere for something like a year, if there were going to be acute symptoms they would've shown up, and another week or two of exposure almost certainly wouldn't make any chronic symptoms substantially worse.

Boss Smiley spoke to him once and he managed to play OL like a violin, and he doesn't even realize it.
 
I was under the impression that Alan wasn't interested in romantic attachments since his wife died.
Alan was in his eighties when Rose died.
Grayven has the spine Oh El seems to be lacking.

And he was mind raped and took months to recover.

That mere words have affected Oh El so much is ridiculous, unless in Worm terms, there is some Master effect going on?
Grayven's shaker power is Soul of a New God. It is reasonably well understood by both New Genesis and Apokolips. He knows that it won't do anything he finds abhorant.

The SI's shaker power is entirely novel. No one in the universe knows exactly what it can do. So two weeks after his attention was directly drawn to a potential problem, he's having an expert check things over.
Can't we have some Bounty Hunter after Oh El or something?

Like Boss Smiley told Lobo that Paul killed Dolphins and have him several hundreds millions in space dough to kill him?
Boss Smiley doesn't communicate with people like that, and while Lobo would take a contract on the SI there isn't currently anyone in a position to offer him one with the desire to do so.
 
"And given what else is on Earth, I don't think asking you to take a couple of days to check the place over is all that unreasonable."
I think this is the most subtle Paul gets this whole conversation, tip toeing around the words "White Light Entity".
"Really? Because we've got an unusually active magic system and Dream of the Endless was literally trapped on our planet for years."

"Hmmm."

"And once you've checked Earth, you'll be able to say for certain that everywhere else is safe as well. Come on; how often do you get to see a location one of the Endless was trapped against their will?"
Oh, Earth has a LOT of attractions. It's a cross between a intergalactic carnival and a weapons depot.

Heck, Destruction is semi-retired there. Which... might explain a lot, actually.

Also: Come on; how often do you get to see a location where one of the Endless was trapped against their will?
Or maybe
Come on; how often do you get to see a location one of the Endless was trapped against their will at?

Her eyes narrow. "You know."

"I know that Killala cheated on Dream with the embodiment of Sto-Oa, resulting in the Endless deciding against romantic relationships with mortals. I know that he used to be petty, but I hadn't realised that there was an ongoing penalty for her actions."

"There are Maltusians who don't know about that."
You know, that's something I really like about Paul. He doesn't give a flip. He'll name drop someone who less that a hundred living people remember, or tell a story about something that hasn't happened yet. No one even wants to bother calling him on it anymore.

"I don't want to insult your education system, but isn't that somewhat important? Anyway, look, Dream's a lot less vengeful than he used to be. If you want to regain the ability, you might be able to talk him around."
Do you think Paul just wants a way to ask Dream about B.S. being right about the Garden being Earths anchor point to the Realm of Dream?

Controller Hinon, what do you want?
I love it every time he pulls out this line.

"How very thoughtful. Are you going to keep this up until I say 'yes'?"

"This isn't about-. Appa Ali Apsa came to Earth once. Just spent a week or so driving around with Lantern Jordan and Mister Queen."
Of course! He wants this, after all.

"Will Mister Scott be there?"

"Ah… As far as I know. He hasn't.. said anything about leaving Earth."

"I should probably check him over as well."

"You like younger men, do you?"
And the spit take moment. Glorious.
Thank you for the chapter, Mr. Zoat!
 
Boss Smiley doesn't communicate with people like that, and while Lobo would take a contract on the SI there isn't currently anyone in a position to offer him one with the desire to do so.

Probably because Lobo tends to kill those people that contract him, granted in all those cases is because they tried to screw him over, but still.

And is only a matter of time until the Reach puts a contract on him. A contract that Lobo might go after if he needs the money.
 
That mere words have affected Oh El so much is ridiculous, unless in Worm terms, there is some Master effect going on?

Actually, we do know that there was some kind of master effect going on, if OL was affected or not is something we are less sure off, but we absolutely know boss smiley was attempting to influence his mind pretty actively.
 
Actually, we do know that there was some kind of master effect going on, if OL was affected or not is something we are less sure off, but we absolutely know boss smiley was attempting to influence his mind pretty actively.
Doesn't enlightenment mean that even if something is powerful enough to screw with his head, he'd still know it was messed with, yes?
Real masters of manipulation can jerk you around by saying things that are reasonable and true at just the right moment.
 

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